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tres bien bomby , it was a very good story
keep up the good work
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!! gud dose yea bad dose?
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It's the next day…disha gets up fom the bed…still with her eyes closed….stretching her arms….she opens her eyes and realizes that she is on the bed..instead of the sofa
Disha: (to herself) Mein yaha kaise ..mein to sofe parrr……(she looks around to find dk sleeping on the coach…looking like a teddy bear….she smilesss......she keeps staring at him with a faint smile on her face…
Background muic: Tu ruuuuuuuuuuuu… ru ru ru ru ruruuuuuuuuuu (yes , the maine pyaar kiya music…)
She keeps staring at him…when dk ..neend mein ….moves his body to the left side..and goes to sleep again…and disha comes out of her dream world…she shakes her head…and gets off the bed
20 minutes later…Dk in the same clothes..yellow shirt and balck pants ( don't worry ..ek hi din hua hain) is talking on his cell..outside the house
Dk: haa……...haa……yahi hain hum ….tum jaldi ek gaadi bhej do
Rohit: ( who is on the other line) Don't worry ..meine driver ko to kabka bhej diya..….lekin yeh ladkeeeee
Dk: ( deep breath……smiles) haa wohi ladki hain jiske baare me mein baat kar raha tha….
Rohit: Accha bachu…..abhi to ladki mili nahi ke tune apne doost ko ignore karna shuru kar diya…abhi to sirf tune usse.(dk cuts him off)
Dk: Aisa kuch nahi hain….mein to aane wala tha…ab humari gaadi kharab ho gayi..isliyeh humme yaha raat bitaani padi
Rohit: (teasing) HUMARI gaadi kharaab ho gayi?……oye kya baat hain…tu to bilkul sudhar gaya …aisa kya jadoo kiya us ladki ne…..waise who ladki tere saath..teri gaadi mein kya kar rahi thi…???
Rohit: (teasing) arre humme bhi to batao..zara hum bhi to sune
Dk:( turns around..so he is facing the house's door) Arre aisa kuch nahi yaar…lift di thi yaar…aur kuch nahi…
Rohit: Aur tune lift dete dete apna dil bhi usse de diya ..kyun bhai?
Dk: (smiles) Aree aisa kuch…(when his eyes fall on a girl walking out of the door…it is disha in a beautiful dark red saari walking towards him…looking WOW …her hair blowing in the air…some of it coming on her face…she tries to take them off…dk stops talking…he just keeps staring at her…without saying anything..teh phone is still in his hand)
Disha is walking and walking…while dk SLOWLY puts his cell down…while his eyes filled with passion and love….are still glued on to her…
Backgroud Music: Sooooooooooooooooooniyeh……sooooooooooooooooooniyeh…..
Rohit: ( on the line) hello…hello..hello dk..hello
Dk slowly turns his cell off…..still staring at disha….without blinking once….while disha is still walking
Background Music: Aaja soniyeh..aaja soniyeh..aaja oniyeh….sooniyeeeeehhhhhhhhhhh
Disha comes to a stop..she stands in front of dk…who is still staring at her …
Disha: ( smiling) Aise kya dekh rahe ho?
Dk: Huh? (comes out of his dream world) (smiles) Kuch nahi…….(nods..with a faint smile on his face..low soft voice..) aachi lag rahi ho..
Disha: (smiles) Thanks…aunty ne di hain….bahut zid kar rahi thi…. isliyeh meine pehen li…warna mein aur ..saadiya……(laughs)
Dk: (to himself..naughty naughty) Tum par to kuch bhi suit ho jaaye…lekin is saadi me to tum kuch zyada hi ….
Disha: Tumne rohit ko phone kar diya?
Dk: Oh! Haa..gaadi aati hi hogi…waise yaha se itna door nahi hain….yahi kuch bees-tees( 20-30) minutes…humme thosi der intezaar karna hoga…( saying this he goes and stands next to her….instead of facing her..they are facing the road)
Both of them are shy..they don't talk for like a minute
Disha: (puts her hair behind her ear) Ah woh…mein…
Dk: (facing her) haa?
Disha: (faces him) Woh kal raat ke liye …(with her jhuki nazre)..thanks..
Dk: (smiling) Kis liye?
Disha: (shy) Woh tumne mujhe bed par…..
Dk: Oh woh…(smiles) …galdi to meri thi…mujhe pehle hi tumhe bed par soone dena chahiyeh tha…anyways…next time..
Disha: ( to herself…smiling) Next time???
Again, both are quiet…they don't know what to say..both are embaresed…they look at each other…and both smileeee..
