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Tumhari Disha MOVIE! (Page 34)

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Posted: 05 July 2005 at 6:51pm | IP Logged
wher r u!! it has been a whole day!!

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like others i cant wait till the nxet part but take your wait
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Scene 20

The car stops…Dk gets out from the left…..he keeps the door open so disha could also come out…she comes out…he closes the door….the driver zooms off

At first…both don't know what to say..they look at each other and smile

Dk: So…finally goa pohoch gaye…

Disha: (smiles) ya…EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

 They are quite again….EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Disha: (to herself) Ab yeh kuch bolaga bhi ya aise hi budhu ki tarah khadha rahega….LOL

Dk: (hesitant) Amm who mein….mujhe tumse kuch baat….Embarrassed

Just then disha's friends (priya , pooja n shilpa….had to go back and check their names…lolz)  come to receive them…

Pooja: Kaha the tum dono?…raat bhar nahi aayeWink

Priya: Hum to police me complain karne waale the…

Pooja: Humari kya haalat ho gayi thi…lekin tum dono ko kya padi hain

Shilpa: Kab se kam ek phone to kar diya hota!

Disha and dk are quiet…while the girls keep on talking….

Dk: (to himself) Ek to beech me taang adati hain…..uppar se chup hone ka naam nahi…teeno ki teeno saaliya ( sister-in laws)  all- india radio se kam nahi !LOL

Disha: Ab tum teeno humari bata bhi sunogi !…(the 3 shut up)  humari gaadi kharaab ho gayi thi…matlab gas nahi tha…..isliyen humme ek Punjabi couple ke yaha raat bitani padi

Pooja: oh hum to dar gaye the…lekin accha hua dk tumhare saath tha…haina disha?

Disha shows her badi badi eyes to Pooja ..(to herself ) poooooo jaaaLOLLOL

Disha: (lowers her eyes) ya…Embarrassed

Just then rohit comes out of nowhere

Rohit: Dk ji, badi jaldi aa gaye aap…siddhe shaadi ke baad hi aate…Wink( all girls laugh)

Dk: Arre meine sorry kaha na…(while hugging him..he whispers) ladki saath thi…samjha kar yaar…Wink(hugs him tighter)

Rohit: Theek hain theek hain…tu bhi kya yaad rakhega…..(clears his throat) a ahem…zara inse introduction to karwaoWink…(indicating disha)

Dk: (to himself..looking at rohit) Saale…sab to pata hain…formal introduction ki kya zarurat hain ..LOLLOL

Before dk or anyone else could explain…

Disha: (smiles) Mein Disha…Reema ki doost…

Rohit:  Matlab meri saali !..Chalo ab meri saaliyo mein aapka naam bhi shaamil ho gaya…...lekin mujhe ek baat samajh nayi aayii….ke tum  mere doost ke saath kya kar rahi thi?Wink

Pooja, Priya and shilpa are giggling inside.LOL...while disha gets really embarrassed…EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Dk looks at rohit  with a " Tu ruk saale…tujhe to mein dekh loonga!"LOL

DK: Ah who….meine disha ko lift di thi…

Rohit: Oh accha accha..Haila! Tum dono ne raat ko kya kiya? LOL(disha's friends start giggling…disha is soooo embaraased..dk looks like he will shoot rohitLOLLOL) Oh nahi ....mere matlab….raat kaha bitaayi…?Wink

Dk: Ek bhale sardarji ne humme rehne ke liye jagga di…

Rohit: Oh accha accha…( to disha) waise mere doost ne aapko zyaada tang to nahi kiya?WinkWink

Disha doesn't know what to say…she gets even more shyEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Disha's  friends are giggling under their heads…disha who is really embarrassed and shy at the same time….moves her hair behind her ear…

DK: Saale..teri aadat abhi tak nahi gayiLOL….meri chod....yeh bata ke meri bhabhi kaha hain?Wink

Disha: Ah….Meine bhi reema ko nahi dekha…hain kaha woh?

Pooja: Andar hain ..woh to kabse tumhara intezaar kar rahi hain….tum jaldi chalo.....fir humme tayyar bhi to hona hain..

DK: Tayyar..kyun?

