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Ok another long scene....all about one topic " chumma"
Disha'a frightened face! She is standing with her back against the wall….her hands behind her….they are crisscrossed….when Dk attacks from the front…his both palms on the wall..one palm to her left..and the other to her right…with him in the front…… …so he is covering her from all sides. ….They are face to face…
Dk: ( Biggest smile…naughtiest expressions…ready to rock n roll) Haan to hum picchi baar kaha the?
Disha: (nervous) ab buh .... yahi…goa mein
Dk: Mein uski baat nahi kar raha….( gets closer….bigger smile) Mein to us vaade ki baat kar raha tha…jo tumne mujhse kiya tha !
Disha: ( gulp in her throat ) va vah….vaaada?
Dk: Haan…woh vaada.....jo tumne mujhse kiya tha…. ( saying this he gets even closer)..meine apne hisse ka vaada to nibha liya….apne dil ki baat sabke saamne kehdi….aur ab ( gets closer to her…so she can see only his face and nothing else..)ab tumhari baari hain !
Disha: (….to herself…looking down nervoulsy) Oh god…ab kya karu…isse to sab yaad hain…bappa aap hi mujhe is musbat se bacha sakte hain…kya karu..kya karu…karu to kya karu
Disha: Ah woh…..Mujhe koi bola raha hain ( saying this she starts to leave..when dk pulls her her right wrist ……and literally THROWS her back against the wall…so disha's back hits the wall….disha's arms against the wall…one on her right, the other on her left….and dk is holding her wrists..with each of his strong fists)
Disha's nervousness turns into ghussa!….she stares at him evily…with garmi in her eyes ( temper) …in other words Sherni aankhein ….and dk stares back at her with a naughty, EVIL, desire bhari expression…Sharabi aankien …both of them are staring into each other's eyes…very cruelly…..theeki theeki nazro se…..talking to each other…aankhon aaankon ki baat…for example disha looks at him with "I hate u" type of an expression…dk replies with a " I want u" type of an expression…they are staring at staring and each other….very very cruelly…...theeki aur tez nazro se….Background Music : ( zooms in on disha's face)Mircheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
Dk: ( eye to eye…SLOW yet STRONG tone) Aye theekhi mirchi .. …….. (while SLOWLY shaking his head) bahut hogaya tumhara naatak!…. Aur bahut seh liye tumhare nakhre! ( disha ..ghusse se laal…breaths out ..hot air.!) Ab koi bahana nahi chalega!…Mein jo kahonga tumhe who karna hi hoga(with all his love, passion, effort , might, desire, thirst and order) .Kiss me!!!
Disha…eyes widen…eyebrows up…..Disha ki dil ki dhakhan….samjho ek second ke liye ruk gayi….she is not only shocked by his guts….but also impressed…her ghussa again turns into nervousness since he is standing sooo close…looking at her with THIRST and DESIRE! Disha ki to samjho bolti hi band ho gayi…! Garam tava to ek jhatge me thandi ho gayi …
Disha: ( bolti band)Kuh….kuh….kuh…kiss?
Dk: ( aankhon me chamak…chehre pe nikhaar )Haan! ( with LOVE, PASSION, and DESIRE in his eyes…he.moves closer to her)( eye contact) sabse pehle ek dozen…( breaths in) hmmmmmmmmmmm…meethi kisses (smouches in the air) Muaaah
Disha: ( eyes widen…eyebrows up..mouth open…chehra tension ke maare bilkul laal ho gaya hain)
Dk: ( with a thrist in his eyes….moves closer to her)Phir do dozen ….haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai…theekhi theekhi chumiya…( again kisses in the air!)Muaaaah
Disha: ( who is about to collapse….scared to death) ta…tum…
Dk: ( ignoring her ..moves closer…) Phir teen dozen ahaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa…..namkeen …( blows out air…getiing closer)…huhhhhhhh….chat-pati pupiya…
Disha: ( has a gulp in her throat….she is about to pass out….she gets more and more scared by the second….while dk gets closer and naughtier by the second) tum…tum..
Dk: ( moving closer) Phir chaar dozz…( when disha who is about to faint just by thinking about 4 dozen kisses..cuts him off)
Disha: ( pushes him by the chest a little..since he was standing sooo close) Tum paagal to nahi ho gaye?
