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Tumhari Disha MOVIE! (Page 60)

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LOL Sum darling tum fer se Bomby ko tang kar rahi hon Bomby tum itneyam se likho mere tarf se kyoke sabar ka pehl mita hota hei as always!
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Ok scene 21 to refresh our memories....LOLsince it has been soo long

Scene 21

A dhol. A lady is playing it. She has spoons in both of her hands…there are other ladies seated behind her…they are singing…"dhola ve dhola hai dhola…..aaja dovein nachiye hai dhola…dukh sukh pholiye hai dhola….dhola ve dhola hai dhola…rut mastani, hai dhola…badi deewani, hai dhola …hai dhola..hai dhola.."

It's a huge living room….the furniture has been moved so there is enough room….All young boys and girls are dancing in the center ..well mostly its young girls!

Dk is with his friends…all flirty boys…sab ek se badkar ekWink….they are standing in a group in a corner…checking out all the girls who are dancingWink…Dk is wearing a black glitery sherwani looking HOT as usualEmbarrassed…with grey duppata to go with it…As mentioned before Dk does not like Vicky, the flirt…Angry

Vicky: ( with his arm resting on Dk 's right shoulder) Yaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaar ….( shaking his head naughtily) kya ek se ek phuljadiya hain….khaas kar woh pink wali …Wink

Dk: Saale, tujhe to saari ladkiya phuljadiya hi lagti hain!Angry

Vicky: Haa woh to hain…..lekin yeh pink wali ko dekh to sahi  ( points at a girl in pink) Oye hoyeeeee…..yaar phuljadi nahi to aur kya hain…Wink

Dk: ( looks at the girl) Yeh Ladki? (looks at her with a "Oh Puhleseee" type of an expressionAngryAngryAngry)

Mohit: (puts his arm on dk's left shoulder) Wow …..she is mind blowing yaar…too good

Rohan: ( who is next to Vicky) Pink wali to hain hi sexy….lekin who blue wali to usse bhi zyaada acchi hain

Vicky: ( Imapatient) Kaun?!kaha?! Kaunsi wali?!LOLLOL

Rohan: Arre wahi jo us moti ke bagal me naach rahi hain…

All of them look at the girl in blue…

Vicky: Oh yaar….kya kudi hain…such agar yeh mujhe mil jaaye to….mein toWink

Mohit: Waise hain to hot….lekin dekha jaaye to ….thodi moti  nahi hain?

Rohan: Kya baat kar raha .....tujhe moti kis angle se lag rahi hain…

Dk: (laughs…puts his right arm around Vicky, left arm around mohit) Waise dekha jaaye to dono me se ek bhi ladki HOT  nahi hain!LOLLOL

Vicky: Tera deemak to kharab nahi ho gaya..itni sexy ladki(when dk cuts him off)

Dk: Yeh ladki hain? Tumhe kis angle se yeh ladki nazarr aa rahi hain!

Mohit: Yaar to pink wali ki baat kar raha hain ya blue wali ki??

Dk: ( facing mohit) Dono ki!

Vicky: Yaar mujhe lagta hain tujhe chasme ki zarurat padne wali hain

Dk: Chasme ki zarurat mujhe nahi …tum sab ko hain! Tum sab isse ladki kehte hoo…na figure ka thikhana hain ..na kuch!LOLLOL

Mohit: Dekha meine kaha tha ke blue wali thodi moti hain…lekin pink wali to perfect hain…

Dk: Arre idiot,  ….Pink wali to blue wali se bhi gayi ghusri hain!

Vicky: Kya baat kar raha .isse sexy figure to meine aaj tak nahi dekha! Dekho to kaise apni kamar hila rahi hain…Wink

Dk: ( disgusted face) Kamar ya Kamra?? Arre isse acchi kamar to mere ghar mein kaam karne wali kaam waali baai ki hain!LOL

Vicky, Mohit, Rohan:  Kya?????????????LOL

Dk: Aur nahi to kya…kam se kam is moti bhess ki kamar se to patli hi hain…! Yaar tum sab bhi na…ladkiyo ke maamle bikul zero hain sab ke sab…..mujhe to tumhe apna doost kehte hue bhi sharam aati hain….arre gaddho….ladki to who hain jisse dekhte hi lage ke…haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai…..uska paap zaroor terrorist hoga!Wink

Vicky: (confused) Terrorist? Lekin uske paap ke terrorist hone se kya lena-dena?