Rohit: Mere yaha sangeet ka function hain…

Dk: Lekin usme ladkiwaale bhi invited hain kya?

Rohit: Arre sab anhi..sirf meri pyaari saaliya…abhi ek ghante mein sangeet shuru hone wala hain……yaar tum baate bahut karte hainLOL…...chalo jaldi chalo!

Rohit grabs dk….and disha's friends grab her…Dk and rohit walk towards the ladke wala's farmhouse…and right across is it...is another farmhouse…thats where the ladki walas are…Disha goes towards that farmhouse…

Rohit and Dk walking...

Rohit : (with his arm around dk) Yaar hum sab kab se tera intezaar kar rahe hain....thank god ke tu finally a ato gaya!

Dk is too busy looking back...trying to get a glance of disha..when disha and her friends enter their farmhousel...and then they disaapear

Rohit: Lo karlo baat , doost yah bagal mein khada hain....aur aap hain ki ladki se nazar hi nahi hatti!Wink ( takes his arm off of dk)

Dk:(puts his right arm around him) Arre yaar ...Aisa kuch nahi hain...haa to kya keh raha tha tu?

Rohit; Yehi ke hum sab tumhara kabse intazaar kar rahe the..mein, rohan, mohit, vicky...

Dk: (takes his arm off of him) Kya! woh saala vicky bhi aa raha hain...? Usse invite karne ki kya zarurat thi?Angry

Rohit: Arre jaise tu mera doost hain waise bhi mera doost hain...

Dk: Arre tujh kuch nahi pata...ek number ka chalo insaan hain wohAngry

Rohit: ( cracks up..... to himself) ...to tum khud kya cheez ho?LOLLOL

Rohit: Lekin tu kyun itna dar raha hain...woh to ladkiyo ke peeche peeche bhaagega naa

Dk: Yaar ussi ka to darr hain....(anger) Agar usni meri wali ke taraf aank uthakar bhi dekha to mein. ..mein uski..Angry

Rohit cracks up againLOLLOL

Dk: haa haa has le...tujhe kya hai? Teri wali to reserved hain! LOLLOLLekin meri waali to ....(looks at teh ground...with a "hopeless" CryCryexpression)LOLLOL

Rohit: Yaar to tension mat le.....woh doosri ladkiyo par bhi to line maar sakta hain....waise bhi meri shaadi me to bahut saari ladkiya aayegi.....waise yaar yeh jo disha hain naa...(dk cuts him off)

Dk: Bhabhi bol bhabhiAngry!LOLLOLLOL

Rohit: Haa Haa wahi bhabhijaan...(dk cuts him off)

Dk: (ghusse se laal) BhabhiJaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan nahiAngry..sirf bhabhi!LOL

Rohit: Haa haa wahi....(Scared....puts his arm around dk) Yaar tum bahut jaldi excite ho jaate hooLOLLOL

Dk: Aisa hi hoo mein!LOLLOL

Rohit and dk reach the door

PS: Next scene will be the sangeet one...prob one of the longest one...soo that one will definatelt take somr time...but that one will be a BLASTWink..soo stay tuned

Bomby!Big smile



Edited by Bombgirl4eva - 05 July 2005 at 9:56pm
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ahh.... please hurry!!!!!!!! please update b4 sat.. cuz i am leaving for india for a month!!!!LOL
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Posted: 05 July 2005 at 11:53pm | IP Logged

yaar bomby's i could picture da whole story in my head. heheheLOLLOL

continue soon, can't wait to read more waise mene teen bar tumhari story paari, it was so interesting like watching a movie.ClapEmbarrassed at Naz8 get itLOLLOLLOL

for those who don't know Naz8 is a movie theaterwhere all indian movies play, bomby's and i are half an hour away from each others resident.Tongue

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Posted: 06 July 2005 at 12:02am | IP Logged
That was gr8..plz post the next part really soon!!
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it was gr8  Clap
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Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat stuff Bomby!!

LOL

Bhabhi jaan!! HAHA!

Simply Fantastic! Ab isse zyada kya kahu Wink

Jaslove..tum teen baar..meine 5 times parli LOL You really can visualise alll the scenes! Itz an addictive movie Wink Kaash it could be really produced Embarrassed

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