Faith- A foursome ss chapter 27 pg 39 - Page 6

Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update plz add some more virika moments
Posted: 11 years ago
nice update!:)
 
they are all so cute!
Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
thanks for pm 😊
Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update yh do add more virika scenes n do make it longer
Posted: 11 years ago

It was so good cute specially virman convo
Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome Update. 👏

Love it ❤️

Thanks for the PM.

VirMan Loves Each other and ViriKa also love it other...soo nice

Pz continues soon

and love their lovely conversation
Posted: 11 years ago
loved da update its beautiful
Posted: 11 years ago

Chapter 4

Lunch got over and the foursome were chatting in the sitting area.

Manvi: Di I want ice cream.

Jeevika: What's the big deal in that, In the fridge there is a box of Chocolate ice cream. I'll get it.

Manvi: Di I don't want that ice cream. I want to go outside and eat.

Virat: Yeah di it's a great idea. What say bhai.

Viren: It has to be a great idea after all my choti has given.

Manvi: Hayye my sweet bhiaya  (hugs viren)

Viren(hugs her back): My lovely behna.

Virat: Ok fine I'll tell the driver to drop us to an ice cream palour.

They all reach the ice cream palour.

Virat: Di you'll take strawberry, bhai app blue berry and manvi you raseberry right.

Manvi&Virika: Right

They were eating ice cream

Virat: Manvi I wanted to ask you something.

Manvi: Kya hua.

Virat: We have a party in the college tomorrow you want to go I mean di and bhai won't be there.

(Ever since that accident the foursome had gone every where together)

Manvi: You want to go.

Virat: Atcually not so much.

Manvi: Then why did you ask me.

virat: because I wanted to know what you wanted to do.

Virika: How sweet.

Viren: Tomorrow is Saturday. Lets roam around.

Jeevika: Where can we go?

Virat: We will think about that some other time.

They move out from the place.

While they were walking towards the car.

Guy 1: Hi sweetheart red mein bari hot lag rahi ho (jeevika is wearing red) (viren makes a fist)

Guy2: Leave her look at the other one.

Guy3: Saahi black wali red se better hai(Virat made a fist)

(Guy1 and 2 try grabbing jeevika and manvi and they scream)

Virat catches a guys hand and so does viren and punches them hard on the face . Viren punches the guy in his stomach and virat starts kicking them both of them being careful not to hurt one another well it wasn't that difficult since they knew the brotherly feeling that was there when then touched one another.

Viren: Jeevika, manvi

Both come and hug them. Jeevika feels something wet on viren's hand

Jeevika(touching it): Is this blood.

Viren: maybe a little.

Jeevika: Viren you should be careful. All because of me.

Manvi:di don't blame yourself it's my fault also. Virat you also might have got hurt.

Virat: Nahi, come lets to the car

Manvi(Caught virat by the arm): Don't lie to me.

Virat: Kuch nahi hua

Virat: Kya

Manvi: Saachi

Virat: Mucchi

Manvi: You know something.

Virat: Kya

Manvi: you are very bad at lying when it comes to me, bhai and di. Now tell me where did you get hurt.

Touches virat's face.

Manvi: this hurt feels very deep virat.

Virat: Nothing to worry maanu by the way we have to go to the doctor aaj humara eye test ka liye

At city hospital

They get a plaster and go for the test. Half an hour after taking the test.

Jeevika: Geet kya hua(Jeevika and geet were very good friends)

Geet: see reports mein everything is fine. Nothing is getting worse. Maanvi you had complain on seeing some white line. Now is it fine.

Manvi: Yeaah it stopped few days back

The foursome reach home. Jeevika and manvi go their rooms.

Virat: I wanted to tell you something

Viren: haan tell me what's the plan

Virat: How did you know I was going to tell you about a plan

Viren: Bhai ha hum dono khoon aur dil dono ka rishta ha humara

Virat: ok so plan suno.

Viren: nice idea bhai.

