Joined: 12 March 2005
It was Suhas in the back, who had called disha's name. (lol..played by Hemani shiv puri!)
Disha: (faces her) Ha Aai?
Suhas: Dekha ! Tumhe mujhe sirf ek baar aawaz deni hoti hain…aur ( disha cuts her off)
Disha: (laughingly) Aur us maharani ko soo baar bolaye, to bhi nahi sunti ….right?
Suhas: Arre tumhe kaise pata?
Disha: Aaiiii….Aap rooz yehi to kehti ke!...(Both Laugh)
Suhas: Ab tum hi batao disha, sir par exams hain, lekin usse koi fikar hi nahi…Jab dekho to apne dostoon ke saath filme dekhti rahti hain
Disha: Lekin Aai, abhi to who bahut choti hain…agar who abhi enjoy nahi karegi to phir kab karegi??
Suhas: Tumhi ne usse sir pe chada ke rakha hain…(disha laughs) …tumhare vaje se hi who bahut bikad gayi hain…achha tum jao aur rano ko othoa…warna college ke liyeh der ho jayagi
Disha: Don't worry Aai..main hoon na!
Suhas leaves the room..and disha goes to Rano's room. Rano (mamta kulkarni..lol) is sleeping on her bed with the blanket over her face. Disha comes and takes off the blanket.
Rano: kyaa di, soone do na
Disha: Aur kitna soongi? 8 to kabke baj gaye…..chalo jaldi utho…college ke liye der ho rahi hain…
Rano: (sleepy and lazy) Oh di…aaj jaane ka mann nahi kar raha… aaj tum akeli hi kyun nahi chali jaati…
Disha: Raanoooo tum uthti ho ya mein..
Rano: Oh common di…ek din nahi jaogi to koi farak nahi badega…
Disha: Aur aai ko kya kahoo?
Rano: Oh di, kuch bhi keh dena…kehna ke meri dabyat thik nahi hain..ya phir …
Disha: Aacha to mein Aai se Jhot bolo
Rano: Di pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ee
Disha: Theek hain theek hain…Zyada maska lagane ki koi zaroorat nahi hain!
Rano: Oh dee ..you r soo sweet..
Disha: (smiles) ha..woh to mein ho hi!....Arre paap re…Zaade aath (8: 30) mein sirf dus minute baaki hain
She hastily leaves the room and goes to her room. She comes out of the shower and gets changed into jeans and a cute pink shirt. She is in such a hurry, that she forgets to brush her hair! She quickly gets into the back of the car and tells the driver to start.
there are lots of cars. Disha's car is one of them. Inside, she is looking for
a brush in her bag to comb her hair. The car is stopped by a red signal. She
finds a brush and starts brushing her hair. Just then a black Mercedes parks
right next to Disha's car. It is a very high fanda car…seems like it belongs to
a very lucky bas***d!...The
windows of the car are sooo cool...that noone can see the inside..but
the person sitting inside the car can see everything outside! Guess
whose car it is....yes none other than Dk seghal's !
Inside Dk's car, Dk had been listening to
the radio. Suddenly,his eyes fall on the car next to his... He sees a
girl brushing her hair...but he can't see her face...as he can only see
her long , Black hair...Dk get curious...he opens the window of his car to get a better look...His
eyes are glued to the girl...even tho he cannot see anything
besides her hair.....something happened to him! He couldnt move...he
coudn't look anyhwere else besides at the girl brushing her hair. there
was something ...something in her..because of which he coudn't do
anything besides constantly stare at her... Just then, Disha, the girl brushing her hair...SWINGSSSSSSSSS her hair in the air ....while Dk's eyes are STILL glued
....and her hair lands on the other side...and she starts brushing the
other side of her hair.... DK' eyes POP OUT...to see the stunning,
beautiful Disha...he can't seem to get her eyes off and constantly
stares at her...Just then Dk' radio sings "Bahut Khoobsurat hooo..bahut
khoobsurat hoo....yeh bhigri si latte hain....inne chehre se uddne do
haaaa...bahut Khoobsurat hoon....bahut khoobsurat hooo..."
Disha who was too busy brushing her hair
doesn't notice Dk staring at her....but after she is done, she notices
a good looking, bearded man in a black suit with a red shirt staring at
her....She looks at him for a second...but he still continues looking
at her with a sparkle in his eyesss....she gets annoyed and turns her face to the other side...While DK STILL keeps on staring at her....She
turns her face a liitle to see if that man is still looking at
her....and guess what he was...withouting blinking once!...Disha gets
really frustrated...and opens her window...and looks in Dk's window
Disha:(angry) Excuse me Mister, Aap ko sharam nahi aati kisi ladki ko aise ghoorte huwe??
No response from Dk...but the same old CONSTANT staring...but this time a faint smile escapes his lips
Disha: Oh hello? mein aap se baat kar rahi ho!
again no response from Dk except his usual staring and this time a bigger smile at Disha
Disha gets really MAD now...she calls him " Besharam!" and quickly closes her window.....
Suddenly the signal turns green ...and her car drives off in a puff of smoke...
Dk who just realised that her car left...." arrrrrrrre suniyehhh"
...he removes his head out of the window...but Disha's car drives off in a puff of smoke...Dk puts hsi head back in the car...resting on the car seat...with a BIG smile on his face
Comments please........Soory for not writing for like a week..
Joined: 01 March 2005
i like the way u incorporated kaho naa pyaar hai sceen in the story.
write more please.
Joined: 22 March 2005
Plz write the next bit it is such a good movie keep it up lol!!!
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The scenes are written very beautifully. They make very good reading, thanx. Good work, keep it up!!!! When are you posting the next instalment? Waiting eagerly for u to continue.
Joined: 07 April 2005
awesome job, Bomby!! I can't wait to read the next part
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