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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 1:11pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aditi_4ver

Nice!!!
@Sahas n parul; guys, both of u r awesome writers!!!   Hug  Thumbs Up  
The update was too good! Will be waiting for the next part...    Day Dreaming
 
thnq sooo much..
 

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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by chaichil

wow this was so osum

both of u rily rocked it here

bt yuvreen ka kiss ek bura sapna...ouch tht hurtzzz

bt still luvd it...
thnq tanya di...but v have written this part after yuvreen kiss..not aftr that dream..
sooo...v ol knw ur a fab writer..
should i cntinue it???

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Posted: 04 January 2013 at 10:09pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by cherry.parul0

Originally posted by chaichil

wow this was so osum

both of u rily rocked it here

bt yuvreen ka kiss ek bura sapna...ouch tht hurtzzz

bt still luvd it...
thnq tanya di...but v have written this part after yuvreen kiss..not aftr that dream..
sooo...v ol knw ur a fab writer..
should i cntinue it???



yeh bhi koyi puchne walli baath hein...ofcurse u shuld continue...

pls do write cus even u two r really amazing...
Big smile 

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 9:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by chaichil

Originally posted by cherry.parul0

Originally posted by chaichil

wow this was so osum

both of u rily rocked it here

bt yuvreen ka kiss ek bura sapna...ouch tht hurtzzz

bt still luvd it...
thnq tanya di...but v have written this part after yuvreen kiss..not aftr that dream..
sooo...v ol knw ur a fab writer..
should i cntinue it???



yeh bhi koyi puchne walli baath hein...ofcurse u shuld continue...

pls do write cus even u two r really amazing...
Big smile 

thnx dear...waise aap bhi likhne main kam nahi hai madam

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 9:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sahashrabdidash

Originally posted by chaichil

Originally posted by cherry.parul0

Originally posted by chaichil

wow this was so osum

both of u rily rocked it here

bt yuvreen ka kiss ek bura sapna...ouch tht hurtzzz

bt still luvd it...
thnq tanya di...but v have written this part after yuvreen kiss..not aftr that dream..
sooo...v ol knw ur a fab writer..
should i cntinue it???



yeh bhi koyi puchne walli baath hein...ofcurse u shuld continue...

pls do write cus even u two r really amazing...
Big smile 

thnx dear...waise aap bhi likhne main kam nahi hai madam


thnku madam sab apki kripa hein WinkWink

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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 2:01pm | IP Logged

sooo...thnq ol of u...u liked it!!!!!

ur like really encouraged me to post d nxt part...
sooo...not wasting ur precious time...herez d update...
plzzz...comment..nd give ur feedbacks...

UVI use pyar se dekh rha tha,uski baatein sunke hairan bi tha.
'bs YUVI mujhe yhi khna tha,aage tumhari mrzi'wo jane lgti h...
Uvi:topper ek min.ruk.
Wo apne rum me jata h,or wo neck chain with F [frndship] locket in it.. leke aata h...
U:topper,mujhe malum h,mere trust krna,shayed bhoot mushkil h...
Main hu hi ni us kabil..phr bi..ek bat khna chunga..
,or hm jb se mile h us din se aaj tk misunderstndng,ek dusre pe chilana yhi krte aye h...lekin main tumhein kal yha se apna true frnd,ek dost bnake dekhna chahta hu...
Wo suvreen ka hath pkdhta h or wo chain uske hath me dedeta h'agr topper tumne ye phn liya to main smjhuga ki tumne meri dosti accept krli,mujhe maaf krdiya' mujhpe ek bar or trust kiya..
Tumhare liye bhulna bhoot muskil h topper mujhe pta h lekin abi tumne kha,bura sapna samajh k bhul jao
Or agr ye ni bi phnogi to mujhe dhukh ni hoga,bs zindgi bhr ye feel hoga ki glti ki lekin uski maafi ni mili...jo khin na khin deserve krta hu main...
Uvi cntinously bol rha h,orsuvreen use innocently use dekhti h..
Nd suvreen wo chain leke chali jati h...
suvreen wo chain dekhti h,use rkh deti h,nd wo taiyar hone chali jati h...

Uvi taiyar hoke jane lgta h,

suvreen ready ho jati h,wo chain dekhti h or uske k 7th me yuvi ki snap h or khti h'pta ni,dil kh rha h,tum pe trust kru...or maine apna trust bi to khud toda h..to glti srf tumhari keise...
Wo muskurati h'mere liye ye sb bhulna aasan ni hoga,pr ye dil tumpe pe trust krna chahta h.'wo confused h...uvi ki saari baatein yad krti h...
Wo auto me beith k party hall k liye nikal jati h'or saara scene yad krti h,wo disturb h.
Or party hall me uvi disturb h..
He thout'pta ni kya faisla hoga..'


suvreen bi puoch jati h...
Lights off ho jati h...
b'day boy cake k pas khada hota h
Then sudden lights on hoti h..
Sb clapping krte h,
uvi suvi ko ni dekhta to wo udas ho jata h...
Tbi raathi khta h'bhai suvreen...
Ekdum se uvi door ki trf dekhta h or suvreen ko dekhta rh jata h
(She z wearing suit in green colour,state open hair,lukin hr vry prety,adorable,simplicity,vry cute.) ,or wo bhoot khush ho jata h..
annie:wow.suvreen bhoot cute lg ri h yuvi..
Uvi:he s again lost nd say'angel lg ri h'
Suddn uvi uska neck dekhta h,wo chain uske neck me ni h,wo again sad ho jata h..lekin wo apne aap ko sambhalta h
b'day boy:hello yuvi,how r u?
Uvi:i m fyn..
I hope u lyk it dis decoration,..
:yes,i loved it,.suvreen ko dekh k bolta h,or phr yuvi guse me us boy ko dekhta h...
hey-one min.
hey my beautiful frnd..[he goes to suvi nd talk to her]
suvreen ati h,vo hand shake krte h...suvreen wish him b'day
Or dono hs-2 k baatein krte h...
Uvi dekh k jealous hota h

Or uvi wha jane wala hota h tbi suvreen bolti h'yuvraj'
uvi stop.,
suvreen uske saamne aati h,'yuvraj,dosti srf dene se ni hoti,dost khud chain phnaye to,dosti strng hoti h...
Uvi surprised nd uske face pe shining wid smile thi...

 



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Posted: 05 January 2013 at 7:24pm | IP Logged
awww this was soo cute
ekdum pakka walla cute tha...

do update soon...ur a fab writer

and yuvi suvi ko apne haathon sein chain pehenatha hein...kya baath cuteness ki toh hadh hi paar ho gayi thi...

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Posted: 06 January 2013 at 8:04am | IP Logged
awww...so so so cute... i luved it...!

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