#5 Guzarish [D3 Revisited] Parts 23-26 - Page 102

Deetha.

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Posted: 11 years ago

himu ye padh

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3187106&TPN=11

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Deetha.

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Posted: 11 years ago

kiski siggie aur kounsi re???

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Himani

@Himu_arsha

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Posted: 11 years ago

Read kar rahi hu

P.c wali

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: *Khushii*

Aww, thank you!! 🤗

So real name is something else? Just like mine :p What do you study?

yup datx nt da real name..

n rest ov details in scrap box😉

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zona_malik

@zona_malik

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: *Khushii*

Lol! Seriously? I'm like that too in a sense 😆 All the best for your paper :D

Thanx n papr went well..atleast frm wht i expected😉

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Posted: 11 years ago

Okay so i have missed lots i guess...😳

coming to the update...

the start bit was nice n i liked the way vishakhas reaction was penned...

SwaRon part...was nicely penned...

the way swayam got things to her n explained them was SO swayam...n sharon's emotions were nicely jotted...she wanting it fair BUT she said "NO" i wonder why...n she winked??? 😲at Swayam😲😲 yeh kya bhai😕 poor swayam😆 confusion might have got him totally bowled away...swayam pinching n sharon giggling looking at it was cutely written...

Vishkha-kria-naina part was nice..liked the way it was penned...

gang part was nice..swayam's confusion was nicely got out n rinni suggesting abt talking to her was something different :)

the reYam part so like it always is in the show..they both knowing n understanding was lovely read...

now i need to read other parts but m already exhausted with so much reading toh i'll get to the next parts tomorrow maybe? Sorry for the delay

PS: u ended this thread at 140? any specific reason?

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Namrata Jadhav

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Posted: 11 years ago

demand is completed na khush? den wers d update?

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Sunil

@Suni1986

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Posted: 11 years ago

i love d all updates
they r amazing

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow nyc update in thread two akhir rey ko pata chal gaya

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Blackheart

@Dead_Nightmare

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Posted: 11 years ago

Kriya and sharon ard sister that amazing
Tani entery with bang
In that ff i rearly like taani

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