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The attack - OS (part 5-pg 15 18/2/13) (Page 3)

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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 3:59pm | IP Logged
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It was How Thing's Change if memory serves correct. I hadn't realised you'd had another one! Will look for that :)

I hope your holidays were fun, I know I'll be dreading going back to school on Monday, and I'm guessing you would be too after two weeks off :L

And I couldn't agree more; in my opinion, possibly the worst thing that could happen to a person. No one can understand, or start to understand. Jeevika's reactions were portrayed beautifully, and you did justice to that.

Good luck with school and all Teacher-ji :)

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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 4:04pm | IP Logged
Oh ok, I have How things changed and How life goes on. I personally don't like my SS How things but you might like the first one.

I think I should change my name to Teacherji. I know two weeks off, don't wanna go back but life must go on.

Thanks you for liking the SS and am glad it can't off well. I didn't want to made it to over the top as its something that is so hard to feel.

Edited by -Pj- - 04 January 2013 at 4:07pm

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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 4:09pm | IP Logged
brilliant updateClap loved ur OS
all emotions were beautifully described

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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 4:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Kryan4ever

WOW , this is yet another truly amazing OS ,
All the emotions were portrayed perfectly and the story as a whole was just a treat to read !
Thank you for this ,
Please write more os's or ff's , you seem like a very good writter Smile


Thank you for your comments. I will try to write more but it just depends. I'm glad you liked this story and could relate to the emotions for them. As writing emotions can be difficult to express clearly.
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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 6:56pm | IP Logged
A kindly request can you please continue :) its really awesome the way you have said, it really touched mine heart. N if you did continued(you have to lol) please send me a pm.

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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 7:52pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nadianadyne

Amazingly written os:)
Love how u potray everyone emotions
Do write more:)


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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 7:55pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by urmilsalve

as usual again a brilliant piece of writing...ur writing skills r really gr8...the way u potray emotions of every character is marvellous...hats off..


Thank you for liking this Os.

Thank you for the complement of my writing skill, I actually think I'm not that great, I try just to make sure it is all coherent.
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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 12:36am | IP Logged
wowowww
superb os

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