Dk: ( upset all of a sudden..remvoes his palms from hers…so she is free to mingle) Excuse me? Kya matlab?
Disha: ( trying to explain….calm and polite) Ahhh …dekho….tum jo chahte hoo….woh mein tumhe…( looking down..since she cant face him) nahi de sakti…
Dk: kyun? arre try to karo na…( saying this he gets closer..)
Disha: ( Pushes him off by his chest) ( helpless expression) Nahi de sakti na..
Dk: Lekin kyun?
Disha: Bus! Nahi de sakti to nahi de sakti!
Dk: (who has lost his patience….is ghusse se garam now..chehra to already hi laal ho gaya hain…lipstick ya sandal ki zarurat bhi nahi padi!) What do u mean by nahi de sakti?????? Tumne khud mujhse vaada kiya tha…aur ab jab tumhari baa…
Disha: ( getting mad) Nahi de sakti to nahi de sakti.!.mere saath behes mat karo!
Dk: ( MAD) … O hello madam…behes mein kar raha hoo ya tum?!?!/…Meine thodhe- bahut chumme kya maang liye…tumhare to pank hi nikal aaye
Disha: ( to herself) thode ya bahut?
While…Dk continues his blabbering….and disha with her arms folded..listens to his raam kahani…
Dk: ( garam….really garam!..) ( complaing) Mujhe to samjah mein nahi aata ke tum ladkiyo ka problem kya hain…ek chummi milne ke chakar me….Arre! .kitne papad belne padte hain ! Ek kiss maango to …nahi abhi nahi...shaadi ke baat…Mujhe to tumhare us che futye boyfriend par taras aata hain…( disha ..opens her mouth ) itni nutchadi girlfriend mili hain usse..( hands on hips…garam..really garam) jo usse kiss to kya..I doubt ke tum usse apne aas pass bhi…( when disha cuts him off)
Disha: ( losing her patience) Tum mere boyfriend ko beech mein mat lao! Mein usse kiss karu ya na karu….yeh mere aur mere boyfriend ki beech ki baat hain…tum kaun hote ho hamra beech bolne waale…( hands on hips…taana maarte hue) aur waise bhi agar mere boyfriend ko pata chal gaya ke tumne mujhse zabarsadi kiss karwayi…..to who tumhe zinda nahi chodega!
Dk: ( to himself) tumhare boyfriend ki to aisi ki taisi..
Dk: ( aankhon me asha ki kiran…ray of hope) Nahi patachalega! ( goes closer …so they are about 2 inches apart…and holds her waist) Usse kuch nahi pata chalega..tum start to karo!
Disha: Lekin mein
Dk: ( almost screaming) Bus! Bahut ho gaya tumhara naatak! Tum chup chap kiss karti hoo yaa…
Disha: ( trying to explain)Lekin mein…
Dk: (mad) Chup! Mujhe kuch nahi sunna…tumne mujse vaada kiya tha..aur jab tak mein apen hisse ke chumme nahi le leta..mein yaha se kahi nahi jaaonga…( gets closer..holding her waist tighter…he back is still against the wall) ok start…aur haan…jadli karo…mera paas time nahi hain!
Disha: ( extremely MAD) ( yells) FINE!
Dk: ( all of a sudden his ghussa goes away….pathar se bilkul paani ban gaya) ( happily smiles at disha) haan to …( sharmaate hue) shuro karo na
Disha all of a sudden realizes what she has done!
Disha: (to herself) Oh shoot! Yeh kya kiya tune…( looks down…bebas , lachar expression) ab kya hoga
Dk: ( kuch zyada hi khush…acting shy….lekin andar se shetaan) ( smiling)Ab shuro karo na
Disha: ( looks at him with a " ab mera kya hoga" type of an expression) Ah…pehle tum apni aankhien to band karo
Dk: (excited)oh sure! ( closes his eyes..still holding her waist..so she doenst run away) ( to himself..still smiling ) tumhari kisses ke liye mein aankhien to kya kuch bhi band karne ke liye tayaar hoon
Disha: ( to herself..whining and crying like a kid) …ab kya hoga….bappppaaa meri madat karo
Dk: ( eyes closed..complaining)Arre jaldi karo na ..kitna waqt lagati hoo tum!….ab tak to pehla dose mil jaana chahiyeh tha! Jaldi karo naa!
