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pujaaghosh

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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 2:34am | IP Logged

Its about a LOve story..Somethingg different  may b.. hope u all like it..

 

a girl lil unsmart named RIYA waiting for some1 in 1 of Mumbai bus stand..and talk wit herself..

woh aayega woh ayeega yehi par toh mili thi..bhagwaanji ek baar mila do sirf ekbaar..kuch kehna hai mujhe usse..plss..suddenly her bus called her finally for leaving..n with upset mind she leave mumbai..sited and started thinkin wat happen with her before 4 months ago..woh khass pal..

 

 

 

 

she came to mumbai for interview..a small town girl from punjab...dont know anythin about big city mumbai..she arrived without told her parents..coz they wont allow her for a job..but she want to do..so,after reach she try to called her didi (renuka).. her elder sister living in mumbai..she is married.Riya called but her cell was off dat tym..she called like 100tyms but..the full night she stand in bus srop with full on scareness.in morning she called her parents and told why she is there...RIYA's parents told her call her di to pick u 1st..she do not tell them she called 100 tyms..she called her again..n this tym she get..

 

Renuka- hello,

Riya- di, main mumbai aa gayi..

(renuka di drinking water n glass slipped..)

Renuka- what ? where r u now?

Riya- di m in bus stop..kaal raat se main aapko call kar rahi hu..par apne..

Renuka- re my saas in hospitalized..m in hospital..ur jiju is out of town na so..bol k q nehi ayi tu? (Riya told evrything to her) kya? ok ok tu fikar maat kar main maa papa ko sb samjha dungi.. ok?pehle tu mere ghar aja

Riya- haa aap aao mujhe lene..

Renuka- maine kaha na..she is serious. cant leave hospital.ek kaam kaar main tujhe detail mein address bolti hu tu note karle..ok? sunn pehle pehle uss bus stop se sidhe jana fri opp. mein ek bus stand milega waha se andherieast ka bus pakad k shagun tower stop pe utar jana..aur waha se auto pakad l cafe cofee shop k pass utarjana wohi pepehla jo pink color ka house hai wohi meri hai..samjhi?

 

Riya (making round eyes)- nehi di kuch samaj nehi aya..

Renuka- kya?oh god(think a min)  ek kaam kar tere aas paas koi hai kya? main usse bol deti hu woh tujhe samjhadenge dekh zara..

Riya- haa ruko..(she saw a oldage person req. him to recv and talk to her di but.. he said he is also new in MUMBAI... she ran to phone n say )di no1 is here..

Renuka - ere koi toh zaroor milega thik se dekh..

Riya- ok ruko..

 

Suddenly she saw a smart handsome young guy named Dipbusy with his cell

Dip is normal guy like other. doin job in I.T sector. his status is single his parents were died when he was a kid..his di is his only support..he going to his office..

 

 

she ran to him n standing to him n waiting for finish his call..he notice a girl stand wit him..he move two steps..she too followed..he noticed..again he move and again she too..he cut his call..

 

Dip - wat happen y u follow me?

Riya -my didi..

Dip- yaa ..wat?

Riya - on ph.plss listen wat she said..i cant understand her words..plss help me..

Dip - m goin to office lil busy madam..

Riya- plsss mera help kar dijiye..plss..

Dip - (thinking) ok chalo..

(Dip pick her ph)

 

Dip - hello

Renuka - hello,i dnt knw u..plss but help my sis..she totally new..pls leave her in proper bus stand (give him address)

Dip- listen madam i hav urgent work..

Renuka - plss i knw its nt ur duty..but although..

Dip - ok (finished the call)

 

Dip - chaliye..

Riya - aap samajh gaye?

Dip - (looking strengly) yes.

Riya - mujhe bhi kaha di ne..pr kuch samajh hi nehi ayi.

Dip - chale ?

Riya - ha chalo chalo..(pick her bags)

he drop on her proper bus stand..n point her bus..he saw she sit on her bus..

 

Dip - ok ?

Riya- yaa..thanks ok bye

Dip - ok

 

after 5 min bus started.n a guy sit with her..suddenly came closely.. n she get scared..n shout

 

Riya - rukooo buss rokoo.. i want to laeaveee (bus stopped n she leave)

 

Dip walking..n saw she leave

 

Dip - ree wat happen? utri q?

Riya -woh woh admi mujhe..dekh raha tha..

Dip - toh? utri q?sit change kar lete..

Riya ' wohh.. main..

Dip ' kya?

Riya ' plss aur ek help kardo..mujhe di k ghar chod dijie plss

Dip- kya? Kaha na..

Riya- plss dekhiye agar aap Punjab ayenge toh hum bhi aap ko help karenge bohot

Dip ' main ? Punjab?

Riya ' yess plss help mee..

Dip ' (he notice her kind face and agree) ok chalo..

 

They started their small journey.. (if u like it honestly then i will post last two parts)


Part - 2 on Page 5



Edited by Puja_G - 20 March 2013 at 2:13am

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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 2:56am | IP Logged
It was very much interesting yaar, post next part jaldi taa k ur dewaane wait na kar paaye n or badte jaaye dat i want :p

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Cute one dear.

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Heee supercool yah...

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Wowww doll story is awesome plzz post the next part jaldiii aur intezar mat karna samjhi

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nice update continue soon:)

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nice story do cont it soon as soon as possible Smile

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