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810Kankana

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 6:17pm | IP Logged
Hey Frnds, i am  back with my 1st ever OS on our beloved Maaneet. Please read it & do comments on this link   too.Tongue



The Last Letter

 


 

A gloomy morning. Everything seems so very dismal as something wrong has happened. Maan is sitting nearby a dead-body, covered with a red Banarai sari, just like a newly wedded Bride. Maan is staring straight at those beautiful eyes, which are now tightly closed. He looks blank, totally. He is not crying though. Suddenly one rude voice makes him awake.

" Marne wali ka naam kya hai ?"

"G-e-e-t"''''Maan says that word like a numb.

"Yeh aapki Patni thi ? "

"Jee nahi'"

"Aap kah rahe hain inka khun aap hi ne kiya hai''"

"Jee hain"'''.Maan says all these with a vacant expression.

 "Lekin kyun?"

" Kyun key  yeh mere aur meri honewali Patni ke beech aa rahi thi'.maine inhko mana kiya tha, par yeh suni nahi, toh maine inhka khun kar diya." '.Maan completes all these without taking a breath.

" You are under arrest Mr. Maan Singh, '..Miss Geet Handa ko badi hi be-dardi se qatal karne ke jurm men hum aapko giraftar karte hain ''..chaliye, aapko hamare sath Police station chalna padhega."

 

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In the Police Station, Dev meets Maan, he is Maan's lawyer cum friend. Maan says he doesn't need any lawyer as he has already admitted his guilt. Dev just can't believe that his friend Maan can kill his love -Geet. After a while Dev leaves the place as Maan's fiance Ruby enters there with another lawyer.

Ruby- "What's wrong with you Maan, they said you have killed that bitch..!! Why you have done this!"

Maan-"Just shut your bloody mouth & get the hell out of here, I do not want to see your face '"

Ruby's lawyer- "But Maan, hum yahan tumhari madat ke liye aaye hain''.."

Maan- "Mujhe kisiki bhi madat ki zarurat nahi hai''' you get that'.now'leave  ...me'..alone'plzzz.".

Ruby & his lawyer friend depart from there leaving Maan back to his own dream world.

 

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"Geet'''..kya kar rahi ho'..aisa mat karo'.girr jayogii toh'!!" '''.Maan looks tensed as Geet is walking on the parapet of the 10th floor of their College building.

"Toh kya'.agar girr bhi jayun'..aap ho na mujhe sambhalne ke liye'.."

"Kya bachpana hai Geet, plzz utro yahan se'"

"Nahi, pahle aap mujhe yeh batayo..,..key aap mujhse kitnaaa pyaar karte ho''.." '''''..Geet rises up her hand like a kid & accidentally slips her step. At the final moment Maan grabs her all the way & Geet falls down on his arm. Geet holds him tightly. Her eyes are firmly closed. She is shivering literally.

"Daro mat Mishti''.tum meri baahon men ho'" '.Maan whispers into her ears.

Geet slowly opens her eyes, & sees herself on the safe arms of Maan.

She looks into Maan's eyes & says'."batayiye na'.kitna pyaar karte hain aap mujhse".

Maan fixes his eyes on her, & mildly says '.

"jitna pyaar tum mujhse karti ho'.usse thoda kam Mishti'."

"Yeh kya baat huyi''"'..Geet jerks in fake anger'.."utaariye mujhe'."

Maan picks her down slowly.

Geet- "ekbar bolne se hi utaar diya"''Maan looks puzzled up.

'''"aapse na Maan, kuch nahi hota'mere sare friends , aur unke boyfriends , pata nahi ek dusre ko kitni baar 'I love you' kah chuke hain'aur aap', ekbar bhi dhang se mujhe propose tak nahi kiya aapne'.." Geet is getting angry.

Maan- "Mishti, tum jaanti ho na mujhe'main aisi baat o men expert nahi hun'..mujhse nahi hota yeh sab'."

Geet- "Hey Babaji, yeh kaise insaan se pyaar karwa diya mujhe'.jinko toh bas kitabo se pyaar hai''..itna unromantic'..!!"

Maan- "Mishti'."

Geet- "Hain , pata hai, pata hai'kuch hi dino men aap bahut bade lawyer banne wale ho'.aur mera kya'''."

