KR OS: Raging Desires

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yaayyy!!!!!! finally maine fir se padh lia 😃 🥳
*phew* yaar sach mai bohat bohat bohat lamba update h ye to 😳
ur record break update 🤣

okh!! now coming to update
waise toh you knw my vichar verbally on dis bt still you want written too so i m here 😆

Faadu concept😃
Perfectly n very beautifully written😊
n da way you showed rey n kria frndship was awsome
coz acc to me EK LADKA AUR EK LADKI BFF to kbhi ni ban skte...personal experince h 😉 yeah normal frnds ban sakte h ok na 😛

i love dere first kiss tough wo attractiveness ke karan thi bt still ek alag sa fire tha frm rey side mostly 😆 coz we awl knw ki kria to kya feel krti h yske bare mai 😉

n den wo rey ka mind war before pool party dat was one of my fav part...bolo ganda dimag on work 🤣

okh!!! i lyk da way rey asked her for date...sachi mai kria ko to pta ni kitna GRANTED lia h is bande ne

bt in da end i love da way kria taunt him for another chic n his attitude towards her...seriously wo JAB TAK..TAB TAK was best part for me 😆

n in b/w u showed sweet sweet rey too...who get jealous n his possesive freling i lyk it alot...n last mai jo rey ne confess kia dat was really sweet 😊

so in whole i love ur dis OS alot 😃
n ha i lub u jiii
Edited by shaffy_arsha - 11 years ago

RES 😃Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 11 years ago

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mera dil toh kar raha hai ki tujhe pakad jar maaru.. abey kitna lamba.. main so jaati toh?? ... (cell pe sab lamba lagta hai 😛

unres..
starting from the top
kya likha hai tune.. nahi likha kya hai??
yeh sab hai kya?? best frnz turning out couples woh bhi aise..
woh kisi aur ko propose karne ki jurat rakhta hai. (mujhe toh pehle se pete tha)
haye ram.. isne toh party mein kiss kiya achha hua kisine dekha nahi..
but do like describing Kria in swim wear I remember vield temptation mein bhi aisa discription tha somewhat.. anyways usko side mein rakh.. woh sab hone ke baad jhagda.. menu badaa mazaa aaya..
oh teri yeh toh London chali gayi.. bechara ek mahine tadpa.. naah bechara nahi hai.. gadha..
hm.. phir frnz..
huh isne use propose kiya.. I mean seriously.. oh just to b IT couple of the town.. tu iss Rey ko sambhal kar rakh mujhe mila toh iska gala dabaa dungi..
phir se kiss.. that too hanging out with frnz.. phir breakup..
but I loved the end.. the way she shows the other side of her aur woh confused soul.. naah.. jealous.. naah.. chod main khud confuse hu iske liye naam sochne k liye..

but it has come out really well.. but I want a 2nd part to this.. abhi toh they have started freshly but nothing cleared...
mujhe chahiye matlab chahiye.. *demanding like a kid*Edited by -shenz- - 11 years ago

one of d longest OSs!! Edited by shukti_19 - 11 years ago

Sachi mai lamba hai 😳 I really do need to wait till Spring break.. Tab tak reserve? 😳 Abhi I have to go do assignments. Kal baat karte hai 🤗 LY

a totally different and fab concept...applauses

u seriously deserve an award for this
very different nd creative OS
i applaud u :D
great work
thnx 4 da pm

This was pretty big..
A superb one..

I loved the way finally how Rey let out his feelings..
He was not sure but what he said was from his heart..
He did not manipulate things like he did it first..
And About Kria all I will say is she is a sweet heart...
She is only person whom I can see bearing so much within and still keeping the person comfortable till she can and  even making him realize what she meant..

the sweet possessiveness of Rey when he wanted to know her first was uber cute...

awsome os...
Luvd it...
Thankx 4 d pm