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Dhoxi

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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 6:56pm | IP Logged
A kindly request can you please continue :) its really awesome the way you have said, it really touched mine heart. N if you did continued(you have to lol) please send me a pm.

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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 7:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nadianadyne

Amazingly written os:)
Love how u potray everyone emotions
Do write more:)


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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by urmilsalve

as usual again a brilliant piece of writing...ur writing skills r really gr8...the way u potray emotions of every character is marvellous...hats off..


Thank you for liking this Os.

Thank you for the complement of my writing skill, I actually think I'm not that great, I try just to make sure it is all coherent.

sweetdollashita

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 12:36am | IP Logged
wowowww
superb os

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 5:23am | IP Logged
Pj, Sorry m late, I did read it the same day you posted :)
   One of your best works I'd say & very much on a right time when we are going thru a phase of change on large...
 Everything was brilliant ...Jeevika's situation, Virat's restlessness , Viren's helplessness & Manvi's worries, Penned really nicely 

Jeevika not wanting to disturb her loved ones even more & somewhere deep down scared of Thier reactions  Kept every pain , trauma to herself, which is natural. Viren's frustration of not being able to be there for her...the question as to why it had to Their small happy family...Very realistic
 I especially loved the last part , Manvi's words
 "Di You didn't have control over what happened to you, But you can Control NOW "
 Again Jeevika 's " She told you "...& her pulling away But Viren's emotional but still firm assurance...I loved this because neither Manvi Nor Viren Were over reactive...She would have hated sympathy in Their eyes But it was Just an assurance that it was not your fault & that you have every right to be happy , to be safe & To live ...Yet Again

& yeah Jeevika being paranoid for a while was nicely described !!
Really  Awesome ...Loved it

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MyAtmaMink-saba

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 5:34am | IP Logged
Great updates and plz pm me next time

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 5:53am | IP Logged
Amazing story! 
Loved the way how you showed all the emotions.. 
Your a truly brilliant writer... 
Please update soon and do PM me!

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 6:09pm | IP Logged
oh my god this is absolutely brilliant bought tears to my eyes

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