Maan-"Mishti, tumhe pata hai na padhayi ka kitna tension hai ajkal'next week se exam suru hone wle hain.

Geet-" Sirf mere liye hi waqt nahi hota hai aapke pass'..

Maan- "Aisa nahi hai Mishti"'''''

"No Mishti, only Geet, jab mujhe proper tarike se propose karenge na'tab iss naam se pukaar na'warna nahi'.chalo, I am going '..Bye'.."

Maan- "Mishhh'..Geet meri baat toh suno''''tum nahi jaanti main tumse kitna'.."

Maan doesn't need to complete his sentence as Geet has already left from there.

 

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Maan gets awaken suddenly as someone is taking his name.

"Mr. Maan, aapki Maa aapse milne aayi hain'..."

Maan stands up immediately seeing his mother's gloomy face outside the jail-bar.

Maan's mom- "Maan, yeh kya kiya tuhne'''aisa kyun kiya'hamare Parivar ki izzat ke bare men ekbar bhi nahi socha, ekbar bhi nahi socha key tere Papa pe kya beetegi, jab woh yeh sab sunenge.."

Maan- "Sorry Maa, main mazbur hun '."

Maan's mom- "Aur tuhne Dev ko bhi lawyer lene se mana kyun kar diya'.tuh khud bhi toh apna case lad sakta hai'.tuh bhi toh wakeel hai na'..!!"

Maan- "Maa, case wohi ladi jati hai, jahan kisi be-gunah ko galati se saza mil rahi ho', par yahan toh ek gunahgaar ko hi saza milegi'."

Maan's mom-"Tuh kya bol raha hai mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai Maan'''."

Their conversation has been suspended as one constable approaches there & tells them that the meeting-time is over.

 

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Maan takes Geet for a dinner date. This is their 1st meeting after one moth. His exam went very well, now waiting for the result, but Geet knows well that just like every single year, this year too her Maan will top the University. So, naturally Geet looks very happy.

Maan- "Kya baat hai Geet'.aaj kuch jayda hi khush lag rhi ho'."

Geet-"Khush'.nahi toh'.main toh surprised hun'''"

"Kyun'''..!!"

" Arre Mr. Maan Singh, jinko padhayi ke elaba aur kisi dusri cheez o men fursat hi nahi milti, woh mujhe'..Geet Handa ko date pe leke aaye hain''''..hain na surprised hone wali baat'''..". Geet starts laughing loudly.

Maan-"Geet, kya kar rahi ho tum'..sablog dekh rahe hain"'Maan looks quite awkward.

"Dekh rahe hain toh dekhne do'.waise bhi hum ek dusre se pyaar karte hain''pyaar kiya toh darna kya'..hai na."

"Geet, stop it'..tumhe pata hai, mujhe yeh sab pasand nahi'.just behave yourself."

"Maan, aap na mere samajh se bilkul bahar ho'..you are impossible, I am leaving'"

"Geet, Geet, dekho''''.i am sorry"''''.Geet is about to go, Maan stops her midway.

"Dekho Geet, yeh sab public place men achha nahi lagta'you know na iss society men hamare khandaan ka ek status hai'.ek rutva hai'..woh sab'''.."

"Ohho'aab main samjhi'.main aapki ussh high society status men belong nahi karti 'hai na Mr. Maan Singh, kyunke mere Babuji ek mamuli si Bank men kaam karte hain'yehi kahna chahte hain na aap'." Geet frowns her eyebrows.

"Geet tum jaanti ho mere kahne ka yeh matlab nahi tha''."

"Mujhe aab aapki koi bhi baat nahi sunni hai'..main jaa rahi hun'.Thanks for everything  Mr. Maan'..Good bye."

"Geet, meri baat toh suno'''.tum kabhi mujhe apni puree baat kahne ka mauka kyun nahi deti'..Geet'''..Geet''Geet'''.

 

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Court-room. The Public prosecutor Mr. Sharma starts questioning Maan.

Mr. Sharma- "Toh Miss Geet Handa ka khun aap hi ne kiya hai'."

Maan-"Main apna gunah qabool kar chukka hun'.."

Mr. Sharma-"Koi baat nahi'.Adalat ko zara tafseel se batayiye aapne Miss Geet Handa ka khun kyun kiya'.".

