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The car stops…Dk gets out from the left…..he keeps the door open so disha could also come out…she comes out…he closes the door….the driver zooms off
At first…both don't know what to say..they look at each other and smile
Dk: So…finally goa pohoch gaye…
Disha: (smiles) ya…
They are quite again….
Disha: (to herself) Ab yeh kuch bolaga bhi ya aise hi budhu ki tarah khadha rahega….
Dk: (hesitant) Amm who mein….mujhe tumse kuch baat….
Just then disha's friends (priya , pooja n shilpa….had to go back and check their names…lolz) come to receive them…
Pooja: Kaha the tum dono?…raat bhar nahi aaye
Priya: Hum to police me complain karne waale the…
Pooja: Humari kya haalat ho gayi thi…lekin tum dono ko kya padi hain
Shilpa: Kab se kam ek phone to kar diya hota!
Disha and dk are quiet…while the girls keep on talking….
Dk: (to himself) Ek to beech me taang adati hain…..uppar se chup hone ka naam nahi…teeno ki teeno saaliya ( sister-in laws) all- india radio se kam nahi !
Disha: Ab tum teeno humari bata bhi sunogi !…(the 3 shut up) humari gaadi kharaab ho gayi thi…matlab gas nahi tha…..isliyen humme ek Punjabi couple ke yaha raat bitani padi
Pooja: oh hum to dar gaye the…lekin accha hua dk tumhare saath tha…haina disha?
Disha shows her badi badi eyes to Pooja ..(to herself ) poooooo jaaa
Disha: (lowers her eyes) ya…
Just then rohit comes out of nowhere
Rohit: Dk ji, badi jaldi aa gaye aap…siddhe shaadi ke baad hi aate…( all girls laugh)
Dk: Arre meine sorry kaha na…(while hugging him..he whispers) ladki saath thi…samjha kar yaar…(hugs him tighter)
Rohit: Theek hain theek hain…tu bhi kya yaad rakhega…..(clears his throat) a ahem…zara inse introduction to karwao…(indicating disha)
Dk: (to himself..looking at rohit) Saale…sab to pata hain…formal introduction ki kya zarurat hain ..
Before dk or anyone else could explain…
Disha: (smiles) Mein Disha…Reema ki doost…
Rohit: Matlab meri saali !..Chalo ab meri saaliyo mein aapka naam bhi shaamil ho gaya…...lekin mujhe ek baat samajh nayi aayii….ke tum mere doost ke saath kya kar rahi thi?
Pooja, Priya and shilpa are giggling inside....while disha gets really embarrassed…
Dk looks at rohit with a " Tu ruk saale…tujhe to mein dekh loonga!"
DK: Ah who….meine disha ko lift di thi…
Rohit: Oh accha accha..Haila! Tum dono ne raat ko kya kiya? (disha's friends start giggling…disha is soooo embaraased..dk looks like he will shoot rohit) Oh nahi ....mere matlab….raat kaha bitaayi…?
Dk: Ek bhale sardarji ne humme rehne ke liye jagga di…
Rohit: Oh accha accha…( to disha) waise mere doost ne aapko zyaada tang to nahi kiya?
Disha doesn't know what to say…she gets even more shy
Disha's friends are giggling under their heads…disha who is really embarrassed and shy at the same time….moves her hair behind her ear…
DK: Saale..teri aadat abhi tak nahi gayi….meri chod....yeh bata ke meri bhabhi kaha hain?
Disha: Ah….Meine bhi reema ko nahi dekha…hain kaha woh?
Pooja: Andar hain ..woh to kabse tumhara intezaar kar rahi hain….tum jaldi chalo.....fir humme tayyar bhi to hona hain..
Rohit: Mere yaha sangeet ka function hain…
Dk: Lekin usme ladkiwaale bhi invited hain kya?
Rohit: Arre sab anhi..sirf meri pyaari saaliya…abhi ek ghante mein sangeet shuru hone wala hain……yaar tum baate bahut karte hain…...chalo jaldi chalo!
Rohit grabs dk….and disha's friends grab her…Dk and rohit walk towards the ladke wala's farmhouse…and right across is it...is another farmhouse…thats where the ladki walas are…Disha goes towards that farmhouse…
and Dk walking...
: (with his arm around dk) Yaar hum sab kab se tera intezaar kar rahe
hain....thank god ke tu finally a ato gaya!
Dk is too busy looking back...trying to get a glance of
disha..when disha and her friends enter their farmhousel...and then they
Rohit: Lo karlo baat , doost yah bagal mein khada hain....aur aap hain ki ladki se nazar hi nahi hatti! ( takes his arm off of dk)
Dk:(puts his right arm around him) Arre yaar ...Aisa kuch nahi hain...haa to kya keh raha tha tu?
Rohit; Yehi ke hum sab tumhara kabse intazaar kar rahe the..mein, rohan, mohit, vicky...
Dk: (takes his arm off of him) Kya! woh saala vicky bhi aa raha hain...? Usse invite karne ki kya zarurat thi?
Rohit: Arre jaise tu mera doost hain waise bhi mera doost hain...
Dk: Arre tujh kuch nahi pata...ek number ka chalo insaan hain woh
Rohit: ( cracks up..... to himself) ...to tum khud kya cheez ho?
Rohit: Lekin tu kyun itna dar raha hain...woh to ladkiyo ke peeche peeche bhaagega naa
Dk: Yaar ussi ka to darr hain....(anger) Agar usni meri wali ke taraf aank uthakar bhi dekha to mein. ..mein uski..
Rohit cracks up again
Dk: haa haa has le...tujhe kya hai? Teri wali to reserved hain! Lekin meri waali to ....(looks at teh ground...with a "hopeless" expression)
Rohit: Yaar to tension mat le.....woh doosri
ladkiyo par bhi to line maar sakta hain....waise bhi meri shaadi me to
bahut saari ladkiya aayegi.....waise yaar yeh jo disha hain naa...(dk
cuts him off)
Dk: Bhabhi bol bhabhi!
Rohit: Haa Haa wahi bhabhijaan...(dk cuts him off)
Dk: (ghusse se laal) BhabhiJaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaan nahi..sirf bhabhi!
Rohit: Haa haa wahi....(Scared....puts his arm around dk) Yaar tum bahut jaldi excite ho jaate hoo
Dk: Aisa hi hoo mein!
Rohit and dk reach the door
PS: Next scene will be the sangeet one...prob one of the longest one...soo that one will definatelt take somr time...but that one will be a BLAST..soo stay tuned
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yaar bomby's i could picture da whole story in my head. hehehe
continue soon, can't wait to read more waise mene teen bar tumhari story paari, it was so interesting like watching a movie. at Naz8 get it
for those who don't know Naz8 is a movie theaterwhere all indian movies play, bomby's and i are half an hour away from each others resident.
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Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrreat stuff Bomby!!
Bhabhi jaan!! HAHA!
Simply Fantastic! Ab isse zyada kya kahu
Jaslove..tum teen baar..meine 5 times parli You really can visualise alll the scenes! Itz an addictive movie Kaash it could be really produced
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