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soon kria,shar,neha got ready...rey also freshened up all had their breakfast...rey drooped kria to hospital n 
moved to his flat...

he went in n didnt find anyone in the flat so he moved to his room...he removed his watch n shirt took his towel n 
was abt to enter washroom...he  stood in his tracks when he heard the sound of closing the bedroom door n he 
looked back...

rey: tani door ko kyu baand kiya???

ta: mujhe meri sawal ka jawab chahiye...Angry

rey: kiska jawab(annoyed)

ta: vo kal kya tha rey...

rey: kya tha...??(serious)

tani took his hand in hers...

ta: (innocently) tum..tum mujhe pyaar karthe hona...

rey(loosened the grip) nahi tani mai tumse pyaar nahi kartha...

tani(shouted) tum joot bol rahe ho...

she cupped his face as tears flowed from her eyes...Angry

ta: baby...plz joot maat bolo mai ..mai tumse bahot pyaar karthi hoon n you no that...

rey  removed her hands which cupped his face...

rey: tani tum kyu nahi samaj rahi ho...mai kabhi bi tumhare liye kuch feel nahi kiya...tum sirf meri frnd ho isse zyada 
kuch nahi...dekho tani mai kria se Bahut pyaar kartha hoon...plz understand..(he told her calmly)

tani:nahi(shouted)n threw the wazz which was on nearby table...Angry

rey: aisa hi yeh tum mano ya na mano...(saying this he went towards washroom)

but she  caught his hands...

ta: rey plz i love u...

rey: (looked straight in her eyes)i love oly kria(n he went in)

ta: nahi...aise kabi nahi hoga...kabi nahi(shouted at him n left the room)...

after 10 minutes rey came out of the washroom...n moved to living room were tani was already present n was 
watching tv...so he returned back to his room n called kria...

after 2 to 3 rings she picked it...

kr: hi rey...

rey: hi swt heart...Embarrassed

kria blushed...Blushing

rey: awww ur blushing...mujhe abi dekna hai...LOL

kr: tumhe kaise pata m blushing...

rey: bas mujhe pata chal jata hai...

kr: ok kyun call kiya...??

rey: ohhh!!! mai tumhe call nahi kar sakta...(pouting)Embarrassed

before kria could speak...

sis: dr emergency hai...

kr: ya ill come..

kr: rey...

rey: mai jaanti hoon...bye...love u...

kr: love u too...

tani was standing near the door n was listening to all this...

ta: mujhe kuch karna padega...

after 1 hr...

IN HOSPITAL...

kria had roundings...so she was busy...

sis: dr apko dekne koi haya hai...

kr: ok tell them ill come...

sis; ok dr...

kria was done so she moved to her cabin...

kr: aap??Confused

p: haan mai...

kr: ji kahiye...

p: mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai...

kr: boliye...

p: rey ko bool jau...

kr: wat??

p: yes...

p: u knw wat mujhe pata nahi rey ko tummeh kya accha lagatha hai(tum andhe ho kyaAngry)...jo bi ho i want u to leave him...

kr: aisa kabi nai hoga...u can leave...

p: dekho tum mujhe nahi jaante ho...rey sirf mera hai do u get that sirf mera humhare beech jo kuch bi ayega mai 
usse chodoonga nahi...

kr: dekho tani m nt at all intersted in ur bull shit...u can leave...mai tumse issiliye itna aachi tarah baat kar rahi 
hoon kyu ki tum swayam ki behen ho...

ta: oh plzzz swayam mera bhai(a small laugh) he is nt my brother...

ta: mai sirf yeh chata hoon ki tum rey se dhoor ho...

kr: nahi gayi toh(spoke in attitude)

ta: ull regret it...

kr: ok vll see...so plz can u...

tani glared at her n dashed out...

meantime rey called her...she was in her deep thaughts she ignored the call...but it was ringing continiously...so 
she picked it up..

rey: hi baby..itna der kyu laga di...

kr: tumhari tani gf ke baare mai soch rahi thi...(she just let out  but it had hurt rey...)

rey: kya tani meri gf...lagtha yeh tum bahot busy ho ill call u later..(n he cut the call)

kr: kaat diya...oh god kria tu bikul jalli hai...she again called him bt he was nt picking...

shar entered her cabin...

sh: kya hua kria tum itna tensed kyu ho...

kria told her everythin...abt tani n all...

sh: wat??? vo hahi thi yahan y didnt u call me...uski sar pe jo booth sawar hai rey ka...usse utarthi...