Maan '"Kyunke main usse'main usse nafrat karta tha'.kyunke woh meri zindegi, mera career, mera parivar, meri shadi 'sabkuch barbaad karne pe tuli huyi thi'"'Maan engulfs his saliva.

Suddenly one of the constables approaches & provides a packet as evidence having red Banarasi sari & a golden bangle in it to the Public Prosecutor. Maan looks desperately to that Sari & that bangle; these remind him some special memory.

 

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Maan secretly enters into Geet's room. It's pretty dark, still a mild light is there, showing a very beautiful Princess is sleeping on her bed, wearing a wonderful white gown, her hairs are coming onto her cheek, disturbing her sweet nap. Maan slowly tries to shift those entangled threads, suddenly those heavenly eyes get popped up.

"Maannn'..aap yahannn'''.." She can't complete her sentence as Maan holds her mouth softly & takes her towards the roof area.

"Maan, aap pagal ho gaye ho''.itni raat ko aap yahan kya kar rahe hain'.?"

"Meri Mishti ke liye ek surprise hai'.."

"Maan, kya karun main aapka'..jab surprise dena hota hai, tab toh kuch nahi karte'aur aab itni raat ko aaye ho surprise dene'..agar kisine mujhe aapke sath yahan dekh liya toh pata nahi kya hoga'."

"Shhh"'.Maan places his finger on her beautiful rosy lips.

"Ankhein bandh karo Mishti"'.

"Kya kar rahe ho aap Maan'."

"Chup , bilkul chup'.bolana ankhein bandh'..". Geet closes her eyes.

"Ab dekho.." '''Geet opens up her eyes seeing a beautiful golden bangle on her hand.

"Yeh kya hai Maan'.." She looks surprised.

"Yeh hamari pusteni kangan hai'..meri Maa ko meri Dadi ne diya tha'.aaj main tumhe de raha hun'.yeh issh baat ka saboot hai key main tumse kitna pyaar karta hun'.."

"Yeh Adalat gunahgaar Mr. Maan ka yeh bayan khariz karti hai'.." Geet's acting starts.

"Kyun Your Honor'.issh garib pe iitna julm kyun'."

"Gunah kiya hai, saza toh milegi'..aur aapki saza yehi hai key aapko abhi ishiwaqt mujhe propose karna hoga,'.aur hain dhang se '.warnaaa''".

"Jo Hukum Your Honor'.kosish karta hun".

Maan sits on his knee, pretends that he is holding a rose to Geet.

''''" aye khubsurat mallikaye husn'isssh kaneez ki dil hi khwahish '''"

"ek minute , ek minute''.Hindi, Hindi'..mujhe Urdu nahi aati'.." Geet stops Maan midway.

"Geet'..main tumse bahut pyaar karta hun'.aur tumhare bina nahi jee sakta'."

"Maan, kuch jayda hi filmi nahi ho gya''" Geet chuckles out.

"Geet, tum mera mazak uda rahi ho'"

"Nahi nahi Maan, chalo chalo, last try'."

Maan clears up his throat & starts again on his knee'.."Geet, mujhe aajkal naa toh bhukh lagti hai, naa hi raat o ko nind aati hai'..kahin dil nahi lagta'aisa lagta hai key jaise'..."

"Maan, mujhe lagta hai aapko ek Doctor ki zarurat hai'aksar Jaundice men aisa hota hai'."

"Geettt''"

Geet is about to run from there, but finally gets caught by Maan's strong arm. With a sudden jerk Maan pulls her towards him, keeps his eyes into her & says'.

"jabse inh ankhon ko dekha hai'mujhe khud apna hosh nahi rahta'bas inki gahrayio men dub jane ko jee karta hai', inh saanso ke aahosh men apne aap ko hamesha ke liye kho dene ka mann karta hai'..main nahi jaanta Geet , main tumhare zindegi men kya maayne rakhta hun'. , lekin mere liye tum hi meri zindegi ho Geet'..meri dhadkan ho'.mere jeene ki aash ho'.kya tum mujhe apni zindegi men samil hone ka mauka dogi''mujhse shadi karogi, Mishti'.."'.


