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VIRIKA FF: Long-distance (part 2 and 3-Pg 6 and 7) (Page 3)

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Posted: 01 January 2013 at 7:25am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashna1406

its awesome 
superbly superbly written  :D
n yess i encouraged u to write coz its mindblowing :D
u have to continue it soon but it needs to be longer coz
dil maange more :P lmao

you update your one at first :P :D 

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Posted: 01 January 2013 at 7:29am | IP Logged

Part 1 :

[9 o'clock]

Shit I'm late again. Why didn't I wake up earlier?

As she finished talking with herself, she got out from her bed which she loves most. She went to washroom. She didn't have much time for breakfast so she just grab her bag and went to college.

[Bus station]

Jeevika to bus which was about to go: Hold on hey hold on

Just by the bus passed by her. (Oh no not today. I have got Health and Social care lesson today and I have already missed half of it. If I wait here 15 minutes for another bus I'm sure i will be late so it's better to walk so that I can reach earlier.)

Jeevika went half an hour late for the lesson.  So she didn't want to enter in the half lesson and get detention from teacher so she just went in college cafe.

(Lisa, Libya and Kate was Jeevika's best friend since childhood among them Lisa was closet one.)

Lisa: Hey Jeevika, I thought you had a lesson.

Jeevika: Hi. Yes I do but I came late and I don't want to go in half of the lesson and get detention from Mrs Kelly. So I thought I would rather read by myself.

Libya: oh yah you did it right. Kate was asking about you in the morning. She might kill you. But why were so you late? Let me guess did you wake up late today as well?

Jeevika: wohoo congratulation Libya. You guessed it right. Clap ….Clap ….Clap

Everyone kept laughing while she said that.

[At lunch time]

Jeevika: hey Kate. How was lesson? hope you did had a great time 

Kate: Jeevika what the hell hey. Didn't I tell you to be in lesson today? Don't say me that you slept till morning.

Jeevika: oh god. I didn't slept I was just dreaming. (winks) 

Lisa: LOL. Yah dreaming right.

Jeevika: sorry. It won't happen again. I promise Kate.

Kate: aww that's okay. I told Miss that you were not feeling well.

Jeevika: oh Jesus!!!!I hope everyone gets a friends like you. Love you guys.

They were hugging each other. A group hug but just while Kate saw a guy coming over them who had a cute smile.

Kate: Man, he's so cute.

Jeevika: oh hello we are girl not man okay. 

Kate: shut up Jeevika. I'm not talking about you guys. (They were still hugging) Look he is coming toward us. 

Jeevika: huh what do you mean? (jeevika was about to turn back….) 

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Posted: 01 January 2013 at 7:33am | IP Logged
first one to comment
interesting concept 
wondering whats the past do cont soon n pm me 

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Posted: 01 January 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged

Superb

Cont soon

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 01 January 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged
It's superb plz continue soon and thanks for the pm

Edited by Virika_kryanfan - 01 January 2013 at 8:31am

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Posted: 01 January 2013 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Interesting concept
Eagerly waiting fr virika reply
Update soon
Thnks fr the pm

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Posted: 01 January 2013 at 8:55am | IP Logged
nice start! continue soon;)

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Great!continue soon and plz pm me

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