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The attack - OS (part 5-pg 15 18/2/13) (Page 9)

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 6:34pm | IP Logged
Sorry for the late replies..thanks a lot for continuing and also for the pm. Viren's frustration and virat's support was beautifully shown. Jeevika insecurity and last part where he threatened to kill him was mindblowing. .superb. do continue and pm me pl when you continue

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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 5:40am | IP Logged
Thanks for the PM! 
Update soon... 

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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 2:06pm | IP Logged
this was the most different think i read on virika. job well done. please pm me when you update next. i am adding you as buddy, in case that helps in sending out pms.
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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 2:10pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Dhoxi

aww it's really lovely :)

Thanks for the pm and how dare i could ignore this os :)


Glad you enjoyed it, and took the time to read it.
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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 2:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vishwa94

just amazing!! loved it!!
loved hw u described viren's pain n helplessness!!
thanx for pm


Your welcome for the pm.
I'm hiked that you liked this update and could feel Viren helplessness at the given fictional situation.
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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 2:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by amritaluvskryan

you potrayed viren's emotions very well & finally viren found that stupid


Thank you you reading the os and this update. I'm glad you liked Viren's emotions in there. He knew who he was but this was there confrontation as he has come to Jeevika again.
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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 2:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by surbhi1994

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" size="5">its a good story
i liked it
continue soon
pm me plz
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Thank you for liking the story and thinking the concept is good.
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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 2:18pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shine123

amazing update...
Viren's frustration for not being able to do anything
virat's caring attitude and the special room ...nicely written
then jeevika moving on and Viren and manvi with her ...
then Viren's anger seeing the attacker ...was so natural ...
Thnx 4 d pm...:)


Thanks Shaina for taking the time to read it and comment. Viren as the focal here but Virat was also good. I didn't want Viren to go to Jeevika really in that state but Virat to take Viren somewhere away from his wife. Just to get him sober rather than focus on him drunk.

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