These lines bring tears into Geet's eyes'she hugs Maan with all her desire. Both flow into that immensely beautiful emotion named- Love with each other. After a while Maan puts a beautifully wrapped box on Geet's hand.

"Yeh kya hai Maan'"

"Khud kholke dekh lo'."

Geet anxiously opens up that box. It is a beautiful, red Banarasi Sari, having sequin & zari work all over.

"Maan, yeh mere liye''."

"Hain Geet,'.chalo aaj hi hum shadi kar lenge'Dev ne sara intezaam kar diya hai'Chalo, jayda waqt nahi hai hamare pass'"

"Rukiye Maan"''Geet stops Maan midway'.."hum aise shadi nahi karenge''humne pyaar kiya hai'koi gunah toh nahi na'.sabke samne sar uthake garv se kahenge key hain'hum ek dusre se pyaar karte hain'.hum shadi karna chahte hain'.apne parivar ke ashirwaad ke bina hum shadi kaise kar sakte hain Maan'!!".

"Okk, meri Mishti'.jo hukum,'.main aaj hi Papa se baat karta hun'waise bhi mere wakeel banne pe kuch jayda hi khush hain sab, kal ghar men ek party bhi hai'.Mishti main chahta hun, kal tum uss party men aayo'.wahan sabke samne hum dono milke apne pyaar ka izhaar karenge , puri duniya ke samne".

"Par Maan, Uncleji maan toh jayenge na, pata nahi kyun mujhe darr sa lag raha hai'." Geet hugs Maan tightly.

Maan caressing her hairs gently & says'."Meri Sherni darr rahi hai'.tumhara Maan hai na tumhare sath..main tumhe kabhi nahi chodunga Mishti'.tum sirf meri ho..meri hi rahogi'"

 

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"Kabse jaante the aap Miss Geet ko? "...Maan suddenly awakes from his thought, he is still in the courtroom.

"Pichle 4 saalon se'"

" aap dono ki toh shadi hone wali thi'..hai na'."!

"Main iss sawal ka jawab nahi dena chahta'."

"Alright'..kya aap Miss Geet se pyaar karte the''.."

"Jabke main yeh qabool kar chukka hun key yeh khun maine hi kiya hai'.phir bhi yeh sare sawal-jawab kyun Your Honor'''!!! "

"Dekhiye Adalat ka kaam unhipe chod dijiye, aur aap bas ushika jawab dijiye, jo aap se pucha jaa raha hai''kya aap Miss Geet Handa se pyaar karte the''hain yah naa'"'Mr. Sharma gets rude in his voice. Maan doesn't say anything.

"Mr. Maan , aapne sayed suna nahi ''.kya aap Miss Geet se pyaar karte the''.."

"Nahi'''..yeh jhoot hai'.." Maan closes his eyes tightly.

"Kya yeh bhi jhoot hai key marte waqt Miss Geet ne jo Sari pahni thi woh bhi aap hi ne unko gift kiya tha'..yahan tak ke woh bangle, jo unke haath se baramat huyi hai woh bhi aap hi ke pusteni bangle hain''.jawab dijiye Mr. Maan''kya aap Miss Geet se pyaar karte the yah nahi''"

"Hain, hain, hain'''''..pyaar karta tha main Geet se'..bahut pyaar karta tha'" Maan holds his head & bursts out into tears.

"Your Honor ''.akhir Public Prosecutor sahib prove kya karna chahte hain'." Maan looks above as he hears Dev's voice.

Judge-"Aapki tariff'?".

"Your Honor myself Dev Khurana , main Mr. Maan Singh ka wakeel hun', yeh rahe mere kagzaad'." He approaches & provides his papers to the court. Maan looks surprised with his sudden entry.

"Dev, tum'''.." '''..Maan is trying to say something, but Dev signals him to stop right there.

Judge-"You may proceed Mr. Dev."

"Thank you Your Honor'." Dev begins with'.."So, Mr. Sharma, yeh sawal puchke aap sawit kya karna chahte hain'?"

"Yehi key aapke client muzrim Mr. Maan Singh ne thande dimaag se, puree planning ke sath apni hi girlfriend, yani Premika ka badi hi be-dardi se qatal kar diya'iss liye uhko kadi se kadi saza di jaye." Mr. Sharma pauses there.