Dk: ( removes his arms from Vicky and mohit)Arre gaddho, agar paap terrorist nahi hoga to beti ATOM BOMB kaise hogi?!LOL

Vicky, mohit, rohan:  Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

Dk: Ab kcuh baat tumhare palle padi? …...anyway to mein kya keh raha tha….

Mohit: Tum shayad atom bomb ke baare me baat kar rahe the..!

Vicky: Abbe gadhe atom bomb nahi ladkiya!

Dk: Ek hi baat hain ...haan to mein kya keh raha tha…..(puts his right arm around Vicky and left arm around mohit) (excited)haan…to ladki to woh hoti hain jisse dekhte hi ( panic!) dil ki dhadkhan rukjaaye…..koi bhi insaan clean bold ho jaayeWink…. ladki kam…..aur bijli zyadaWink…bus usse dekhte hi aisa lage .......ki oyeee hoeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee   (shaking his head …with the naughtiest expressions) very sexy maaaan…….just tooo sexy!WinkWink

All of a sudden, Vicky, Mohit, and rohan are frozen…koi chu bhi nahi kar raha….Vicky has his eyes wide open and is staring without blinking once!….…Mohit has his mouth open and is sweatingAngry….while Rohan collapses on the ground…LOLLOL

Dk: ( confused) (looks at the three who are frozen!) (pushes Vicky on the shoulder…but all in vain) Arre kya hua…tum teeno ko saap ne kaat liya kya…(they are still frozen) (laughs) Abhi to meine atom bomb…ke baare baat karna shuru nahi kiya…aur tum teen to aise react kar rahe ho..jaise who khud tmhare saamne khadi hoo.LOLLOL (laughs..shaking his head….when his eyes fall on a girl near the entrance area…)

It's a girl in a dark red sexycholi …a strapless short short blouse which covers only her breastsEmbarrassed…with her entire waist showingWink….…with a  criss cross (X )on her back…that's itWink…. and the long  skirt ofcourse with a cut on the right side….her long, black hair is down….she is wearing long matching earings…and high heels…..and its none other than our disha looking STUNNING and RAVISHING…and very SEXY ofcourseWink….she is standing with a group of girls…

Dk's eyes falll on her….once his eyes fall on her…he is clean bold…dill ki dhakhan to tukh hi gayi samjho…….his mouth is not open…but his eyes wide open…and a faint smile on his lips….a chamak (glow)in his eyesssssEmbarrassed…a taazgi (freshness) in his breathEmbarrassed…He stares and stares at her….with PASSSSSION in his eyessssEmbarrassed

Disha who is busy with her friends…laughs…covering her mouth..while dk ki nazar usse hatti hi nahi…he keeps staring…

Background music: "Sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooniyehhhhhhhhhhhhhhh"EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

It has been about 5 minute and dk has been staring at her…when he strechessssssssssssssss  his arms wide while smiling with the naughtiest smile….and puts his left shoulder on Mohit's shoulder….stilll staring at disha…but this time with a naughty naughty smileWink…when he realizes that mohit still has his mouth open and si looking at none other than Disha! Dk immediately gets mad and hits him hard on the shoulder…mohit moves a little..but has the same expressions…LOLLOL

Dk: ( who is about to choke him to death)(grabs him by the topfof his sherwaani) (MADAngryAngry) Ssaale mu band kar..!Angry Agar uski tarah dekha bhi to mein teri hatti phasli ek kardoonga! (he goes and stands right in front of  him with his hands still on his collar…he shakes mohit…but mohit is still in the same position) Saale ! mein…Angry(when his eyes fall on Vicky who is satring at disha and sweating,…and biting his lips…rohan has fainted on the ground so dk doesn't notice him!)

