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Tumhari Disha MOVIE! (Page 5)

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.....................................THANK U SO MUCH guysf or the wonderful comments...Please continue writing your comments/feedbacks...they really encourage me...Big smile..

I am working on my next scen write I should have it done by tommorrow..IF not today....SO STAY TUNED


ManishaRox IF-Dazzler

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Ur welcome but u truely deserve them and ur stories are great too!!
Bombgirl4eva Goldie

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Scene 4...enjoy!Big smile

The scene starts with the building of Mitthibhai college. LOL(lol…that's the only college in Bombay I can think of!)

Disha is sitting with her friends in the college canteen drinking juice.

Disha: (relieved) THANK GOD…hamari exams khatam ho gayi…

Pooja: I knowwww…meine to kitni mehnat ki hai…raat ke do-do bache tak padhai ki hai

Disha: Do baje tak?…paap re paap…mein to itni badhai kabhi nahi kar sakti …I need my beauty sleep.Wink

Shilpa: (teasing) Sleeping beauty ji, Aapko badhai karne koi zaroorat nahi hain…tum to aise hi paas ho jaongi…

Priya: (teasing)Ha….woh professor tripathi tum pe latto jo hainLOL

All laugh except disha

Disha: (disgusted) Cheeeeeeeeeee…..woh Buddha !, khusat,! (all laugh) ….tumhe koi aur nahi mila mere liye

Shilpa: Accha madam, to hamme tumhare liyeh koi Prince charming dhond na hoga?

Disha: Of course!

Pooja: Mere paas ek idea hain …kyun na hum sab disco mein jaaye?…party ki party ho jayegi…aur kya pata humme waha tumhara prince charming bhi mil jaayeWink (laughs)

Disha: Theek hain…to aaj raat aath (8) baje…RED DRAGON .mein milte hain! Ok?

All the girls agree and bid each other goodbye…

Disha, in her room, going thro her closet.

Disha: (to herself) Kya pehnooooooo??

Just then rano enters… "Dee.."

Disha: Oh rano, aacha hua tum aa gayi…tum batoa…..mein yeh black dress pehnoo…(holds out a black dress) ya yeh red wala (holds a red dress)…

Rano: lekin dee, tum jaa kaha rahi hoon…

Disha: Red dragon! Ab tum jalti batao…yeh pink wala kaisa hain (holds another dress)

Rano: Mere khayal seeeeeeeeeeeeee(thinks) …. yeh black wala pehnoo…Dee mein bhi aao kya?

Disha: Pagal ho gayi ho kya…meri exams to khatab hogayi…lekin tumhari to abhi tak shuro bhi nahi huyeee….(pushes rano to the door) Ab jao ..jaa kar bhadaai karoo ….Mujhe taayar bhi hona hain (She closes the door behind ranoLOL)

Disha opens her car door, and steps out of the car wearing a black strapless dress with a slit on the left side, high heels, long black earings and a black necklace ..with her hair down…She looks REALLY beautiful!Tongue

She is walking to the main entrance, when suddenly she realizes that she has left her bag in her car. She QUICKLY and HASTILY turns around so that she can stop her driver…but before she could do anything else she realizes that she has bumped into someone…and she has pushed that someone so much that she falls on top of that man…and that man has fallen to the ground…Any guesses on who that handsome hunk is?Wink

Disha:(who is literary lying on top of DK …with her hands on his chest and his arms around her waist. Her hair is all over his neck/part of faceEmbarrassed)Tum?

Dk: (who is sooo surprised at his luck that he just stares naughtily and gives a big smileWink)

Disha: (tries to get his hands off her waist…but all in vain! Infact, he holds her tighter now!WinkWink)

Dk: (Naughtiest smile and with the naughtiest expressions ) Tum girre humpe bichli ke khambe ki tarah…(shakes his head) Khuda ki kasamm…..Current kha kar maza aa gaya! (lolzzzzzzLOL)

Disha: (irritated) What! Shut Up! (tries to get up) Chodo mujhe!

Dk: (who holds her tighter now and gives her another naughty look )

Disha: (extremely MAD now! And somehow in her anger she escapes from his strong arms) (she stands up and before Dk could fully stand up) How dare you?? Tumhari heemat kaise huyee mujhe choo ne ki…

Dk: (who is fully standing now…) (shakes his head) Meine kuch nahi kiya… .(smiling) Tum khud hi mujh par aa giriWink

Disha: Oh shut up! Galti se girri hu…warna mujhe koi shauk nahi hain tum par jaan mooch ke ghir ne ka!

Dk: (teasing) Accha ?

Disha: (getting EXTREMELY MAD)Oh shut up! Mein tum jaise ladko acchi tarah se jaanti hoon! Jaha ladki dekhi nahi ke…(stops)

Dk: (trying to make her MAD ) ….ke line maar na shuro? Achha…to ulta chor kotwaal ko kaate??...Ek to khud mere upar girti ho…upper se kehti ko ke mein tumpe line maar raha ho…mujhe kuch ho jata to…kitni bhari ho tumLOLLOL

Just then Disha's friends come…and pooja asks disha "Kya hua, disha?"

Disha just ignores them and continues arguing with DK

Disha: (real pissed!) What??????????????????????

Dk : (who is having fun teasing her) Aur nahi to kya…itni bhaari ko ke meri peet (back) to gai…(pretends that his back is hurting) …pata nahi kaunsa chaki ka atta khati ho!LOLLOL

Disha: (who can no longer take it) What? ?? Shut up! Just shut up…(she leaves with her friends in a puff of smoke)

While Dk stands there laughing to himself…LOLand says " Disha" and smilesssss


ManishaRox IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 May 2005 at 12:49am | IP Logged
lol its good plz continue!! disha falling on dk god didn't no dk had a diff personality too!
keshp15 Senior Member

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Posted: 24 May 2005 at 4:11am | IP Logged

hey bomby

this is going great

u had me laughing for sssssoooooooooooooo longLOL

cant wait for the' next part

lov KP

lucky-moon Goldie

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Posted: 24 May 2005 at 4:39am | IP Logged
yeah this so amazing Smile

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Posted: 24 May 2005 at 1:21pm | IP Logged

keep it uppppppppp

and write the next part sooonnn
Jaslove IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 24 May 2005 at 10:53pm | IP Logged

omg bomby, you need to continue. l like your filmy style story. keep it up.Clap

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