"Your honor, mere learned frined kuch jayda hi jaldi men lag rahe hain'.abhi toh case bas suru huya hai'aur abhi abhi aapne mere client Mr. Maan ko muzrim bhi qarar de diya'yeh kaam Adalat ka hai'unhi pe chod dijiye. "

"Case suru huya hai'..!!  ha ha ha  !!'''.mazak bada achha kar lete hain aap Mr. Dev'.abhi abhi aapke hi client ne khud apne muh se apna gunah qaboola hai, murder-spot se unhe range haatho pakda tha Police walo ne'.aur kitna saboot chahiye aapko inko doshi sawit karne ke liye !!".

"Insaan ke sabse kareebee koi agar achanak usshe dur chala jaye toh insaan kuch waqt ke liye apna aapa kho baithta hai, usse khud pata nahi chalta key woh kya kah raha hai'kya kar raha hai'..Mr. Maan ke sath bhi aisa huya hai'.Geet unki bahut kareebee dost thi'..unko achanak kho ke Mr. Maan kuch der ke liye apna sudh-budh kho baithe the'.tabhi unhone apne aapko gunahgaar bataya. Your Honor, meri aapse darkhast hai'..issh case ko thodisi humanity ke adhaar pe judge kiya jaaye."

 

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Dev- "Mr. Maan, jaisa ke aapne kaha aap hi ne Miss Geet Handa ka qatal kiya hai'.aap zara Adalat ko batayenge, aapne unko kaise mara tha''..?"

Maan stares at Dev, then says slowly by closing his eyes tightly'."Gala dawakar"

Dev-"Lekin Post Mortem report men maut ki wajah navs kaatna bataya gaya hai."

Mr. Sharma- "Woh issh liye key gala dabane ke thik baad aapke client ne Miss Geet ke kalhayi ke navs bhi kaat diye the'.takey kisi bhi haalat men Miss Handa banch naa paye'." '..Maan keeps his silence.

Mr. Sharma- "Your Honor, inki chuppi hi iss baat ka saboot hai, key Mr. Maan ne pahle toh Miss Geet ko gala dabakar maar dala, phir badi berahmi se unke kalhayi ko bhi cheer diya'.Police ko murder spot se yeh nukili si cheez mili hai'.jo key ek Tie-Pin hai, ishke upar Mr. Maan ke hi ungli o ke nishan hai." '.Maan's eye gets stuck into that small thing.

 

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Geet takes Maan to a shopping mall.

"Kya kar rahi ho Geet, tumhe pata hai naa, main yeh sab nahi pahanta'"

"Par ab pahanna padhega, mere Mr. Maan Singh itne bade wakeel ban gye hain'..itne bade bade logon se milne wale hain'..thoda toh thaatt-watt honi chahiye''.hmmm'''  yeh kaisa hai dekho.."  '. Geet chooses one beautiful Tie-Pin for Maan.

"Geet'.."

"Plzz Maan, mere liye bhi aap nahi pahan sakte'!!"

"Okkk'.layiye."

"Ahhhaa, abhi nahi'.yeh toh aapko aaj sham ko hi milegi'.Party men ''meri tarafse aapko'yeh chotosa pyaar ka nazrana'aapko qabool toh hoga na Jahanpana'.mere Sartaaj'.."

"Geet tum bhi na, puri filmi ho"'..Maan smiles at Geet's gesture.

 

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"Ussh sham kya huya tha Mr. Maan, kya aap Adalat ko batayenge''" Maan gets aroused as Mr. Sharma is talking to him.

Maan begins with a husky voice'.."Ussh sham hamare ghar men bahut badi party thi'.mere lawyer banne ki khusi men'"

"Kya ussh party men Miss Geet Handa bhi invited thi'."

"Jee'..maine hi unko bulaya tha'.."

"Phir kya huya'."

"Party suru hone ke thodi der baad mere parents stage pe jake meri engagement announce karne lage'.."

"Aapki engagement'.Miss Geet ke sath'.right'!!"

"Nahi, Ruby ke sath'.."

"Whatt'..you mean to say aap pyaar Miss Geet se karte the'..aur shadi Miss Ruby se ''yeh kaya chakkar hai'?"