DK gets real MAD and grabs both of their necks…with his strong srong arms…almost choking them..whiel mohit and Vicky are having a hard time

Dk: ( who is about to kill them both with his arms chjoking them) Saaaaaaaalo !!!!!!!!!!!!!! Agar apni gandi nazaar bhi meri waali par daali…to mein tum dono ko kaccha chaba jaonga!Angry

Mohit and Vicky complaining in pain…" lekin…" " lekin yaar kyun"

Dk: ( getting more furious…chokes them harder) Bhabhi hain woh tum dono ki! Samjhe kya….(holding their necks tighter..whiel they are whining in pain).Agar uski tarah aank uthha ke bhi dekha to mein tum dono ko nahi chodonga! Kya hain who tumhari??

Mohit, Vicky:( haalat khaaaab) Bha buh…buh..bha…..bhabhi…LOLLOL

Dk: ( lets them go) Haaaaaaaaaaan….ab aaayi na akal theekane!

Dk starts to leave when Vicky butts in " Soch le..mujhe nahi lagta ke who tujhe ghaas tak degi!" Dk stops and turns around " Yeh Dk ka jaado hain….yeh kabhi fail nahi huwa!WinkWink" Confinent Dk goes towards disha's group…where pooja, priya shilpa, and even rohit , the groom …all of then in  a circle..talking...

Dk: ( puts his arm around rohit) kya baat hain…aaj dulhe raja kuch zyada ki khush nazar aa rahe hain?Wink

Rohit: (puts his arm around dk) Bhai mein to khush hoon hi…lekin aap itne gum sum kyu hain ?Wink

Dk: ( eyes widenedLOL…..when he looks at the the girls ) Arre tum sab kab aayi ? ( takes his arm off of rohit and looks at disha) mujhe to pata bhi nahi chalaLOLLOL

Rohit: ( to himself) Aur woh jo inti der se maindak ke aankhon se goor goor ke dekh raha tha…..uska kya?LOLLOL

Disha: (smiles) Bus thodi der pehle hi aaye!

Pooja: (grabs disha's right arm) Chalo na dance karte hain

Rohit: Haa haa lets go..waise bhi saaliyo ke saath dance karne ka mooka pata nahi fir kab milega….

Dk, disha, Rohit, priya , pooja n shilpa all go to the center of the living room..where whole bunch people are dancing…dk is right behind disha ..so he could get a better look of her bare back except for the criss cross (X) of course…..They all scud into the crowd…btw a lot more guys and girls have joined…

What happens at the dance? An antakshri!Wink So STAY TUNED!

BombY!

Scene 22..on  its way!


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The longest scene in the history....longest intezaar bhi...


This one is dedicated to my 3 jaans...Simmi, Summi, and manisha...I really wouldnt have been able to do this without their support n encouragement...u guys are my sweetooossEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Scene 22

The center of the living room….everyone is on the floor….guys and girls mix….the music system is quite loud….but u can still hear each other's voice….the Punjabi ladies are no longer singing…

Backgroung music: "soniyeh..soniyeh..aaja maahi ve ..everybody sing soniyeh soniyeh aaja maahi ve.."

Everyone is dancing crazily….lost in their own world…. Dk is soo lost in dancing that it seems that he is drunk …he has no idea what's going on around him…he cannot recognize anyone around him…he is MAST in his own world…dancing …and so is every1 else…..when suddenly a girl from the left …who was also lost in dancing…swings towards him...her long, black hair hits his face….when he comes out of his world…only to realize that the girl was about to fall when he grabs her….. …she is bended 90 degrees….so half in the air…with her feet on the ground….dk is holding her bare waist by his STRONG arms……and she has her both arms on his shirt..so she could use it as her sahara( support) ….only then their eyes fall on each other….yes the girl is none other than Disha ! Other people are too busy dancing to even notice them

Dk: ( Looks down at her with the biggest smile and the naughtiest expressions) HaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaiiiiiiWink

Disha: (shakes her head with a " u r hopeless" type of an expression while smiling…she gets up from his arms…giving him an attitude se bhara smile….and starts to walk away…..itraakeWink…. …when dk takes his right index finger and pulls her by the center of her XWink ( criss cross..on her back) …and her back bangs into his chest…( uski ek ugli se hi kaam ban gaya…Wink) he grabs hold of her waist  again ( both arms around it…covering it COMPLETELY taaki galti si kisi aur ki nazar na padeLOL)…and chipaks  ( sticks) to her back…

Dk: (Bindaas!) (facing her) Hey sexy, Mujhse shaadi karogi?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?Wink

Disha: ( eyebrows up….eyes widen …yet still smiling) Whaaaaaaaaaaaaaat?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

Dk: ( puts his chin on her bare right shoulder…his face is touching her right cheek…)(bindaas)  Meine kaha……mujhse shaadi karogi?

