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Love you yaar for giving 2 rocking updates in one go. I am really sorry for being late but no problem I have all rights.
Coming directttly to the update.
You know what you say that I doesn't like your updates that is why it is so difficult for me to comment on it today I tell you something the truth is ke your udates are so beautiful ke un pe comment karna ke liye mujhe exact beautiful words nahi milte hain.. I don't know how to describe the beauty of your update seriously. Commenting on your updates in one hell difficult task for me because I always lost words.
The way you described Sharon's pain looking at those pictures the pain to not being here with his princess charming for three years, pain for not having any memory, pain for not giving the warmth of her chest to her angel, pain to see Swayam in pain in phots were commendably penned down.
She is hating herself for that HAwww. There kiss was super se bhi uparrr rocking tha! Muahh..
They were craving for each other's touch, to feel other, to be with each other, to be in each other's embrace was beautiful yaar.
Lastly swayam that she still hasn't changed and all of her talks doesn't make sense was cute. How can he balance such sweet talks after such intimate moment!!! Loved it.
But...how to control this heart...which is yours...it learn the feeling of love from from you...
I love you Sharon...I really do...I can't stop loving you even if I want to ...its not that i didn't try ...i tried ...not to love you so much..because at end of the day..you were not with me..for all these years..I tried not to love you so much ... but bloodyhell hota hi nehi ...my heart always takes your side ...
It beats only for you...It can even think about anyone else except YOU...You are my heart Sharon...every beat of my heart chants only your name...
Ahhh, I loved these line I almost read them like thousand times… Deepy you are taking my heart with each of your emotional and beautiful updates girly! Love you more than anything.. please never get married.. I can't let you go.. LOL
Really loved 16th chapter a lot! Keep it up.. my Dhamki's were worth it to me Yahhhooo! Balleee!
Comment for 17th Chapter.
Hahaha, Kria is such a kamini cheez in this FF! Aww poor soul had a lip gloss on his lips.. Aheeemmm Ahemm! Didn't get time to clean it up??
I loved this part too.. bechari Sharon has no clue about anything she backed off from rey too.. OMG rey.. her best friend.. I felt bad reading that I hope uski memory jaldi wapas ajaye..please god! Oh sorry please deepy main bhool gau thi key eh story god nahi tu likh rahi hai chamak challo anarkal!!!
Swayam don't cry baby I cant see tears in your eyes.. u will get back your Sharon soon..i will make deepy ji do this. Don't worry you just have to send me new Apple ka laptop..thats it!a aur bechari deepy ko bhi ek earphone tu bhej hi dena mr.
HHHmmm….room decorated in full romantic swing haan?? Odd ging kria aisa time to time karte rehna..kabhi tu swaron iska fayda uthayenge.. Sharon blushed.. I love blushing Sharon a lot..
Aww…Tanya is such a sweetie pie.. wese no doubts jinka name Tanya hota hai who hoti hi sab se cute..adorable.. sweet..good..intelligent..talented..blah blah blah.. Tanya is the best..
She is assigning places like a boss! Good
going siren ki beti..godd going to bhi apne husband ko agai jakai nachaiyeg
fingers pe..! :P
Swayam and Sharon talked though eyes..he think he will loose his control! Tu losse karnaaa plesshhh!
Hahaha.. chal bohat ho gai bakwaas meri.. apan ab direct jump to update k eta line pe marti hoon.. Loved it sexy deepy! I wish you keep rocking like always. .. and again don't get married soon please!
Update next chapter soon lekin abhi tu pen friends aur will love you forever ki baari hai!
Love,Tanya [always the best no matter what]
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