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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 3:13pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pihu.k11

Ummm.. M sowie fr d late comment... Embarrassed Hufff... D3 is makn me go insane these days Confused Confused  It's making everyone go insane..! It's alright Hug 
Cumin to d update.. I shud b vry happy seeing dat kriya is gonna return bk to her world buh m nt...
N u kno y.. Coz I kno,something is surely cookin in ur mind.. N trust me.. M freakin Afraid rite now Ouch  I think you should be.. Rey has MU her sadly.. 
Reyaansh hs alrdy misunderstood kriya thr.. He thnks tht kriya hs moved on n thus decided tht he wud too move on in hs life n here kriya is goin bk n she's vry vry happy as she thinks tht Reyaansh knows d truth thus no problems buh less she knows wht he hs assumped ! Hufff.. I sense trouble.. A major one Ouch Ouch Just maybe.. but might not be as big.. =) 
Also,thrs no mention of Reyaansh's behaviour aftr dat marriage whch means vishakha too isnt aware of Reyaansh's mind state.. *Sigh*
Kya hoga ab????? That even I'm wondering LOL I know what I want in the future.. but I have to put the right initiatives to get to there properly... 

Cumin to d gud notes...
I loved kriya-vish convo.. Its really gud to c vishakha's true self..
We all know wht dil dosti n dance means to kriya buh now it feels gud to c tht these thngs matters d most to vish too.. Vish concern fr hr frns.. Fr Reyam.. She knows wht kriya means to dem n wht Reyam means to kriya.. I jus lovd it ! Yes.. I'm going to try to show that for each character in the show.. it is after all about all of them and not just leads. 

Cumin to Smriti-Kriya dining convo.. I lovd dat d most..
C dis is d beauty of a mum n daughter relationshp.. :) Indeed it is. Kuch khata, toh kuch meetha.
Kriya jus fr her mom's sake trying to cope up wid d situation.. She completely understnds wht her mom hs gone thru.. Thus wants to support hr,stand fr hr.. :)
Kriya knows tht hr mom did wrong buh stl she wud confide her trust in hr mom ! yes.. i like how you placed trust here... that was one thing smriti has kept intact till now and so kriya is ready to trust her. 

N thr Smriti realise tht wht blunder she has done.. Thus to rectify,she's sendin kriya bk to hr Dil Dosti n Dance n also understnds kriya's dreams... Wow !
I lovd dat line.. I kno how it feels bein away from d one u love.. ! It showed smriti's immense pain :(  One must have said truly.. you learn from your mistakes... 

Wht an update.. Last two updates wer a roller coaster ride.. Pura plot e chng ho gya... Haha! Yes. The real story seems to be kicking in like after 25 updates LOL 

Excited to c whts gonna hpn nxt buh also scared ! I think that's expected Wink 
*Fingers Crossed*

update soon.. Waitin :)

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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 3:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shaffy_arsha

omg!!!!! omg!!!!! omg!!!!! khushi
love you yaar me 2 Tongue 
da end was awsome
aisa lg ra tha jaise abhi dialouge ayega "ja kria beta ja ji le apni zindagi" lol ROFL ROFL ROFL! Smriti ain't that chessy ROFL ROFL 

sachi awsome update
loved it lyk hell seriously I'm so glad you loved it! Sachi!!

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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 3:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by zona_malik

SUPER DUPER AWESOME..
 
loved it..
 
update soonClap.

Thank you so much!!

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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cool_star14

super awesome update!!
loved it..
finally kria bak to mumbai..
waiting for d nxt update..

Thanks dear!
i'm glad you loved it. 
yes, she finally is back :D

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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 3:16pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by asmaju

Amazing update!!
Loved it dear..

Finally Kria's mom let her come back..
Kria and Vishika's  chat was so lovely.
And the tickets to Mumbai  i'm so exicted...

Update next part soon.

Sorry for short comment dear lots of Pm s pending up...


Glad you loved it Asma Hug Hehe, shouldn't you be scared? Wink No sorry re. I know there must be many. Hope you're all caught up now :D

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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 3:18pm | IP Logged
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Ab tu nazar mat laga.

Aur kitne baki hein ?

Sorry missed it. Only about 6-7 I think.

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Posted: 26 January 2013 at 3:19pm | IP Logged
Jaldi karna. Nini aai.

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