#5 Guzarish [D3 Revisited] Parts 23-26 - Page 54

aww..!! loved the updt  😊

wow!!!

Awesome update :-)

amazing update khushi..!! totally loved it..!! 😊
awhh that naina is so cute..!! m so lovin her.. kriya n naina's convo was great.. really liked that part.. it was so nicely written that how in short span thy became close frnds.. me like it..
haha reyam was also.. the way rey ran away from swayam.. hehe 😆 i thought m actually seeing d3 .. i could visualise the whole scene.. not that i dnt do it everytime bt still.. this was super aweso e..!!
bechari sharon toh shock ho gayi sab ko dekh ke.. best part was paani laane poori gang chali gayi.. hehe.. i was rofling aftr reading that..
eagerly waiting for swaron convo.. m sure its gonna be interesting..
really waiting 4 ur twists as m sure its gonna bring heaps of misunderstandings.. n specially fir kriyaansh.. ur os the future of this ff is really scaring me..!!
plss mere kriyaansh ko alag mat karna


whole update was beautifuuly written.. loved it.. n loved ur surprise too.. 😳 yayy u continuing one of ur workss.. yayayy nw waiting for those pms 😆
thanks 4 this pm n update soon..!! n lastly loved the title 😉 i voted for this one only..!! 😆

Awesome update
Soo finally kria is back.Even I m excited to see everyone's reaction.Well Naina's pov about friendship I m kinda confused.Is she talking about someone we know?.I know I m thinking too much..:p
Lol even I don't understand why all have to go to get water😆.
Waiting for next part
Ps.Welcome back khushi...:)

Superb as always.
Loved it .
Thnx for pm.

Loved the update!!

loved d update..
it was mindblowin as usual...
each part was nice...
kria goin back to mumbai said abt her past to naina...
hope rey don hurt her feelings coz of d mu n break her trust that he wont move on n ll stay committed...
reyam part in d start was nice...
sharon - gang part too was nice...
waitin to c future kr scenes n how swayam convinces sharon...

n abt ur surprise i voted for ijd but also want mines forever[kr, ss] n sadja n forgiven too plzzz...

loved it khushi...😊

finally... she's comng back to her frnds n love 🤗

naina ko bhi to sab batana tha na... varna vo to confuse hi rehti 😆

inki story sun k kitna achha lagta h na... my kriyaansh

but vo unfortunate time bhi aata h... which destroyed our peace 

u made me cry  again 😭

can't believe... sharon ko sab aise man rahe hai...

ab peaceful ho gyi hai na... daant khaane ka darr door ho gya sabka 🤣

ab swaron ki private talks...😉

d3 me to dono ki aise time fight shuru ho jati... 🤪

but here ... the make sense😎