Dk: ( looking at her..to himself) aaj kuch aache mood mein lag rahi hain…aaj to try maarna hi chahiyeh…
Dk clears his throat "a ahem" and puts his right arm around her…disha is shocked but doesn't say anything
Dk: ( facing her..his right arm around her) To votti ji…humne abhi tak yeh decide nahi kiya ke hum humare hone wale bacche ka kya naam rakhenge….
Disha: ( Raises her eyebrows ..smiling)
Disha: ( to herself) Chalo ..lets have some fun!
Disha: (shy) Lekin yeh to us par depend karta hain ke humme ladka hoga ya ladki (faces him)
Dk: ammmmmmm ladki hogi ( smiles)
Disha: ladka hua to.??
Dk: ( shakes his head in disaapointment) nahi…ladki hogi!
Disha: (disappointed) lekin mujhe ladka chahiyeh!
Dk: Lekin mujhe ladki chahiye
Disha: nahi humme ladka hi hoga
Dk: Lekin ladka to baadme bhi ho sakta hain…lekin sabse pehle ladki hogi
Disha: (with her arms folded…MAD) meine keh diya ladka hoga to ..ladka hi hoga!
Dk: (removes his arm ) lekin jaan…
Disha: Bus meine keh diya to ladka hi hoga ! ( arms folded…looks away)
Dk turns her around by her waist….so she is facing him…moves closer..holding her waist….her arms are still folded
Dk: Accha buhba humara ladka hi hoga
Disha: ( smiles and puts her arms around his neck) To fir …theek hain….(smiles)
Dk: To hum uska naam kya rakhenge? Munty?
Disha: Munty?( makes a face) Cheee yeh kaise naam hainMein apne bacho itna sadyal naam nahi doongi!….
Dk: Kyun bunty –shunty ke baad munty accha nahi hoga??
Disha: Bilkul nahi!
Dk: ( moves closer..holder her tighter…) To fir kya naam rakhe?
Disha: Ammmmmmmmmmmmmm…Raj kaisa rahega?
Dk: Raj ( makes a face) Che….yeh saare filmi naam na…(shakes his head in disappointment) mujhe nahi pasand….
Disha: Arre….itna accha naam to hain!
Dk: Khaak aacha naam hain…bada ho kar kya khaak naam roshan karega…..kisi simran ke peeche peeche dhum hilate hue bhagta phirega (makes a face)
Disha: To thodi bahut to paap ki aadat hogi hi na usme! Aakhir beta paap mar nahi jaayega to fir kis par..
Dk: (complaining) Haa haa saari buri aadat to mujhi me hain na…..tum to dhood ki dhuli ho na..…agar mere lakshan aayenge to tumhara woh char inch ka attitude jo hain na…who bhi usme hoga…
Disha: Kya! (quickly removes his arms from her waist) Mera attitude!( ghusse mein folds her arms again..looking at the road)
Dk: Arre jaan tum to..(starts by putting his arms around her..when she bangs them down…)
Disha: ( Mu fula hua) Mujhse kuch nahi sun na!
Dk grabs her waist from behind…facing her
Dk: (teasing.) Mein to majjaaak kar raha tha…
Disha: ( removes his arms from her waist) Mujhe kuch nahi sunna !
Dk:(grabs her waist from her back again) (all cute n innocent) Sunu naaa..
Disha: ( removes his arms again) nahi sunna!
Just then a car comes and stops rite in front of the,…but the two are too busy fighting
Dk: (grabs her waist again) suno na please
Disha: ( again pushes his arms off) NAHI SUNNA!
Dk: ( grabs her again) sunna hoga
Disha: (pushes his arms off) Nahi!
Dk: ( grabs her again) Haa!
Disha: Nahi nahi nahi
Dk : haa haa haa!
Disha : Nahi
The driver who had been looking at dk to disha..and disha to dk..finallt butts in
Driver: ( sitting in the car) Ah Excuse me…kya aap dk hain…mujhe rohit sahib ne bheja hain
Dk and disha look at each other…they are both embarrassed.he quickly takes his arms off her waist…disha gets really shy..she puts her hair behind her ear….sharmaate hue..
Dk: aa who……(raises his eyebrows) Chale?
Disha shyly nods her head…Dk opens the back door of the car…
Dk: (faint smile) Come!
Disha who can hardly have eye contact with Dk..quickly gets in the car…dk follows her..and closes the door from inside…Dk orders the driver to go…and drives starts the engine….
and disha are both embararreasd..they keep looking at each other…chori chori..chupke
chupke…whenever they get a chance….whenever disha or dk realize that dk or
disha is also looking at them..they quickly take their nazre off…as if nothing happened…while
the car's music system plays " Chup chupke chup chupke chori se chori…..chup
chupke chup chupke re… chup chupke chup chupke chori se chori…..chup chupke
chup chupke re…" The car is zooming on the road...
PS: Lots and lots of dhamaal awaiting at the shaadi...so stay tuned!
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