Disha: (laughs....and turns around..so she is facing him…puts her arms around his neck…his arms are still till holding her waist firmly) (makes  a bored face)( breaths out) Aisa to sabhi kehte hain!LOL

Dk: Kya? Hey sexy….ya  mujhse shaadi karogi?

Disha: (with attitude) dono hi!LOL

Dk: ( laughs.) haan…..(looks at her from top to bottom …while shaking his head…with the naughtiest expressions) I am sure!Wink

Disha: (disgusted ..quickly takes her arms off of him) Kya?!?!??!?!?!?!?!?!?

Dk: (pulls her closer by the  waist…her palms fall on his chest)Aur nahi to kya? Khud ko meri nazar se dekhlo kabhi…( shakes his head SLOWLY with the naughtiest expressions looking at her eyess) …Kya KAMAALl ki cheez ho tum!

Disha: (looks at him in the eye..) Bade besharam ho !

Dk: ( naughty naughty)  Sab aap hi ki meherbaani hain madam (winks at her) ( saying this he brings her closer..so they are almost touching)

Disha: Yehhh…..aank maarne ki aaadat …bachpan se hain yaaaaaa…?

Dk: ( laughs) Tumhe kya lagta hain?

Disha just shakes her head with a  " I give up" type of an expression…She quickly takes his arms off her waist ( itraake ke) saying " Mujhe sochna bhi nahi hain" she turns around and  starts to leave when dk gets holds of her dupatta…dish is holding one edge of it…while dk has the other edge in his strong fist…holding it TIGHT…they are about 2 feet apart

Dk: Tumne bataya nahi…tum mujhse shaadi karogi ya mein tumse shaadi karu????LOLLOL

Disha: ( she goes and stands right in front of him….smiles) Aur agar mein ….(slowly takes her duppata from his fist)….mien tumse naa shaadi karu to?Wink

Dk: ( Grabs both of her wrists) To mein tumhe zabarjasti uddha kar le jaonga!Wink

Disha; ( frees her wrists from his fists) (Impressed...smiles) Accha…to Zabarjasti karo ke mere saath?Wink

Dk: (smiling..puts her arms around her neck) hmmmm…Embarrassed.(bringing her closer..).karni padegi…Wink

Disha: (smiling) Agar itni hi himmat hain to sabke saamne kyun nahi keh dete? Yeh akele me propose karne ka andaaz to bahut pooraana ho chukka….agar sabke saamne kaho…to maanuWink

Dk: ( bringing her closer)Aur agar mein apne dil ki baat ..( touches her forhead with his) sabke saamne kehdu to?

Disha: ( takes his arms off her neck…and her forhead away from his) (looking in the eye)Nahi keh  paonge !

Dk: (confident) Kehdiya to?Wink

Disha: To ?

Dk: (with naughty hopes/dreams) To mein jo kahonga…tumhe who karna hoga…deal?Wink

Disha: ammmm…(Smiles)Ok …..(bigger smile) good luck! ( gets closer) Waise is sherwaani me tum ( stroking his hair) bade handsome lag rahe hoo Wink(To his amazement , she winks at him….giving him a bigger smile…and walks away ladak madak ke….while dk just stays there…with his left hand on his hip ….scratching his head with his right hand…….looking down…and laughing  to himself)

After a second, he finally looks up…only to notice our D lady walking away….mast ladak matak ke…Wink

Back ground music: ( music system) Dil chori saada ho gaya….oye ki kariyeh ki kariyeh…..naino mein kisike kho gaya oye ki kariyeh ki kariyeh…

He continuously STARES at her waist( the back of it ofcourse..since she isn't facing him) …as it goes left to right Winkand right to left…Winkwith a sparkle in his eyesTongue…and a naughty look of course!Wink

Dk: (singing to himself…along with the music….) Hoooo madam teri chaaal…tere silky silky baal…ab mein isse zyada kya kahu…. (walks away singing ) mein nashe me talli ho gaya…Wink.oye ki kariyeh ..ki kariyehWink

Disha and her friends are dancing with a group of youngsters…all are MAST in dancing when all of a sudden the music stops! Everyone stops dancing…they are about to complain….when all of a sudden Disha is pulled out of the crowd of youngsters….by her right wrist ….she swings in the air…and lands in someone's arms….

