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in love with my jiju updated on thread 2

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"Geet you are mad! tera dimaag kharab hai! i mean how can you evem think about it? he is your jij's for god's sake, your sister's husband and you are saying you love him! that's preposterous, in my opinion you should go see a psychiatrist" a very disgruntled and angry meera shouted at her best friend geet

"relax meera, its not like the way you think it is, i mean yes i love him, have always loved him, but my love for him is, how do i explain , i never tried coming between him and di and never will, i know he loves her but i love him too and i dont have any control over my feelings"

"gosh geet you are incorrigible, you are all of sixteen and he is 26, 10 years older than you and your sister's husband, how can you think about him the way you do, get a hold of yourself buddy, anyways i think its just an infatuation and it'll pass and yeah you are right i should chill, so i'll do that, come lets go home it's already too late"

but what did meera know, what she had brushed off as mere infatuation, is much more than that
it's love
pure unadulterated selfless love
that beleves only in giving and expects nothing in return
its love the feeling that geet had for her jiju maan
will maan ever reciprocate

hey guys, i was reading and had an idea so i thought why not pen it down
based on your response i'll give you the next update and add up the character sketch but i can assure you one thing you'll not be disappointed
so please like it and do give me your valued suggestions and comments



chapter 1


chapter 2


chapter 3

chapter 4

chapter 5

chapter 6

chapter 7

chapter 8

Chapter 9


chapter 11


Edited by doublecross - 20 May 2013 at 4:08am

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Posted: 31 December 2012 at 12:42am | IP Logged
Shocked she's mad...she's in love with her bro in law Wacko

LOL i bet there's a step sister thing in the story...awesome start
and shocking title LOL!

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Posted: 31 December 2012 at 12:50am | IP Logged
great concept...continue soon dear...i was waiting for this type of story

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Posted: 31 December 2012 at 12:50am | IP Logged
.awesome start

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Posted: 31 December 2012 at 1:00am | IP Logged
interesting start
different concept
continue soon

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Posted: 31 December 2012 at 1:06am | IP Logged
What!!she lves hr jiju who's 10yrs eldr than geet, diffrent frm othr ff.want to knw abt it in details,unique cncept.cnt sn.

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Posted: 31 December 2012 at 1:11am | IP Logged
quite interesting..pls cont soon




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Posted: 31 December 2012 at 1:14am | IP Logged
Hiii Smile
read the prologue its vry hatke
geet in love with her jiju Tongueand upar se geet is just 16
really interestd to see how the story cums out

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