"Mere ghar wle nahi chahte the key main Geet se shadi karun'". Maan's voice gets low to lower.

"Kya uushwaqt Miss Geet wahan maujood thi jab aapke parents aap aur Miss Ruby ki engagement ka announcement kar rahe the?"

"Jee Hain'woh wahin thi''.."

"Miss Geet ka reaction kyat ha'?"

"I object Your Honor, issh baat ka issh case se kya sambandh'?" Dev opposes highly.

"Sambhandh hai Your Honor'..Muzrim'..oopsss sorry, I mean Mr. Maan ne Adalat se yeh kaha tha key Miss Geet ne unki zindegi, unki family , yahan tak ke unki shadi ko bhi barbaad karne ki kosish ki thi'.kaise'!!...iish baat ko jaan ne ke liye, ussh baat se bhi parda uthana zaruri hai key ussh raat akhir huya kya tha'."

Judge- "Objection overruled".

"Thank you'Your honor''..toh hain, Mr. Maan, Adalat ko zara saaf saaf lavzo men batayiye key yeh sab dekh ke Miss Geet ka reaction kya tha." 'Mr. Sharma queries.

"Geet bahut naraz ho gayi'aur'aur'"'..Maan starts mumbling.

"Aapko dhamki di'.."

"Nahi, woh wahanse chali gayi thi'"

"Chali gyi'..ohhoo'.phir kya huya'"

"Kuch waqt baad main ushko dhundne nikla'.par woh kahin nahi mili'.toh main ushke ghar chala gya'"

"Matlab Miss Geet ke ghar pe kafi ana-jana laga rahta tha aapka'.hmmm".

"Your Honor, yeh sab unnecessary sawal puchke mere client ko humiliate karne ki koshish kiya jaa raha hai'" Dev objects again, but Judge doesn't allow his plea, Mr. Sharma continues.

"Miss Handa ke ghar jake kya kiya aapne'let me guess, unke Mom-Dad se mile honge , right !"

"Geet ki Mom bachpan men hi guzar gayin aur ushke Papa kisi kaam ke silsile men Pune gaye huye the'"

"Ohhooo'.matlab ghar men aur koi nahi tha', siwaye Miss Geet ke".

"Jee."

"Phir kya huya'., aapne darwaza knock kiya hoga'"

"Kiya tha, par kisine darwaza khola nahi'

"Ohhh'.phir'.aap wapas aa gye.."

"Mere pass Geet ke ghar ki duplicate keys thi'"

"Ohooo'.kya baat hai'.phir'."

"Darwaza kholte hi maine dekha''."

"Kya dekha aapne''''?"

"Geet apne haath men chaku leke mujhe dhamki de rahi thi..key agar main wahanse nahi gaya toh woh apne aapko maar dalegi aur Ruby ko issmen fansa degi'." Maan crosses his fingers tightly.

"Chaku'.ab yeh chaku kahanse aya'''.!!"

"Jee , woh Tie-pin ko chaku jaise pakda tha ushne'..".

"Phir aapne gusse men ushka gala dava diya''right'.!"

"Jee"'.Maan closes his eyes in pain.

"Waah'wah'!! kitni achhi kahani banayi hai aapne Mr. Maan'."'.Maan looks puzzled up.

"Your Honor, main batata hun, ussh raat kya huya tha'.."  Mr. Sharma looks cruel.

"Mr. Maan choro ki tarha uss raat Miss Geet ke room men enter huye' ush waqt Miss Geet bed pe leti huyi thi'.mauka pate hi Mr. Maan ne Miss Geet se apni hawas puri karne ki kosish ki'''."

"Yeh jhoot hai Judge sahib''" Maan shouts out.

"Your Honor, Miss Handa ke report se saaf hai, marne se kuch der pahle unke sath zabardasti ki gyi thi'aur jab woh nahi maani, toh badi hi be-dardi se unka khoon kar diya gya'"

"Yeh sach nahi hai''maine Geet ke sath koi zabardast nahi ki''."

 

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"Thank you so much Maan, for this wonderful lunch date'.aajka din main kabhi nahi bhulungi'" Geet holds Maan's hand lovingly.

"You are welcome my Mishti'waise bhi engagement se pahle yeh hamari akhri luch date hogi'.hai na'''".