Disha: (thodi si darri hui…thodi si sharmaye hui) haan…tum ..tum apni aankhien mat kholna haan…
Dk: ( still with his eyes closed) Arre baba nahi kholonga! Yaar tum time bahut waste karti hoo..jaldi karo naaa!
Disha: (to herself….looking at dk..) ( helpless) Ab kya karu?.....lagta hain mujhe isse kiss karna hi padega….aur koi chaara bhi to nahi ( sadest expression)
Just then a cute little girl..5 years old….in a pink dress runs out of nowhere.. …she is hoping on the ground…while kicking a read ball…when disha's eyes fall on her..
Dk: ( with his eyes closed…shaking his body impatiently) huhhhh….I am waitingggg
When the little girl ..while chasing her ball..runs towards dk an disha
Disha: ( turns her face to the left) ( extremely low voice..trying to call the little girl) Aye chih chich
Dk: ( eyes closed) Kuch kaha?
Disha: ( immediately faces him) Nahi tum apni aakkien band rakho na
Dk: ( eyes closed) Picchle janam se meri aakh band hain..lekin mere chummo ko koi ata pata nahi
Disha: ( who was trying to get the liitle girl's attention ) Arre rukko na ek second!
Dk: ( eyes closed) Saare chumme manufacturing ke liye bhej diye kya…jo inti der lag rahi hain….…jaldi karo naa…ab aur kitni der mein intezaar karu
When disha finally manages to grab the little girl's attention…she nods her head indicating " idhar aao"…the little girl ..unable to understand…puts her right index finger in her mouth…standing like a bhoot and looking at disha
Disha: ( upset) arre, idhar aao na!
Dk: ( opens his eyes ..and looks at disha with amazement) Kya…( a big smile on his face..gets closer) kya kaha tumne?
Disha: (eyes widen) Ah who…amm…..kuch nahi tum …aankhien band karo naa!
Dk: To mein kabse kya kar raha hoon! ( closes his eyes again) dekho..agar tum koi bahane dhoond rahi hoo to bhool jao…mein yaha se tab tak nahi hilonga..jab tak mujhe saari kisses nahi mil jaati …aur tumhe bhi kahi nahi jaane doonga( holds her waist tighter…to prove his point)
Disha: Haan haan..tum sirf apni aankhien mat kholna ( looks at the girl who is standing right by them now…staring at disha…waiting for her command..)
Dk: ( eyes closed..whining like a kid) Jaldi karo naaa
Disha: ( frustrated) Tum ek second chup nahi reh sakte! Mujhe concentrate karna patda hain!
Dk shuts up…and disha signals the little girl to come in between them…there is hardly any room…but just enough to fit the liitle girl..the liitle girl runs between their legs..and gets in the middle…disha quietly and quickly picks up the liitle girl by the waist…so she is in the air…her shoes are touching dk's chest…but dk is too busy in his world to even realize this!
Dk: ( eyes closed) arre jadli karo na….bahut time waste kar liya tumne!
Disha: Arre haan haan…I am ready!…
Dk: ( breaths out…to himself) huh…finally!
Disha whispers in the little girl's left ear " Uncle ko kiss karo"..The cute little girl happily agrees ..and kisses dk on his left cheek ( her right side) ….little girl's kiss matlab she just keeps her lips there..and then takes them off without doing anything…yes very cute indeed
Dk: ( eyes closed…upset) Arre yeh kya kanjooso ki tarah kiss rahi hoo…theek se karo naaa!
