Joined: 05 March 2005
i cant type much coz i have mehndi on my hand
we r having a pooja at our house
anyways keep up the good work
write the next part soooooooooooon!!!!!!!!!!!
no pressure honey!!lol!!!
Joined: 01 March 2005
i like it some parts were funny.
all i hav to say filmi very filmi
bombay you gotta continue the dream scene yaar
Joined: 02 May 2005
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Joined: 07 April 2005
We missed you too Bomby! And now that you're back, where's the next part?
too good yaar.. just too good!!
Joined: 28 March 2005
Joined: 12 March 2005
The scene starts in a beautiful place….with beautiful mountains in the back..and grass all over…It looks like this…
Dk, in a shining black sherwani and grey dupatta is walking on the grass…does he look hot or what!
Background Music: tina tina tin tin tin tin..tin tina tin tin …
A girl in a black choli (Long, black skirt thing with a short black blouse) is running across the grass holding her duppata in the air…She runs towards his direction …while she runs passed him…her duppata slowly touches Dk' face
Dk: (with his face under her duppata and his eyes closed) Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm…. Pari pari hain ek pari … (the duppatta falls down from his face) aasma se aa giri ….(the girl is none other than disha …she turns her face towards him…and shyly smiles at him and then starts to leave …when Dk grabs her duppata by his hand) saamne mere khadi…..mujhe usse pyaar ho gayaaa..haaaaaaa mujhe usse pyar ho gaya… (gets closer to her and she shyly runs away ,holding her ghagra, without her dupatta ) Pari pari hain ek pari …aasma se aa giri …(continues looking at running disha ).saamne mere khadi…..mujhe usse pyaar ho gaya..(falls down on the grass and hides his face under her smooth black dupatta)haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa mujhe usse pyar ho gayaaaa ( turns and twist around under her duppata on the grass....he gets lost in her dupatta)
Disha who is in a blue choli now is moving in circles…holding the corners of her duppata…Dk in a blue sherwani comes running out of nowhere and grabs her dupatta…She stops moving in circles and shylu, blushingly looks down…
Dk: (goes behind her back)Woh chand taro ki roshini hain…(slowly
and gently puts her dupatta on her head) woh mandiro ka diiyaa…(puts his head
on her right shoulder)us jaaneman ki bus ek jhalak ne pagal mujhe kar diyaaa……(turns
her around by her waist ….so she is facing him) woh mere sasso ki ragini hain…(gets
down on his knees) who mere dooooono jaha…who maagle jo mujhse kabhi to…(puts
his one hand on his heart and puts his head down) dil kya usse de du jaan….(he
looks up only to notice that disha has disappeared…..Hmmmmmmm Pari pari hain ek
pari …aasma se aa giri ….saamne mere khadi…..(his palms behind his head) mujhe
usse pyaar ho gayaaaaa..haaaaaaa mujhe usse pyar ho gayaaaa…(walks away on the grass)
Disha in a red choli is running in a field of red roses .....Dk in a red sherwani
is running after her...she is running in front of him, holding her
ghagra and smiling...while Dk gets hold of her hand and pulls her
towards him ...she lands in his arms...her hands on his chest...then
our Dk picks her by her legs and takes circles...while she is holding her dupatta in the air......so
teh dupatta is also taking circles along with them...after a
while Dk puts her down...the duppatta covers both of their faces...so
they are both inside teh duppata...Dk gets closer...when she smiles like CRAZy and runs away with the dupatta..
Dk:(totally mesmerized by her)Haaaaaaaaaaaaa Jo muskurake dekha mujhe to…(hua mera dil fidaaaa…(disha stops running and Dk goes towards her)hain uske
jaisi badi suhani..(points at her...and goes closer)us naazni ki adda….(disha freezes.)haaaa…(gets on his knees)ushi ke khabbo mein khoya rehta
(kisses her hand)
main aaj kal raat bhar…(looks up at her ...she has disappeared)subha
subha jab mein aankhein kholo …(looks everywhere but cannot find her)aaye mujhe who
Dk runs around on teh grass to find her...
Pari pari ek pari …aasma se aa giri ….(sees Disha in a red choli on
the right)saamne mere
khadi…..(sees another disha in a blue choli on the left)mujhe usse
pyaar ho gayaaaaa..( another disha in a black choli runs passes
him)haaaaaaa mujhe usse pyar ho gayaaaa… (gets confused on where to
look and finally all of them disappear....he lies dwon on teh grass) hmmmmm….mujhe usse pyaar ho gayaaaa…(closes his eyes and feels the wind with his eyes closed)haaaa
mujhe usse pyar ho gayaaaa....mujhe uss pyaar ho gayaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa ( who is COMPLETELY lost now)
Dk finally opens his eyes..only to realize that he is in now dream world...but in his office...sitting on his chair.....Dk shakes his head......with a "u r crazy type of an expression)....he is still smiling
lol...hope u gusy liked it..Actually the original song for this scene was supposed to be "Kardoo kammal tere naal soniyeh...naal sonyeh)...but
iIt would have been too R -rated...I am sure I would have gone into too
mcuh detail and made it R -rated...Samy ahs already warned me...Mein
uska dil aur vishwaas dono hi nahi tod sakti....
Soon Disha will also be falling for him...so stay tuned
Joined: 07 April 2005
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