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Posted: 02 January 2013 at 12:27am | IP Logged
Originally posted by banditqueenn.

That was beautiful,indeed Embarrassed Such a prolific writer you are Big smile I haven't written anything,except some torn sheets of rotten crap, cheesy Shayaris and random prologues jo uske aage badhte nee Stern Smile ROFL *Self-insult* Chaddho LOL Toh this one is hugely inspiring Approve 

Jenna,in here,happens to be one of the most simple woman who falls in love;probably love at first sight.She loves her man unconditionally but can't dare enough to say ily,jo hum har rooz ek dusre ko kehte hain LOL jaise peanuts bech rahe hoon ROFL Nevertheless,she manages a self realization. Isn't that too beautiful in itself ? EmbarrassedSketching a character through your imagination is not hard,but to let the character captivate the mind of a reader and make the reader flow in the direction of  anxiety is all that it takes to make a writing HIT Approve and you my lass were undoubtedly successful Hug

P.S.-In-case,my BIWI loves someone or is attracted to him,in either of the case I get a PM;ASAP Approve 




u summed up d story in 4 lines LOLBig smile 

@bold.. vampy..u never show the thoughtful side of urs.. sahi baat kahi.. i did try to do justice to imagination.. fail ya pass.. well.. u all know it better!

thanks for such a wonderful comment Hug and i hope to read woteeva u have written.. dont u dare call it crappy Angry  the writer in u has to get out Evil SmileLOL

at the last line.. u will get to know.. if that happenes u get the whole story!! 

love u like peanuts PD ROFLHug

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Posted: 02 January 2013 at 12:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Pari93.9

Wow it was perfect os with all emotions:) very well written:)

thank u so much for the kind words Big smile  pari.. m glad that u liked it! 

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 12:23pm | IP Logged
Painful but beautifully writtenClapClap...
I can so relate to Jenna!! I know how it feels to leave your friends, your school, your home [and the crush ofcourseLOL] when moving to a different place... I still remember those final goodbyes I said to my besties...and to some it remained untold.
Social networking wasn't so popular then...forget that, even computers were owned by just a few!! Staying in touch is so much easier now...
PS: If I'm sounding like an old lady talking about her good old days, then sorry for that.. I'm 21TongueTongue

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Posted: 12 January 2013 at 12:43pm | IP Logged
nice

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Posted: 15 January 2013 at 4:44am | IP Logged
Originally posted by KwitKatts

Painful but beautifully writtenClapClap...
I can so relate to Jenna!! I know how it feels to leave your friends, your school, your home [and the crush ofcourseLOL] when moving to a different place... I still remember those final goodbyes I said to my besties...and to some it remained untold.
Social networking wasn't so popular then...forget that, even computers were owned by just a few!! Staying in touch is so much easier now...
PS: If I'm sounding like an old lady talking about her good old days, then sorry for that.. I'm 21TongueTongue

thanks a lot dear! 

just a random thing popped in my head.. so yea.. i did meet people who wud feel different in a new place.. ! 

nothin to be sorry about.. socialising was alien then.. somehow bonds were stronger ! 

thanks for the encouraging words!

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