Disha who can hardly stop laughing ..… again whispers something…in the liitel girl's ears…and the liitle girl happily puts her cute liitle arms around his neck…dk thinks its disha…the little girl startts kissing him really fast…first on his right cheek, then left, then right, then left again..frustrated dk is about to complain. " arre yeh" .when he realises that disha is all over him…when he puts his arm around her so she doesn't fall…but when he opens his eyes..he realises that a little girl has her arms around him..and is kissing his cheeks fata fat…dk is still holding her..so she doesn't fall…the girl keeps on kissing dk continuously…whiel disha is cracking up
Dk: ( while the girl is all over him…he is holded her in his left arm…irritated) tum…( kiss on thr ight cheek) .tumhare ghar me paap-bhai nahi hain kya hain…( a kiss on the left cheek)..yeh tumhe kisne sikhaya? ( disha is still crackin up..when the girl stops kissing him)
Girl: ( with the cutest, the most adorable, totli awaz) (pointing at disha…who is still laughing) Meine nay…aaanteee ne kaha ke ….uncle ko kissie do
Her voice is soooo cute, that it immediately puts a smile on dk and disha's faces
Dk: ( smiles at the liitle girl) Accha? Aunty na kaha aur tumne ek chatke me maan bhi liya…bhay wah….( to disha) dekha…kuch sikho isse..kitni samajhdaar ladki hain…mere bina kuch kahehi itni saari kisses dedi…wah bhay…I am immpressed
Disha: ( looks at dk with a " what ever!" type of an expression) ( to the little girl) Beta tumhara naam kya hain
Girl: ( mahaaa cute…showing all her teeth…the middle one is missing) pinkeeeee
Disha: ( already melted) Awwwwwwwww..she is soo cute! ( immediately kisses her on her right cheek…dk is still holding the girl in his left arm) Bahut hi pyaara naam hain..bilkul tumhari tarah
Dk: (still trying) Bhay cute to hum bhi hain..( disha just raises her eyebrows and ignores him)
Pinky: (puts her palm on her open mouth) Oh O!
Disha: ( smiles) Arre, kya hua?
Pinky: (in the cutest voice….she is sooooo adorable) Lif-tick lag gayi…
Disha: ( even bigger smile) awwww…I am soo sorry …auntee ki lipstick lag gayi na
Dk: ( looking at the girl) Bhay…this is not fair….tumhe to lipstick bhi lag gayi…aur uncle ko abhi tak nahi lagi ( disha arms folded…raises her eyebrows…with a fake simle) Zara auntee se kaho na ke mujhe ek kissee de!
Disha…with her arms folded…. looks at him with a" UUUUUU" type of an expression….when all of a sudden
Pinky: Aantee aantee….uncle ko bhi kissieee do na…
She said it soooooo cutely…especially the word "kisssie" that dk and disha stare at each other for a while……without any expressions….without saying anything….
Disha: ( quickly takes her from dk's left arm and holds her on her left side) Pinky tum uncle ki baatein mat suno…( looking at dk) woh to hain hi besharam!
Dk: Arre pinky, uncle ne sirf ek kiss hi to maangi…iska matlab ke mein besharam hooon?
Pinky: ( shakes her head CUTELY) Nayee
Dk: Dekha! Dekha kitni samjdhar hain…choti hain fir bhi kitni akal hain isse…aur cute bhi bahut hain ( saying this he kisses the girl on the right cheek…EXACTLY on top of disha's lipstick mark…yes he did it intentionally!)
Pinky: ( laughs cutely) Uncle ko aantee ki lif-tick lag gayi
Dk looks at disha with a " haha..I win this round " type of an expression…while disha just gets more mad!
Dk: ( to pinky) Aaacha? ( looking at disha…smiling nautily) Kaha?
Pinky: ( puts a finger on his lips) Yahaaa
Dk looks at disha " chumma naa sahi…chumme ka nishaan to aagaya..ab bahut jald chumma bhi mil jaayega" ..Disha looks like she is going to kill him..she is sooo mad..soo mad…ke pucho hi mat!
Disha quickly puts pinky down
Disha: Beta tumhari mamma pareshaan ho rahi hogi…chalo jaldi ghar aajao
O ok (picks up her red ball) Bye aantee..bye uncle…( she runs away…
And the two are alone again..what happens? stay tuned!
This one took me a longgg time..islyeh comments mein kanjoosi mat karna!...jk
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that was EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
very unexpected i must say ......... lovedd this part
tumhe humaare AASHIRWAAD milte hai................
SUKH SUKH JIYO , so that u write like this all the time
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