Virat: I had thought di might be feeling sad that we could not go to the party because you both were not able to come.

Viren: Bhai you really didn't want to go.

Virat: is that something to ask. Bhai you know it's no fun going to a party when we four are not together.

Viren: Accha chal. Wash your face and come down.

Virat goes to his room and opens the tap and is about to splash the water on his face

Viren: virat stop

Virat: Kya hua bhai

Viren: don't splash the water  the bandage will get wet.

Virat: bhai app ko.

Viren: you have the habbit from childhood wait I'll do it for you.

Viren about to put his bandaged hand into the water. Virat catches it.

Virat: You are telling me. Right now you were going to put your whole hand in the water.

Viren: Tumhe kase.

Virat: Bachpan se asi hi ha bhai. Whenever you have to ease my pain you never care about yourself.

Viren: Oye apni di ki thara rona band kar.

Virat: Meri di ka bara mein kuch nahi.

Viren laughs both the brothers hug

Jeeman sisters are in manvi's room

Jeevika: Viren and virat love us so much.

Manvi: Haan di we should do something special for them.

Jeevika: saahi mannu par kya.

Manvi: wohi toh sochna hai.

After a while.

Manvi: Idea

Jeevika: Kya.

Explains her the plan.

Next day in the evening about 8:00 pm

Viren: Virat everything set.

Virat: yes

Jeevika: Maanu saab ready

Manvi: Ready

Jeevika and manvi hear a knock manvi opens the door.

Tarun: Manvi baby virat baba sent this for you and jeevika di viren bhiya sent this for you.Virat bhiya called manvi baby it the right side of the garden and viren bhiya called jeevika di to the left side.

Manvi: di it looks like instead us giving them a surprise they are giving us a surprise.

Jeevika comes out wearing this.

manvi wears this

Manvi comes down wearing this

Both go where they are supposed to

Jeevika: Viren what's all this

Viren: Candel light dinner.

Jeevika blushes.

Viren: Jeevika guess karo what is this place decorated by.

Jeevika: Lavenders

Viren: how did you guess so fast.

Jeevika: because lavenders are my favourite and you had given them to me the first time you said I love you.

Viren: some ones got a sharp memory.did you like the surprise.

Jeevika: loved it

Viren: so my gift

Jeevika kisses viren on the lips

Virat: Manvi Batu is place ka aur tumhare dress ka colour kya ha.

Manvi: pink

Virat: gussed so fast how come.

Manvi: kuynki when I was born and you looked at me for the first time I was wrapped in a pink blanket.

Virat: and

Manvi: and everyone at home says when you were about to kiss my cheek I turned my face and we kissed each on the lips.

Manvi feels virat's breath near her

Virat: there is pink even today

Before manvi  could say anything virat crashed his lips onto hers and kissed her.

Jeeman sisters tell the vadhera brothers to wait.

Viren: Where had you been.

Virat: what took you so long

Manvi gave virat a teddy and jeevika give viren one

Jeeman: Press the stomach.

Bear; I love you

Virat to manvi: I love you too

Viren to jeevika: I love you too.

Hope everyone likes it.

 

Edited by sapphhire - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
That was an extremely sweet part...😳😳...Loved the way Virat and Viren fought with the goons for Manvi and Jeevika...Loved the VV bros part as well...and the candle light dinner and the teddy bear part was also really cute...Achha tell me one thing? won't they ever be cured from this blindness? Anyways please do continue soon and thank you so much for the pm...😊
Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by arhifandebi


That was an extremely sweet part...😳😳...Loved the way Virat and Viren fought with the goons for Manvi and Jeevika...Loved the VV bros part as well...and the candle light dinner and the teddy bear part was also really cute...Achha tell me one thing? won't they ever be cured from this blindness? Anyways please do continue soon and thank you so much for the pm...😊
I'm still planning all that I've not prepared nothing on that part yet. Edited by sapphhire - 11 years ago

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