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People may not have liked the idea of rape in this story, but i think it brought out the beauty of virikas relation ver differently and very nicely. The ever caring husband we read about is the one who has gone through 'not-as-bad' circumstances, but here he's supportive of her in the worst scenario.
Thanks for the nice read.
Love
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Sweet ending

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amazing updateSmile
beautifully written...loved the ending
hope u keep writing such wonderful OS...
thanx for pm

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mind blowing update

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cannot believe this has finished absolutely brilliant

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lovely and again an emotional update...loved the lines of book...thnx for pm

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 That was really really Brilliant Pj ...I can't describe how much I love your way of ending stories. It's always just so so perfecttt 

It's ur choice if you continue this as u said you 'r not sure whether its last or not, It could be taken further obviously But this part was complete in itself. Jeevika's journey from start till end, & Viren manvi's support ...beautifully described
 
I spl liked how you mentioned Lines from book In purple ...& how actually fir they were on Jeevika & @words In blue, beautifully penned 

From Jeevika's breakdown to Maanvi 's emotional & Friendly support to Viren's patience & care, Everything was beautiful !!

   

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