kr: ab mai kya karoon...??(pouting)

sh:rey se uss tarah baat karne ki zaroorat thi kya?? tum bi na...ab jaakar manoa...

kr: but yahan...

sh: ill manage u go...

kria exitedly took her bag hugged shar kissed her on cheeks..n ran to the door...

sh: hello madam..

kr: (she towards shar)kkya??

sh: rey ka adress pata hai kya...

kria bit her tongue n smiled sheepishly..

sh: ill msg u...

kr: ok bye...

sh: bye...pagal

kria moved to rey's house...

kria rang the bell n rey opened it...she smiled wide but he just went in...

kria: (thinkin) itna gussa...

she entered n was looking round the house...n finally went to rey's room as she saw rey moved to the room..she 
entered n locked the door behind...rey was busy in his laptop...

kr: hi rey...(no response)

kr: (thinkin ) kuch kar kria...

she sat nxt to him...

kr: sorry rey..(no response)

he was drowned in lap top..really naa...LOLLOL

kr: rey m sorry vo bas...

rey: kya??? kria tum sab log ko hua kya hai...vo tani humesha mera peeche padi rehthi yeh n tum toh maine socha 
atleaast ull understand but nahi...mai kitni baar aur kahoon ki taani is not my girf frnd...i dont love her...i love only 
u...but tum bi yahi keh rahi ho ki tani my gf(he said loud...)...

kr: (looking down) soory n she got up n took her bag n was abt to leave...

but rey caught hold of her wrist n turned her towards him she banged on him...

he felt shattered his love was had  tears...he couldnt take it...

rey: kria m sorry...

she placed her palm on his mouth...

kr: sshhh!!! m sorry rey mujhe aise nahi kehna chahiye tha...m sry rey vo tani itna kuch kehdiya issilye...

he removed her hends...

rey: kya kaha usne..(angry_)

kria told him everythin...

rey caught ger hand...

rey: chalo..

kr: kaha...

rey: ill make her clear ki that i dont love her...

kr: chodo na rey...

rey: aise kaise...blah blah 

kria placed her finger in his lips...

kr: kitne bolte ho tum rey...hum kisi ko apne pyaar ko prove karne ki zaroorat nahi hai...so leave...

rey smild at her...she removed her finger n sat on the bed...n was lookin around..

he pulled her n he sat on the bed n he made her sit on his lap...both shared a llhh...

Mere bina main rehne laga hoon
Teri hawa mein behne laga hoon...

rey tucked her hairs behind...as she closed her eyes with his mere touch...

Jaane main kaise, tera hua hoon
Mujhe toh lagta hai main shayad tere dil ki dua hoon haan...

he caressed her face with his ..n kissed her eyes...

Tujhko jo paaya aha
Toh jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye tham jaaye bas jaaye hum dono ke darmiyaan
Tujhko jo paaya aha
Toh jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye tham jaaye bas jaaye hum dono ke darmiyaan

she blushed n got up but stood as he caught her duppata...
he came to her n hugged her from back...n kissed her shoulders..
he moved her hairs frnt n kissed her nape...

Pehle se zyada
Main jee raha hoon
Jabse main tere, dil se jura hoon
Raahon pe teri, main toh chala hoon
Tu meri manzil hai tere kadmon pe bas rukne laga hoon haan

he lifted her in his arms...n placed her on the bed n came on her...
he traced his fingers from her forehead to nose n down to lips...
he gulped seeing her trembling lips...which was so inviting...

Tujhko jo paaya (tujhko jo paaya) aha
Toh jeena aaya (jeena aaya)
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye tham jaaye bas jaaye hum dono ke darmiyaan
Tujhko jo paaya (tujhko jo paaya) aha
Toh jeena aaya
Ab yeh lamha thehar jaaye tham jaaye bas jaaye hum dono ke darmiyaan

he inched forward n took her lips in his...
he sucked her lower lip n she his upper lip...
it was a wild one...Embarrassed
they broke as of no oxygen...
he looked in her eyes n could see oly immense love for him...
seeing his intense gaze she blushed...

she got up n kissed his jawline...n looked at him he had closed his eyes...
she immediately pulled his cheeks...

rey: ouch kria!!! rubbing his cheeks..

n he rested his heads on her lap...she laughed at his chididhness n caressed his hairs...rey was all smiley 
smileyBig smileBig smile...he caught her one hand n hugged that hand n closed his eyes...

hogaya hwzz it guys...
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feel free to tell anythin u wanted to tell abt the updte...
iss baar no demand u can take it where u wantLOLLOLLOL
love u guysEmbarrassed

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