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Posted: 21 January 2013 at 12:24pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by scarlet167

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Awesome update dear im seriously in love with your ff. Thank ypu so much for the pm. Viren even though a husband who had all rights on jeevika asked if she was ready was brilliant. Very similar to the character of viren in the show. Manvi jeevika convo was brilliant and ofcourse virika scene was superb. Overall flawless epi. Keep going..do pm me if you continue and also for your new work


Glad you liked this Os/Ff, I never know what to call things. Even though Viren is her husband she still has a right to be comfortable and ready and that how one will be with the one they love. They won't want to push them into something they are not ready for.

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Posted: 21 January 2013 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by nadianadyne

Amazing update as always:)

Glad thay jeevika finally let viren in. Happy ending!:)
Thank you for this amzing os!
Pls write more in the future:)


Thank you for all your comments are for liking the Os. A relatively happy ended for a change on my part. :)

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Posted: 21 January 2013 at 1:30pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sweety1234556

Wonderful update!!!
An amazing OS!!

Ur an awesome writer!Hope to read more of ur writing in future Smile


Thanks for liking the Os and enjoy anything else I may write.

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Posted: 21 January 2013 at 2:21pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by aa_mnhs

People may not have liked the idea of rape in this story, but i think it brought out the beauty of virikas relation ver differently and very nicely. The ever caring husband we read about is the one who has gone through 'not-as-bad' circumstances, but here he's supportive of her in the worst scenario.
Thanks for the nice read.
Love
Sarah


Thank you Sarah for liking the concept of this story and how it ended out coming out in regards to Jeevika and Viren relation. It a struggle for the one to get over the worst thing to happen but also how they are supported by their loved ones.

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Posted: 21 January 2013 at 4:03pm | IP Logged
Wow!! This is amazing! (And I was so sure I commented. ErmmLOL) Brilliant last part! The dust has settled, Day Dreaming One very meaningful line... Thanks for the PM! 

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 2:31pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by vishwa94

amazing updateSmile
beautifully written...loved the ending
hope u keep writing such wonderful OS...
thanx for pm


Thanks glad you liked it and the ending of it.

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Posted: 22 January 2013 at 10:59pm | IP Logged
Caught up on all the parts- I will comment when I can think straight lol but fantastic updates :) 

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Posted: 23 January 2013 at 12:56pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by romanticgurl070

mind blowing update


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