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Tumhari Disha MOVIE! (Page 8)

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Scene 6

Scene starts out with disha madam in the air..and our Hottie smiling at her naughtily. He slowly puts her down. They are face to face now. Everyone in the club is quiet and is waiting for the 2. Dk is still smiling and is still holding her by her waistWink, when our D lady, who looks like she is about to start world war 3  , fakely smiles at him. He gives a bigger smile and to his astonishment, D lady then gives him a big, loud thapad (slap) on his right cheek.Confused Dk is taken aback. His hand automicatically lands on his cute red cheek. Cry..(awww ..poor hottieCry)and before Dk could say anything

Disha: (loud and angry tone) Tumhari heemat kaise hui mujhe cho ne ki.....Agar ainda se mujhe apni shakal bhi dhekaai to mujhse boora aur koi nahi hoga..

Disha's friends crowd around her and whsiper to her..."Disha ..jaane do...chalo yahase.."

Disha: (adamant) Kya samajte ho to apne aap ko....agar tum Dk seghal ho to ....jab chaho...jaha chaho...kuch bhi kar sakte ho???.....Mr Dk seghal..aurat ko kabhi kamzoor mat samjhana....woh aapki private property nahi hain! (goes closer to him and looks at him in the eye) meri baat gaur se suno...ainda se kisi ladki ko choone se pehle ...soo (100) baar soch na...soo baar..samjhe!

Dk just stands there looking helpless....while disha along with her friends leaves in a puff of smoke!

Disha and her freinds are walking outside the club

Pooja: Oh come on disha, ab bhool bhi jao...sirf dance hi to kar raha tha woh tumhare saath..aur us bechare ko thapad maar diya tumne

Disha: (mad) Bechara, my foot! Sharam naam ki to cheez hi nahi us insaan mein..dekha nahi kaise sari ladkiyo ke saath dance kar raha tha...mere mana karne ke bawajoot bhi m ere saath zabardasti dance karne laga...

Shilpa: Oh comeone...bhool bho jao usse (when Dk enters)

All of her friends stop anmd turn towards DK, while Disha stands there with her back towwards him and with her hands foldedLOL(my my my..does she get pissed or what)

Dk goes and stands behind disha, without looking at her..

Dk : (hesitant) I am....I...I am sorry...meine aapke saath bahut badameesi ki...mujhe aapke saath zabarzasti nahi karni chahiyeh thi....mein apni galti ke liyeh aap se maafee mangta hoo(puts hsi head down)...I am really sorry ( looks up)

Disha: Inne kehte to ke mujhe inn se koi baat nahi karni!

Dk: please....I am really sorry...

Shilpa goes and puts a hand on Disha's shoulder....Disha turns around and faces DK.

Disha: (smiles a liitle) It's Ok! Actually, I am sorry...woh meri waje ander aapki itni beyzyadee....

Dk: arre nahi nahi...aapne bilkool theek kiya...ab taubara kissi aur ladki ke sath aise karne se pehle soo baar sochonga!

All laugh

Pooja: Hi I am pooja (shakes hands with Dk)

Dk: hi

Shilpa: mein shilpa (shakes hands with him)

Kavita: Kavita( shakes hands)

Dk: hi

Disha: mein..

Dk: (cuts her off) Dishaa! Right? (smiles and moves his hand forward to shake)

Disha: (smiles and shakes hands with him) right!

The camera focuses on their hands...and the scene ends there

Tumhari bombY!



Edited for bad use of language




Edited by samy74 - 03 June 2005 at 5:45am

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Scene 7

A week later...

Dk is sitting in his office (kanaka) thinking about dishaEmbarrassed. He gets flashbacks of disha when she swung her hair in the car, when she was dancing on "Lucky lips", when she fell on top of himWink. He gets more and more lost in his world and plays around with the paper weight and smiles liek CRAZY to himself! Just then someone knocks the door..

Dk: (without lookking up) Come in

Taj: Sir, mujhe aapse kuch papers sign karwaane the...(gives him soem papers)..yeh rahe..

Dk: (happily) sure! (starts signing them)

Taj: (Nosy..as usualLOL) Kyaa baat hain sir, aaj aap bade khush nazar aa rahe hainWink?