Its none other than dk…hers hands on his shoulders….and his left arm around her waist….holding her tight and really close…their faces are really close… all eyes on them…all lights on them….even a  spotlight…her hair blowing in the air….he looks at her eyes with a " I want u" type of an expression….while she looks at him rudely ( in my filmi words…..theeki theeki nazro seWinkWink) ..They are staring and staring into each others eyes….while everyone is staring at them…When dk takes his right hand….and places it on HER left cheek ( so his right side) …then moves his fingers through  her hair…he moves his head 45 degrees to the right….closes his eyes….with a DESPERATE expression…..moves his head closer …..EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Dk: ( as he gets his lips closer to hers) Kardoo kammaaaaal tere naal soniyehhhhhhhhhhhEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

As he gets closer and closer….people stare at them….

Background music: hey hey hey..hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey hey…( the kardoon kammal music)

Dk was about to kiss her…when Disha grabs his collar and pushes him off…she is about to leave when he grabs her right wirst and pulls her back

Movement in Quick mode! ( just the first song)

Dk: ( swings her to the left and pulls her back while singing) Kardoon kammal tere naal soniyeh…naal sonyiyeh..( lets her fall…but before she could fall down entirely ….he grabs her waist with both arms…so she is half drooling on the floor…but still in his control) Taal se milale jo tu taal soniyeh..( pulls her up FORCEFULLY by the waist…her hair swinging in the air) taal soniyeh

Disha: (grabs his collar…she gets her face really close to his..and shakes her head…to shoo off all her hair from her face….her hair hits his face…) mujhe paayega kahaaa.(looking at him s eyes rudely) mere picche hain jahaa…(pushes him off by his chest) Mujhe paayega kaha…mere peeche hain jahaa (she starts to walk away ….itraake..when he grabs her waist and pulls her back…and bends her into an 90 degree angle pose…with his arms under her waist…and bends on top of her…looks at her with a bebas , lachaar, completely lost expressionEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed)(while bending)Tujhe dekha to mein ho gaya behaal soniyehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…..( rests his head on her bare waist) haaa behaal soniyeh…..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

They stay in the same postion for a while …90 degrees…him on top of her…his head on her bosom….with his eyes closed….with  all his passion and might …hugging her Tight…….his arms under her waist…her arms and hair floating in the air…EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Back ground Music: Oh behaal soniyeh…..Oh behaal soniyheh….Oh behaal soniyeh

Disha pushes him off….and starts to walk away

Dk: (picks her up by the legs…puts her on his right shoulder…she crawls down…and he gets her out from between his legs…) Arre dekh le tu munda daa kamaal soniyeh…haa Kamaal sonyiyeh…

She comes out from between his legs…her back against him…he is holding both of her wrists …when  disha frees her wrists

Disha: Arre kaale kaale baal...gaal( quickly turns around….her hair hits his face…holding his right cheek…looking at him with a" hey what r u lookin at" type of an ezpresssion)) gorre gore ( grabs his collar …eye to eye) arre yuh na mujhpe daal daal dorre dorre ( pushes him off…dk lands on the floor….surprised yet similng crazily) ( she walks away with her left arm on her hip other one in her hair…doing catwalk…while all guys follow her) Meri behki behki chaal…..kargayo aisa kamaal….(turns around to notice guys follwing her) Paake chore chore….( itraake …walks away ...with both hands on her hips)

Guys: ( following her …focusing  on her catwalk…left to right…and right to left …moving their asses in the same direction )  are ore ore…are ore ore…

Dk pushes thro the crowd and pushes off the guys near him…his eyes fall on disha..who is still catwalking…his eyes pop out…quickly runs and gets behind her ( so he is the closest..while other guys are following dk)

