KR OS: Raging Desires - Page 6

-Ocean.eyes-

@-Ocean.eyes-

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Posted: 11 years ago

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stil sum1 wants my view

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Puja

@puja_arsha

IF-Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

Hush!!! Finally maine pdh lia... I think one of d longest OS's i have evr read... Kya likha hai tune... Mazaa aa gya pdhkr... It ws a full-on roller coaster ride fr me... Phle wo frnds bane... Phr kria confessed her feelings...meko to laga ab yeh dono kbi baat ni karenge ...bt dey became best frnds...dat ws amazing... Phr rey kisi aur ko propose karna chahta tha only 2 make d IT couple f d town...ajeeb bt party mai kria ko kiss kia...haye!!!*off 2 KR land* phr uske baad kria became tlk f town dats y he wnted 2 b wid her...jerk... He finally proposed her ...itna casual tha wo...aisa laga car test drive ke lie mmang rha ho...*my weird imagination* phr baad mai relationship mai hokar b dey wer nt in it...dat ws smthng new fr me... They made out everytym dey met...ab b rey dint realise ki he luvs her... Kria ne kya mast jhada usko... He ws jealous...yhi hoga na agr itni hot chic ho to... Finally he realised... Finally they wer 2gethr in d end... Luved this OS... Smthng different aftr long... Majjaa aa gya... Plz write more... M dying 2 read...

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Fida

@aTTiTude_dIvA

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Posted: 11 years ago

plzzz give a part 2 for this...

pretty plzzz

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Konpal Gupta

@-CRJ-

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Posted: 11 years ago

ye bhi maine mob se padha tha!

arh!! Itna lamba.

main beech mein so gayi thi.

2-3 parts mein de deti ek saath post kardi puri ramayan!

par sacchi mast tha!

ek dum jhakaas!

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Gayatri Jethani

@GayatriJethani

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Posted: 11 years ago

sorry for such a late comment

coming back to os

it was surely a long os i have readed till now.. but it was worth

you always come with new and interesting concept...

stranger... then confession... frnds... bestfrnds... couple... 👏

twist and turns were USP of this os... and i agree with kriya that rey is surely a JERK...

but overall it was fabulous...

keep writing many mores...

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Akanksha

@Effacious

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Posted: 10 years ago

okay now that was hell long...

uff...

thak gayi...

i took me more than 15 mins i guess... coz i was dng multitasking along with it... 😆

coming to it...

it was longgg... yet nice...

all abt the confusion boys usually have b/w frnshp n love...

and Kria getting frustrated all over...

but finally...they r getting to sort things...

in all... long.. yet nice os...

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TenTinyBreaths

@TenTinyBreaths

IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 years ago

finally!!!!!!!!

i thought rey would b nvr able to figure out wat he actually wants...
trust me.. i so wanted to beat this Rey wen he acted like a real jerk..
but thn ends well toh i've no prblm either..😉

nice OS... 😊

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