Dk: (smiles at taj) Samajhdaar ho! (nods his head)

Taj: (proud) Sir...sab aap hi ki meher baani hain

Dk: (shocked) ha?

Taj: (asahamed) Oh, sorry sir..

Dk: (laughs) Koi baat nahi Taj..koi baat nhai..aaj tum jo chaho...keh sakte ho!

Taj: Sir....Koi khaas baatWink? (here he goes again!)

Dk: (takes a deep breath) Khaas baat to hain (streches...Wink and rests his head on the chair..looking upwards) mujhe jiski itne saalo se talaash thi..woh mujhe mil gayi hain...(khayalo mein)

Taj: (excited since he just loves garma garm khabarLOL) Matlab...matlab aapki dreamgirl?

Dk: (blushes) ha meri sapno ki raani...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed...(starts complaing) .ab to mujhe raat mein hi nahi, din mein bhi uska chehra nazar aata hain....jaha dekho bas wohi nazar aati...kabhi ghar mein to..kabhi office mein...kuch khane nahi deti...swimming karne nahi deti...naahe nahi deti..soone nahi deti...bus har jaga mujhe wohi nazar aati hain...

Taj: Arre sir, yeh saare lakshan to ek hi bemaari ke hain!

Dk: (worried) Bemaari?

Taj: Lovearia! Mere ek doost ko mein yahi bemaari huye thi...woh usse har jaga dhikti thi..yaha tak ki..ek baar to usne apni baai (maid) mein  woh ladki nazar aayi

Dk: (getting more worried) Kya baat kar rahe ho? Ab mujhe kya karna chahiyeh..

Taj: Is bemaari ka to sirf ek hi elaag hain

Dk: Kya?

Taj: Khud woh ladki! Jab tab tak woh ladki hamesha hamesha ke liyeh aapki nahi ho jaati hain...tab tak woh aapke khabbo mein aati hi rahegi...

Dk: Khaabo mein to aati hi hain.....(puts his palms under his head ...which is resting on his chair) ..pata nahi...meri zindagi mein kab aayegi...(gets lost in his own world)

Taj: Kya woh bhi aapse itna hi pyaar karti hain...Jitna aap usse?

Dk: (Cracks up) ..Pyaar?? Woh to mujhse nafrat karti thi....humari pehli mulakaat may usne mujhe besharam kaha...doosri mein mujhpar aur naraz huyee...aur teezri mein mujhe thapad maara..LOL

Taj: (shocked) Kya usne aapko thapad mara?? Aur aapne kuch nahi kiya?

Dk: Mein kya karta...... ( slow soft tone ) Jabhi mein usse dekha ho....najane mujhe kya ho jata hain...uski aankhien...(gets more lostEmbarrassed) uski aankhoon may aisa khoo jata hoon ..ke mujhe kuch aur nahi sujta...bus man hota hain ke mein ussi ko dekhta raho...Jo woh karti hain..joh woh karti hain...mujhe sab achha lagta hain...sab..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed.(who is completely lost in his own world)

Taj: (smiling) Sir...(no respone from our hero) SIRRR..

Dk: (comes out of his dream world) haa?

Taj: Sir mein chalta hoon....aapki meeting jo shuro hone wali hain

Dk: meeting? Kaunsi meeting?

Taj: ( thinking to himself "yeh loveria bhi na...aache se acche insaan ko bhi nahi chodti"LOL)  who mehta and mehta waali meeting..

Dk: Woh aaj hain (puzzled) ...accha cancel kardo

Taj: lekin sir...

Dk: Tajj....aaj saari meetings cancel karwado...understand?

Taj: Ok sir...(leaves)

DK again relaxes on his chair...with his hands under his head...and closes his eyes...and gets lost in his dream world...

Uski dream mein kyaa hota hain? jaane ke liyeh mere next scene ka intezaar kijiyeh..

Tumhari BombY!


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excellent bombay............ tusi bomb hoClap

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Really nice Bomby.

Please continue the story.

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its realli good bomby plz continue it bomby!
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very nice plz continue the story i really liked it

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