"Really'..!! aapne ghar men baat kar li '''"

"Nahi, abtak toh nahi ki'.parrr'''''.."

 Suddenly Geet feels dizzy.

"Kya huya Mishti'." Maan looks very much worried.

"Pata nahi Maan, chakkar sa aa raha hai'"

"Geet, maine tumhe kitni baar bola hai, kitni kamzor ho gayi ho tum'apna dhyan nahi rakhti kabhi bhi'.Geet'Geet'" Maan holds Geet at the final moment, as Geet gets fainted.

 

After a while Geet opens up her eyes seeing Maan sits behind her bed side.

"Hum kahan hain Maan?"

"Hotel ke room men'"

"Kya ''" Geet gets up with a jerk.

"Geet, kya kar rahi ho'..leti raho, Doctor abhi ek ghante tak tumhe aram karne ko bola hai'.tabtak bed se hilna bhi nahi'..samajh aayi meri baat."

"Aur aap'"!!

"Kyun, mere sath akele rahne se tumhe darr lagta hai Mishti'.."' Maan stares at Geet with a lusty look.

"Hawww'.!! yeh main kya sun rahi hun'..Mr. Maan Singh , aur aisi baat e'!!"

"Tumne Maan ko abhi jana hi kahan hain'.."

"Jaanna chahti hun Maan'''"

Suddenly Geet pulls Maan on her way. With that sudden force Maan can't hold his balance & falls on Geet. For the 1st time they both feel their touch some other way. Geet hugs Maan with all her longing. 

It seems that moment has been stuck there just for the two of them. Within that fraction of second, they both forget what they are doing, just flowing with that tremendous emotional outburst, called -Love.

 

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With a tap on the shoulder Maan finds himself outside the courtroom. Mr. Handa (Geet's father) is the person who tapped him up.

"Tumne meri beti ke sath'''.". He holds Maan on the collar. Dev reaches there immediately & takes Mr. Handa away from Maan. Maan stands still there as his hands are tied with the handcuff.

 

"Kahan kho jata hai tuh Maan, aur yeh baat tuhne mujhse kyun chupayee key tum dono''" '..Dev scolds Maan angrily. Maan maintains the silence.

"Pata hai aab woh Sharma tujh pe Rape charges lagane ki koshish kar raha hai'aur agar woh isshko sawit kar deta hai'pata hai na kya hoga'..!!"

"Pata hai, wohi hoga, jo hona chahiye, maine gunah kiya hai, toh mujhe saza toh milni hi chahiye."

 

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Next day, Trial room. Mr. Sharma appeals to the Judge to announce the verdict as this is quite an open & shut case. Dev stops him midway as he provides some reports to the Court.

"Your Honor, PM report se saaf hai key Miss Geet ki maut heavy blood loss hone ki wajahse huyi thi'." Dev begins with.

"Hain, toh issmen kaunsi nayee baat hai'aap ke dost ne hi kaati thi unki kalhayi'kyun Mr. Maan''.inke toh fingerprints bhi hai uss nukili si cheez pe"'. Mr. Sharma looks adamant.

"No, Your Honor, Mere client ne Miss Geet ki kalhayi nahi kaati'fingerprints toh jaan bujhke bhi lagaya jaa sakta hai'."

"Judge sahib , mujhe lagta hai Mr. Dev Adalat ka waqt zaya kar rahe hain'.inke pass aisa koi bhi saboot nahi hai'."

"Saboot hai Your Honor'.." All looks stunned at Dev''.."Saboot hai yeh ghao ke nishan, gaur se dekhiye '.agar koi zabardasti kisiki kalhaii katega toh haath ke right side pe ghao jayda gahra hoga aur left ki taraf thoda kam'.yahan pe left ki taraf incision jayda deep hai, right ki taraf kam deep, jisse saaf pata chalta hai yeh ghao Geet ne khud banaye the.." '''..Maan looks at Dev.

"Sirf yehi nahi Your Honor, marnese pahle Miss Geet ne ek suicide-note bhi likha tha'jo mujhe mil chukka hai'''.." '.Maan looks dumbstruck.

