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Plz plz start this ff soon
 
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Lovly Prologue ...Do continue..!

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CHAPTER 1
the story starts after virika's marriage, after the famous virman apple sharing scene...
                       
swamini bua was feeling disgusted on seeing virat and manvi sharing the same apple and chatting while sitting very close to each other... she felt as if the vaderas have run out of money and these two young people were sharing a poor apple... she was wondering how they both were not uncomfortable bitting the same apple after one another and casually passing it too...
                      

she came back to her room and asked tarun to send jeevika into her room...
as jeevika entered, she saw a stern expression on swamini's face and stiffly sitting on the rocking chair...
jeevika : bua ji... aapne bulaya tha..?? (bua ji u called me...??)


swamini : haan jeevika... aao.. baitho.. (yes jeevika... come n sit here...)
jeevika : ji...
swamini : jeevika hum jo kehne jaa rahe hai usko dhyaan se sunna... (jeevika listen carefully to what i am going to say...)
jeevika : ji bua ji... kahie na (ok bua ji...)
swamini : jeevika humein din par din virat aur manvi ki badhti nazdeekiyn pasand nahi aa rahi hai... woh dono jawaan hai aur humein nahi lagta ke un dono ke beech sirf dosti ka rishta hai... (mentioning the apple sharing incident) (jeevika i am really not liking the increasing closeness between virat and manvi... they both are young and i dont think they only have friendship between them...)
jeevika : bua ji...??
swamini : isi liye humne tumhe yahan bulaya hai... hum chahte hai ki tum manvi se pucho ke usko dil main kya hai...?? kyunki hum nahi chahte ki in dono ki koi naadani ki wajah se humare pariwaar ka naam kharaab ho... virat toh hamesha se kisiki parwaah nahi karta par manvi toh ek ladki hai... hum nahi chahte ke koi bhi kaaran se uski izzat par koi daag aaye... (thats why i called you here... i want you to ask manvi about her feelings... because i dont want any act of them to spoil our reputation in society or affect our family's name and fame.. virat has also been like that.. he never cares about what others think or say... but manvi is a girl and i dont want anything to affect her image and character. )
jeevika : bua ji... main jaanti hoon virat aur manvi sirf dost hai... (bua ji i know virat n manvi are just friends...)
swamini : yahi accha hoga jeevika... hum bhi yahi chahte hai... aur ek aur baat manvi tumhari jimedaari hai aur tumhe usse nibhana hoga... hum toh bas yahi kahenge ke kabhi kabhi jawaani mein ki ek galti, humari aane waali poori zindagi par haavi ho sakti hai... (that would be good jeevika... i also want this very thing... i want them to be only friends nothing else... jeevika manvi is your responsibilty and you have to take care of her at every step... i would only say that even a small mistake committed in teenage can spoil your whole life... )
jeevika (now in tears) : ji... main dhyaan rakhungi bua ji... (i will take care of it bua ji...)
swamini : hmm...

jeevika went out and saw virat and manvi together in virat's room.. she just entered the room and took manvi with her...
virat was confused seeing jeevika behave like this... he had never expected jeevika to come like that and take manvi away from him... he didnt know why but it hurted him the way jeevika took manvi away from him... he suddenly felt incomplete n lost...

scene shifts
in virika's room


jeevika : mannu...
manvi : bolo di... kya hua..?? (yes di... what happened...???)
jeevika : mannu pls mujhe sach sach bta k tere aur virat ke beech kya hai...??? (mannu please tell me truthfully... what is going on between you n virat...???)
manvi : kya hai matlab...??? uske aur mere beech kya hoga...??? sochti hoon... ek minute (sorry...??? what do u mean...??? what would be between me n virat...?? lemme think... one minute...)
jeevika : mannu majak ka time nahi hai ye... (mannu this is not the time to joke...)
manvi : diii... mujhe kuch samajh ni aa raha... (di... i cant understand what you are saying...)
jeevika : theek hai... just tell me why in the world were u two sharing a damn apple...??
manvi : apple hi toh share kiya tha... this is no big deal di...
jeevika : ofcourse it is a big deal manvi... u r not understanding manvi... just tell me why... why were u two..
manvi : bcos we were too lazy to go and grab another apple... so we just shared that poor apple... dats it...!!!
jeevika : are you sure...???
manvi : 101 %...
jeevika : tum dono ke beech sirf dosti hi hai na...?? aur kuch toh nai...?? (you two are only friend, right...??? there is nothing else na...???)
manvi : are you trying to say that may be i have feelings for that chep...
jeevika : yes... i do doubt, so do swamini bua ji
manvi : so she is the one who cooked up this... very predictable.. i dnt know why is she jealous of my friendshp with virat...
jeevika : manvi dont dare talk like this for bua ji...
manvi : okkk dii... but how could you think i can love somebody else...
jeevika : dont tell me manvi that you still love him... he left you manvi...
manvi : dii... you heard me right. i still love him...
jeevika : manvi he was not worth you... get over him...
manvi : so who is worth of me mrs. jeevika viren vadera...??? is it that devar of yours...??
jeevika : manvi... just listen to me...
manvi : you listen to me di... I STILL LOVE KABIR... AND I WILL ALWAYS LOVE HIM NO MATTER WHAT... AND I WILL ONLY AND ONLY MARRY HIM...
saying this manvi went from the room...
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
 
PS : SO THATS FOR NOW... GUYS FIRST OF ALL DNT BE UPSET ON  THINKING THAT MANVI LOVES KABIR N BLAH BLAH... JUST HAVE FAITH ON YOUR NAINA... I WILL MAKE IT VERY INTERESTING FOR U ALL TO READ...
 
PLS READ THE NOTE BELOW... ITS DAMN IMPT REGARDING THE PM N ALL...
 
LOVE U ALL SO MUCH...
NAINA

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NOTE

THIS IS MANVI'S KABIR...
KABIR SINGHANIA...
KABIR LOVES MANVI LIKE HELL AND CAN DO ANYTHING FOR HER... HE CAN EVEN KILL HIMSELF IF IT MAKES MANVI SMILE... CALLS HER MANI...
LIVED IN RISHIKESH ONLY AND BELONGS TO A RICH FAMILY... BUT HE LIVES ALONE...
 
     
ISNT HE CUTE N HOT AT THE SAME TYM...??? OFCOURSE HE IS... Blushing Blushing
 
NOW COMING TO THE IMPORTANT THING...
IF U GUYS NEED PM...
PLEASE LIKE THE POST WHERE THE PM LIST IS UPDATED...
 
AND I WILL KEEP ON UPDATING IT FROM TYM TO TYM KEEPING IN MIND YOU ALL ARE COMMENTING N WHO ARE NOT...


Edited by naina927 - 03 January 2013 at 1:06pm

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Yea..will have faith on the part where u wouldnt seperate VirMan... :) First Part is great..want to know how story progresses.. :)

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Posted: 03 January 2013 at 2:16pm | IP Logged
Damn this is awesome so kabir will be the kebab mein haddi
In his ff can't wait to read more was an awesome start
Please do continue soon and do pm me

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Posted: 03 January 2013 at 2:56pm | IP Logged
it was beautiful. I am excited to know the story wud turn out 2 b. please cont soon and pls pm me.

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