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Swaron FF:U & Me..Back to Us.#3...Note -pg 47 (Page 9)

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Posted: 13 January 2013 at 8:44pm | IP Logged
res for 16 DOne
 
cuteee kissWink


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res for 17 Done
 
superb update ClapClap
 
n poor reyCry


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nice  updates

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Wow it was great its like double dhamaka two updates at time wow mind blowing dear, i loved it u have written wonderfully . U have beautifully showed Sharon 's feelings . And I loved princess tanya very much . Worth waiting dear u do not know how much I waited for this . Please update soon and Thanx for pm

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 Both the updates were a treat to read. It was amazing how you expressed their pain, specially Sharon's on missing Tanya's first moments. 
And how Swayam reacted when she told him that he could have married someone else and lived happily...but Swayam aisa nahi hai...uska dil sirf SHARON SHARON kehta hai...
Kria's such a naughty girl! Interrupt kar diya...Tongue
And Tanya wanting her daddy and mommy to sleep next to her...awww...good job Tanya...you made daddy sleep next to ur mommy instead of the couch. Tongue
I wanted to keep reading. Please update soon!!!!!!! I'm dying to read more!
Itna lamba demand?. Ouch


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Finally you updated and Thank God, you gave us a double update. I can totally feel Sharon's pain of not being able to be there for all those first moments of Tanya's with Swayam. It's good to see them finally bonding as a family and it's so sweet how Swayam has both his angels in his arms that night !!

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Lovely update.
 

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Sorry for unres'ng the comment so late..been busy with work and didnt want to unres with just two line , after all We got this update with so much trouble LOL
 
I loved both the chapters.
Chapter 16:
Feel really sorry for sharon , having a loving husband and cute daughter but still not able to enjoy , not able to remember anything. Sharon went from one frame to other to remember but ended up  getting hurt . Poor thing missed the important part of Tanya's growing up period . Loved how swayam consoled and their kiss Embarrassed ...  Good that atleast in one thing sharon hasnot changed , talking something which doesnt make any sense LOL LOL
 
Chapter 17:
Kriya teasin swayam was cute LOL  Rey wanted to hug sharon but could not as she doesnt remember anything Unhappy ... Felt bad for Rey..Happy that Swayam is positive about all the things..After all he found sharon when everyone has lost hope ...Tanya is cute..how she assigned the places for them ..these kids bhi naEmbarrassed ... Finally  the two slept peacefully after 3 years ...
 
 


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