Dk: ( follwing her chaalWink) Dheere dheere chalna…yuh na tu matakna…Wink( grabs her waist and pulls her towards him) Solwa saal hain ( her back bangs into his chest…his arms around her waist) haai kya chaal hain…( disha quickly shoos him off…and itraake…continues her ladke jhatke chalna) Par ek baar tu dekh palat ke….munda bhi kamaal hain….( disha ignores him when a bunch of guys come from the front and sides surrounding her…" Munda kamaal hain..munda kammal hain munda kammal hain mundaaa"  In no time all guys are surrounding Disha …she looks everywhere..trying to escape…but the guys are all around her…

Guys: (dancing crazily ) Munda Kammal hain munda kammal hain…munda kammal hain munda

Dk: ( Getting naughtier by secondsWink ….getting closer to disha…while  she backs up) ho munda…Wink(winks…and quickly picks her up and puts her on his right shoulder…holding her tight by the legs…disha is hitting dk's back with her fists…and kicking her legs on his chest)

 Guys: (dancing crazily) Munda Kammal hain munda kammal hain…munda kammal hain munda

 Dk: ( dancing with disha on his shoulder…kicking and hitting) ( screaming with joy) ho mundaaaaaaa…Wink( puts her down…) Dk starts dancing around with her…while other guys are dancing crazaily…Embarrassed disha,  runs out of the crowd…holding her lehga…every now and then looking back…as guys are running after her…

Guys: ( running behind her)  Najaane ..kaha se aayi hain..na jaane..kaho ko jaayegi…..deewana..kisse banayegi yeh ladki…" In no time all guys again form  a circle around her…while dk is trying to push thro the crowd of guys…

Disha; ( Grabs a guys ear who is on the right) Badi choti si hain mulakaat  ( grabs another guys ear on the left ) bade afsoos  ki hain baat…..

Guys: ( getting closer) Ouuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Disha: ( quickly drops the two guys by their ears) Kiske haat na ayaegi yeh ladkeeee…( pushes each n every guy out of her way) kisike haat na aayegi yeh ladki…( when she is thro all the guys….she quickly runs out of the crowd…holding her lehega…looking back every now and then to see how far the guys are….she is running n running with guys running behind her " najaane kaha se aayi hain..najaane kaha ko jaayegi..deewana kisi banayi yeh ladki" ……when all of a sudden she gets pulled by the wrist….she swings…and lands into somoene's arms in the center of the crowd of guys..its none other than Dk!!!!!

Dk: ( getting naughtier and closer) Kab tak jawani chupaogi raani( queen) (disha is embarresed as she is in the middle of guys) ( pulls her by her waist…so she bangs into him) Kawaro ko kitna satogi raani….( he gets closer..she gets scared…as she is unable to back up…he si holding her too tight…so she just bends down 90 degrees…dk bends on top of her) Kabhi to kisi ki dulhania banogeeeeeee ( Disha manages to push him off…and starts to turna round when dk QUICKLY and FORCEFULLY spins her around by the waist…gets on his knees….arms spread wide apart…looking up at her) Mujhse shaadi karogeeee ( disha shakes her head smiling…and starts walking away ) ( still on his knees…follwing her) Haa mujse shaadi karogi…..ha mujhse shaadi karogi??? ( grabs her legsWink..so she is unable to walk…she falls on the ground…while dk still on his knees follwing her) mujhse shaadi karogi? (disha on the ground backing up) haa mujhse shaadi karogi…??( scared disha quickly stands up …only to notice…all guys surrounding her….from all sides…

Disha: ( scared to death…biting her nail) Mere daaye ( eyes to the right)…baaye ( eyes to her left) ( a guy jumps out of nowhere) ( she gets more scared) upper ( looks at dk)neeche ghumme…chore…( dk up on his feet) …( three guys get closer to her on the right ) munde….ladke…( grabs a guy on the right by the collar) Jinta who kehna chahe ..(grabs another on the left) jitna who karna chahe ( dk …jalan se aadha….pushes the two guys off….standing right in front of disha) ( pulls dk by his shirt) har koi mujhko apni…baaho pe bhar na chahe ( looks at him in the eye) BUT! Dil mera bole ….(knocks him off) Chal hatt…chal hattLOL…( knocks off  2 other guys..one on the left n one on the rightLOL) chal chal chal hatt….( she escapes the crowd)