"Your Honor, Miss Geet ke ghar jab main investigation karne ke liye gaya tha, toh mujhe dustbin men se kuch jwale huye kagaz ke tukde mile'jo key ek writing pad ke the'wohi writing pad jo Miss Geet ke table par tha. Uss writing-pad par Miss Geet ke likhe gye letter ke heavy impression marks niche ke page pe bhi aa gye the, ushise mujhe iss case ki sachhai ke bare men pata chala'.yeh wohi writing-pad hai Your honor, aur aap chahe toh Hand-wrtiting experts se verify bhi karwa sakte hain'.yeh Geet ke hi hand-writing hai'''aapke convenience ke liye maine woh impressions pencil se dark kar diye hain. " . Dev provides that original writing-pad to the Judge & starts reading out loudly from another copy of it.

 

"I am sorry Maan, mujhe maaf kar dena'aap se zindegi bhar saath nibhane ka wada aaj main tod rahi hun'.mujhe jane dijiye'thak chuki hun main 'jaanti hun mere issh faisle se aapko bahut thes pahunchegi'.lekin mera yakeen maaniye Maan main hamesha aapke sath thi, hun aur rahungi'khus raho Maan'main jo kuch bhi kar rahi hun, apne pure hosh men kar rahi hun'.aur mere issh halat ke liye koi bhi jinnmedar nahi hai'."

'..Dev stops reading. Maan's eyes get drenched up completely; his voice doesn't give him support, still he begins with'..

"Ussh raat Party men mere aur Ruby ke gharwalo ne Geet ki bahut be-izzati ki thi, ushke khandaan ko leke kya kuch nahi kaha gaya tha usshe'". Maan looks at his Mother, who is now looking down.

"Maine Geet ko bahut rokne ki koshish ki thi, par woh nahi ruki'". 

Maan takes some breath, then starts again''

"Party khatam hone ke baad jab main Geet ke ghar pahuncha'tab tak bahut der ho chuki thi'..sab kuch khatam ho chukka tha'.meri Geet mujhe chodke jaa chuki thi, hamesha ki tarha iishbar bhi mujhe apni baat puree karne ka mauka nahi diya ussne''"

Maan's voice is getting numb'..'.. "mujhe ahsas ho gya tha key yeh jo kuch bhi huya sirf aur sirf meri wajahse '..Geet se kiya huya wada main nahi nibha paya'.apne Parivar ka status, apne Papa ka society men naam banaye rakhne ke liye Ruby se shadi karne ka mera woh decision hi meri Geet ki maut ka wajah bana, gunahgaar sirf aur sirf main hun'toh mujhe hi saza milni thi'maine uss Tie-Pin pe apne fingerprints lagaye'.Geet ke gale men apne ungli o ke nishan chode, takey Police ko lage maine hi ushka gala ghonta tha'phir woh writing-pad pe likhe gye uss letter ko maine jwala diye'.aur Police ko phone kiya''Your Honor, main gunahgaar hun'.mujhe saza milni chahiye'.plz mujhe saza dijiye'.Geet ke wager main nahi jee sakta'nahi jee sakta'.nahi jee sakta' " ' Maan bursts out into tears. The Jugde finally closes the case & releases Maan with all the honor & dignity. A sweet Love story has been ended up so drastically.

 

 

 

 

****The End****


P.S. Please read it & do comments on this link  too.SmileTongue



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Awesome os ...yet so painful

superb written...loved it

Thankx for sharing n pm :-)


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awesome os
painful...

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Thnak u frnds...can u plz cmmnt there also in this LINK, this is a contest & i need ur support...so, if u think my OS is gud, u cn cmmnt there.

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Omg...it ws too painful... Throughout d os i ws w8ing 4 sum miracle 2 happen n geet 2 b alive.. Bt alas... Poor maan.. He ws completely devastated...his pain ws heartwrenching..amazing work

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Awesome dear, loved it.

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painful os...

awesome n wonderful os...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely os n fr d pm also...


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thanks diii u r backkk agaiinnn... main kabse kahe rahi hoon k maaneet ko leke kuch likho... lekin aap sunte kahan ho???

u know u r the 1rst one jisse maine maaneet ff padhna suru kia tha... nd u r too good

bt wy sad OS??? kuch happy wala to de dete...nd achanak khatam karr dia :(

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