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#5 Guzarish [D3 Revisited] Parts 23-26 (Page 11)

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 2:49am | IP Logged
Congrats 4 d new thread. . . . . . .
Update was awsome. . .
Bt,i hated the end part. . . , . . . .
Yaar wat is going on?
I mean i knw u r introducing twists and turn in the story,and i m also excitd 4 it. . . .
Bt,dnt u thnk this twist and turns r getting more and more complicatd!!. . . . .this is my view. . . . . .
M sorry if u got hurt. .
Bt i wrote wat i felt. . .
I realy love this ff,and wil always do,so pls dnt take me wrong. . . . .

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 2:49am | IP Logged
Awesome update and thanks for the pm :D congrats for the 5th thread

Nikki <3

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 2:57am | IP Logged
Wow, the update was amazing. Luking forward fr new twist nd turns. ...Smile

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 2:59am | IP Logged
ErmmBt after reading her letter also, he is still in delema abt her luv fr him, thats sad to know...Unhappy

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 3:15am | IP Logged
Khushi yeh kya kiya Stern Smile...
*Breath in , Breath out*...

Congrats for the 5th thread...
The starting part was Amazing , no doubt in that Big smile...
Naina and Kria getting close is good , she is happy after quite a long time Approve...
Taani is 'Not' thinking to be like Kria But is trying to know about her where-abouts , great Thumbs Up...
The gang is going to try and Convince Sharon , this is really what must have happened...
Reyam scene was Nice Big smile...
But end pe kya kiya??
Rey ne he phone kiya tha Shocked...
N he 'Misunderstood' Kria Ouch...
Well i think this is what u must have planned...
Loved the part Heart...
Waiting to read further...
N thanks for the pm Smile.

 


Edited by Roxxy47 - 05 January 2013 at 3:13am

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 3:18am | IP Logged
yr...yeh kya jhatka dia last m... Jhor ka jhatka jhor s lga...plzzz update soon... Loved d kriya nd naina's bonding...but w8 d heck is wrng wid rey dimaag pura satak gya h...???? Btw update is fantastic...:-) ND thanxxx 4 pm in advance...

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 3:24am | IP Logged
amazing update khushi..!!

love d way things are turning up.. n seriously u hav potrayed each character so amazingly..!!

ryt soon..!!

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 3:41am | IP Logged
WTH jus hpnd.. Fr d vry first time,m startin from very last !
Is Reyaansh mad o wht??? I mean.. Whts wrong wid him??? Heightsh yar.. Jus coz he heard hr mum sayin,finally tmne naya dost bna e liya doesnt means Boyfrn fr lord's sake.. I mean Dost.. Reyaansh ka hindi is poor nah.. Plz someone tl him,dat dost means friend nt boyfrn.. N n how he exclaimed it to b a guy,from wea it did come frm????? He heard kriya's laughter frm d othr side so he thot she's happy n moved on.. Dude,get a life.. U bloody hav ur frns thr fr u.. They all support u,understnds u.. Buh Kriya.. She's all alone thr.. Agree,she hs vishakha buh still na.. Dis is Sick !
Right now,m fln lik goin n kill him.. Agghhh.. Damn Angry So,dis is how t____ wud enter his life.. Greaaattt !! Censored

I guess.. Now I must review abt thngs too..
Naina.. She has grown closer to kriya in so less time.. N Its a true frnshp fr sure :D
Kriya's anger towards hr dad is totally justified !
Dat guy lft hr n hr mom to liv by demselves buh m evn happy dat she has no grudge against Sharon..
One Req.. Sharon too shud come to know abt d fact kriya bein hr sis,from her dad only !
I wud lik to c her reaction.. Dun want,kriya to tell hr but her own dad..

Ohki.. Now,d probability is.. Sharon is gonna b d sixth dancer but as far as I remembe,in dat OS.. Kriya was d 6th dancer.. Mtlb,Sharon wudnt b d sixth dancer.. Buh ye hoga kaise.. Does dis indicates towards tonn of misunderstndngs..???? No no no..

N wht dis tani is upto??? Is she lik is gonna search fr kriya??????
Wud she play a role in unitin kriyaansh o wht???
She seems to b quiet impressed frm kriya n kriyaansh.. Reyaansh se toh alrdy h e !

Omg.. Whts goin on?????
Plz yr.. Yeh reyaansh ki misunderstndn clr kro yr.. I jud cnt tk it..
Glti se d3 dkh liya tha.. Thursday ko.. N tbse band bji pdi h.. Upr se Ye Reyaansh.. Ufff..
Whts wrong wid him yr??? Satak gyi h uski sch !
Idiot.. Huh

Evn aftr dat letter,Reyaansh doubt kriya's love.. Holy Shit !
Update soon :)
Waitin !

Edited by Pihu.k11 - 05 January 2013 at 3:39am

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