Dk gets on his feet…ready for revenge…she is standing with her arms folded…pushing off all the guys who get close to her……one guy comes from the left..she makes a dhoomka ( hits him by her waist) …and he is knocked out…on the floor…LOL "chal hatt….chal chal hattLOL

When dk comes and hugs her from behind

Dk: ( with his head on her shoulder…nautiest expression) nakhra uska garam masala…Wink( she removes his arms from her and starts walking away..ladak matak ke) Arre uska roop sahe dil wala ( following her) Arre kaan me chumkha..,,,chaal me dhomkha….dekho to uski adaaa…

When all of a sudden Disha turns around..and puts her arms around him…shaking her waist…walking towards dk….while dk holding her waist….…walks backWink

Disha: Sona sona roop hain humko gurror hain …lut jaonge tum haaaai rabba..( pushes him off…making more dhoomkhas with her back against him) Kudi mein haseen hu, thodi namkeen hoon…Wink( turns around and grabs his collar and pushes him off again) mar jaonge tum…haai rabba.. (disha continues her shaking..when the guys join her) aag lagayegi..dhoom machayegi…..shyamat ayagi.. Wink( she grabs dk's shirtWink…and pulls him along while she is walking….while dk drools behind her ) jawani aayi hain…qayamat aayi hain…( holding dk behind him with her one hand…other on her waist…shaking it…walking…) jawani aayi hain…qayamat aayi hainWink

Dk: ( who is about to pass out) Sona sona roop hain..uspe gurrror hain…
( hugs her from behind) lut gaye hum to haai rabbaWink…(disha takes his arms off
of her…when he grabs her from behind again) .kudi yeh haseen hain..( kisses
her on her right cheek ) badi namkeen hain…Wink( drools on her) mar gaye hum to
 haai rabba….( disha frees her self ..starts to leave)ankiyo se vaar kar…seene
 vich paar kar…( when he pulls her back by the X..she lands in his arms again)
 dil tadpaati hain…( she walks away making more dhoomkhas while dk follows
 her ) nazakhat aati hain..kamar balkhaati hain… nazakhat aati hain..kamar
 balkhaati hain

All guys crowd around dk and disha dancing " nazakhat aati hain…kamar
bhalkhaati hain.." ..when all of a sudden disha gets really embarrsed…
as soo many guys are surrounding her….Disha..sharam ke maare to samjho
death hi ho gayi..…looks down…puts her hair behind her ear…while Dk who
 is standing right next to her…looks at her with Passion and DESIRE….
.and is lost in his own dream world…he goes towards her …and gently holds
her left hand….and looks at her lovely…when disha starts to leave…

Dk: ( puts his head on her right shoulder) Kabhi to nazar milaooooo….

Everyone is quiet…they stop dancing…all eyes..spotlights on the Ds

Dk: ….( holds her left wrist and slowly brings her towards him)
Kabhi to kareeeb aao ..jo nahi kaha hain…( her back against him) kabhi to
samajh bhi jaoooooooooo ( takes his arms…and puts them on top of hers…
his fingers intertwining her fingers… cuddles up their arms together…and puts
them around her waist)Hum bhi to hain tumhaaare…..( he puts his head on her
 shoulder….eyes closed)deewane….ho deewane…..

 Dk just stays in that position…while disha is sharam se paani paani….every1
is staring at them…but yeh dk hain ke…chodne ka naam hi nahi…he looks like
 he si dosing off or something…..Disha doesn't know what to do…she gently takes his
arms off her waist….when dk lifts his head up….and our D lady runs away
…holding her lehga…blushing and smiling crazily…she runs out of the door
…when everyone stares at her…when she diappears everyone looks at dk
…dk looks at every1 with a " What….what did I do?" type of an expression
… Ouside, disha is against a wall…looking down…blushing completely…
she can't stop smiling for some reason…Embarrassed

Background Music: yeh mujhe kya hua hain…kuch mil gaya hain…
kuch kho gaya hain…yeh kyun hua hain….itna pata hain me…

Disha: ( shakes her head..still smiling) That! 

Alright...so romance in teh air...letsee...aage aage kya hota hainWink waise I am
hoping ke intezaar ka phal meetha tha...ya shayad theekhaWink

Tumhari bomby!



Edited by Bombgirl4eva - 20 July 2005 at 3:59am

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