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YUVREEN SS- Yuvreen Duniya-part 5 updated

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Posted: 01 January 2013 at 9:11am | IP Logged

Yuvreen Duniya

Hey hello frnds n forum memberss

dis is me...sahasLOLwell this os is a continuation from the yuvreen os which kaveri started(though she is not cuming online dese daysOuch).You ppl wrote a lot but u did not continue

Thanks to Cherry a.k.a. Parul for making me remember about this os n thnx to her again for agreeing to write wid me.

Now this is continued from yuvreen kiss by ahaan not me its us.Big smile

so here it is hope u like it.


Note(Story so far)


I know any of you may be confused about the story,so here is a short summary what happened in the previous parts.
Yuvreen were together,I mean boyfriend and girlfriend.One day in the canteen a girl called Rhea due to the spilled water was about to fall down when Yuvraj caught him.The girl was fully sticking to him and was not leaving Yuvraj.For that Suvreen became jealous and started to shout on Yuvraj.Their fighting became hoarse and Yuvi was about to slap Suvreen.
From then Suvren felt uncomfprtable and could trust Yuvraj.
So that's the story till now.You can read what happened next from Part 1 of this thread.Big smile



Yuvreen ka eyecontact breaks...dono ghost banke khade hai...
Dono ko samajh nahi aa rha tha,ki kya kare...
suvreen wo ekdum ghost ki tarah ho jati hai...she presses her palm against her lips n keeps her head on the wall n she's continusly cryng..
yuvi is fully shocked what happnd... ye use khud samajh nahi aa raha tha wo kya kare?

suvreen apne hosh me nahi hai...na hi kuch bolne ki halat me...

Wo na uvi ke taraf dekhti hai na kisi aur ke   taraf... udhr se rote hue woh bhag jati hai...

yUvi use rokne ki koshish nahi karta becoz wo khud apni galti maanta hai...
suvi goes to home by auto n closed herself in her rum nd cntinusely cries...

Or idhr rum me yuvi also cries...
'main out of control kyun ho gaya,maine aisa kyn kiya?maine suvreen ko phr rula diya,phr uska trust...main  nahi hun  kisi k trust k kaabil... he's cryng...

nd wo gussa main apne hath ko table pe hit karta hai...
suvreen rote rote wahin zameen pe so jati hai..
Uvi bi rote hue zmeen pe leta hua hai bt nt sleeping...
raathi:bhai aap clg ni aye,main wait kr rha tha..
Uvi:hmm..m nt well..

yuvi-'mujhe suvreen se bat krni pdegi,mujhe usse maafi magni pdegi'
Wo apne hostel rum se bahr ata h wo dekhta h suvreen hasi-hasi ke naro se baatein kar rahi hai...
he was surprised...he den went to her


U:topper mujhe tumse kuch baat karni hai..
naro:ok,main chalti hu,party me milte h..
unke kisi frnd ki b'day party tha...


suvi:yuvraj,mujhe tumse koi bat ni karni,
Uvi use pkd k uske rum me le jata hai...
'main tumse maafi magna...

suvi(rote huye):nahi yuvraj,glti meri thi,maine apni zindgi ki sabse badi galti yha ake ki... 

yuvi-tum itne shaanti se...
suvi:main kya karu...sabko btau ki kya hua...mujhe tumse koi bat nahi karni...plz yuvi..again start cryng...
Uvi ki aankho me bi aansu aa jate hai,wo waha se chala jata hai to hide his tears...

IN THE EVENING

Party k liye sb taiyar ho rahe hai
mannu:bhai darwaaza kholiye,mujhe puchna main keisa lag raha hunLOL...
Wo bahut darwaaza knock karta hai,bt yuvi gives no response...

mannu ko tension ho jati hai,wo bhaga bhaga n suvi ko call krta hai 

'suvreen bhai...

suvi:bhai,kya hua yuvraj ko?
mannu:tum dono ke bich kuch hua hai kya,means jhagda hua hai?
suvi(makes a worried face):hua kya?yuvraj thik toh hai...
mannu:pata nahi,lekin jab bhai hurt hote hai,tab wo apne aap ko kamre me band karlete hai..mujhe bahut dar lag raha hai,kahin kuch galat...
suvi(shouts):chup kar yaar...aisa mat bol...yuvraj itna darpok bhi nahi hai...ek kam karo... raathi ko sath tu party me jaa,main yuvraj ko leke aati hu'
m:pakka.
s: pura pakka..
Wo chale jate hai...

suvreen (dhire se knocks)
Then sudden yuvraj chilata hai...mannu tum jao yaha se,main thik hu'
s:yuvraj main hu main...

yuvraj is startled n recognises from her voice dat its suvreen...


Tabhi wo door open kardeta hai... 
suvreen ek dum se apni najar jhuka leti hai...
uvi:tum,yaha,koi kam hai?
suvi-yuvraaj...tum ye kya kar rahe ho...dekho yuvraj...taali ek hath se ni bajti,taali bajane k liye dono hatho ka milna jaruri hai,glti hui hai,lekin sirf tumse ni mujhse bhi...phir tum apne ko saja kyun de rahe ho??Ek bura sapna samajh ke usse bhul jao...


so dats all...hope u lyk it...Smile

do lyk n cmmnt moreLOL

link 2 the previous continuation-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3213034

P.S.-I know dis saddy saddy things u dont want but thoda twist le aaye aap sabke soch peLOLso rotten things n chappal maalas are allowed...I will accept it wid a big smileBig smile


INDEX

part 1-dis one

part 2-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3372148&TPN=2

Note-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3372148&TPN=4&#85544772

part 3-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3372148&TPN=5

part 4-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3372148&TPN=9

part 5-http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3372148&TPN=13




Edited by sahashrabdidash - 07 August 2013 at 9:46am

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hey...finally u posted it.. guys..this is my 1st attempt.. plzzz comment..howz it??

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Posted: 02 January 2013 at 11:47am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Aditi_4ver

Nice!!!
@Sahas n parul; guys, both of u r awesome writers!!!   Hug  Thumbs Up  
The update was too good! Will be waiting for the next part...    Day Dreaming
thnx dear shashaSmile
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thnk u everyone for ur likes
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Posted: 02 January 2013 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
wow this was so osum

both of u rily rocked it here

bt yuvreen ka kiss ek bura sapna...ouch tht hurtzzz

bt still luvd it...
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awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Originally posted by maria_rox14

awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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