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Tumhari Disha MOVIE! (Page 31)

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Good work Bomby, keep it up Clap.  enjoyed reading it.   The DK of your story is very very maskara.  Thinking of DK's state in yesterday's episode just makes me Cry.   At least your DK brings a LOL on our faces.

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Posted: 02 July 2005 at 6:14pm | IP Logged

tres bien bomby , it was a very good story

keep up the good work SmileTongue

Sumayya IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 July 2005 at 6:18pm | IP Logged
How long do we havta wait for the next dose? Embarrassed
TD.FAN Goldie

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Posted: 02 July 2005 at 7:20pm | IP Logged

pleassssssss write the next part

Piano1422 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 July 2005 at 8:27pm | IP Logged

Originally posted by Sumayya

How long do we havta wait for the next dose? Embarrassed

LOL!! gud dose yea bad dose?

Sumayya IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 02 July 2005 at 8:59pm | IP Logged


Her doses her brilliant! Never bad Wink

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Scene 19

It's the next day…disha gets up fom the bed…still with her eyes closed….stretching her arms….she opens her eyes and realizes that she is on the bed..instead of the sofa

Disha: (to herself) Mein yaha kaise ..mein to sofe parrr……(she looks around to find dk sleeping on the coach…looking like a teddy bear….she smilesss......she keeps staring at him with a faint smile on her face…Embarrassed

Background muic: Tu ruuuuuuuuuuuu… ru ru ru ru ruruuuuuuuuuu (yes , the maine pyaar kiya musicEmbarrassed…)

She keeps staring at him…when dk ..neend mein ….moves his body to the left side..and goes to sleep againEmbarrassed…and disha comes out of her dream world…she shakes her headEmbarrassed…and gets off the bed

20 minutes later…Dk in the same clothes..yellow shirt and balck pants ( don't worry ..ek hi din hua hain) is talking on his cell..outside the house

Dk: haa……...haa……yahi hain hum ….tum jaldi ek gaadi bhej do

Rohit: ( who is on the other line) Don't worry ..meine driver ko to kabka bhej diya..….lekin yeh ladkeeeee

Dk: ( deep breath……smiles) haa wohi ladki hain jiske baare me mein baat kar raha tha….Embarrassed

Rohit: Accha bachu…..abhi to ladki mili nahi ke tune apne doost ko ignore karna shuru kar diya…abhi to sirf tune usse.(dk cuts him off)

Dk: Aisa kuch nahi hain….mein to aane wala tha…ab humari gaadi kharab ho gayi..isliyeh humme yaha raat bitaani padi

Rohit: (teasing) HUMARI gaadi kharaab ho gayi?Wink……oye kya baat hain…tu to bilkul sudhar gaya …aisa kya jadoo kiya us ladki ne…..waise who ladki tere saath..teri gaadi mein kya kar rahi thi…???Wink

Dk laughs

Rohit: (teasing) arre humme bhi to hum bhi to suneWink

 Dk:( turns he is facing the house's door) Arre aisa kuch nahi yaar…lift di thi yaar…aur kuch nahi…Embarrassed

Rohit: Aur tune lift dete dete apna dil bhi usse de diya ..kyun bhai?Wink

Dk: (smilesEmbarrassedEmbarrassed) Aree aisa kuch…(when his eyes fall on a girl walking out of the door…it is disha in a beautiful dark red saari  walking towards him…looking WOW …her hair blowing in the air…some of it coming on her face…she tries to take them off…dk stops talking…he just keeps staring at her…without saying anything..EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedteh phone is still in his hand)

Disha is walking and walking…while dk SLOWLY puts his cell down…while his eyes filled with passion and love….are still glued on to her…

Backgroud Music: Sooooooooooooooooooniyeh……sooooooooooooooooooniyeh…..EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Rohit: ( on the line) hello…hello..hello dk..helloLOLLOL

Dk slowly turns his cell off…..still staring at disha….without blinking once….while disha is still walkingEmbarrassed

Background Music: Aaja soniyeh..aaja soniyeh..aaja oniyeh….sooniyeeeeehhhhhhhhhhhEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Disha comes to a stop..she stands in front of dk…who is still staring at herEmbarrassed

Disha: ( smiling) Aise kya dekh rahe ho?

Dk: Huh? (comes out of his dream world) (smiles) Kuch nahi…….(nods..with a faint smile on his face..low soft voice..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed) aachi lag rahi ho..Embarrassed

Disha: (smiles) Thanks…Embarrassedaunty ne di hain….bahut zid kar rahi thi…. isliyeh meine pehen li…warna mein aur ..saadiya……(laughs)

Dk: (to himself..naughty naughty) Tum par to kuch bhi suit ho jaaye…lekin is saadi me to tum kuch zyada hi ….Wink

Disha: Tumne rohit ko phone kar diya?

Dk: Oh! Haa..gaadi aati hi hogi…waise yaha se itna door nahi hain….yahi kuch bees-tees( 20-30) minutes…humme thosi der intezaar karna hoga…( saying this he goes and stands next to her….instead of facing her..they are facing the road)

Both of them are shyEmbarrassedEmbarrassed..they don't talk for like a minute

Disha: (puts her hair behind her earEmbarrassed) Ah woh…mein…

Dk: (facing her) haa?

Disha: (faces him) Woh kal raat ke liye …(with her jhuki nazre)..thanks.Embarrassed.

Dk: (smiling) Kis liye?

Disha: (shy) Woh tumne mujhe bed par…Embarrassed..

Dk: Oh woh…(smiles) …galdi to meri thi…mujhe pehle hi tumhe bed par soone dena chahiyeh tha…anyways…next time..Wink

Disha: ( to herself…smiling) Next time???LOL

Again, both are quiet…they don't know what to say..both are embaresed…they look at each other…and both smileeee..Embarrassed

Dk: ( looking at himself) aaj kuch aache mood mein lag rahi hain…aaj to try maarna hi chahiyeh…Wink

Dk clears his throat "a ahem" and puts his right arm around herWink…disha is shocked but doesn't say anything

Dk: ( facing her..his right arm around her) To votti ji…humne abhi tak yeh decide nahi kiya ke hum humare hone wale bacche ka kya naam rakhenge….Wink

Disha: ( Raises her eyebrows ..smiling)

Disha: ( to herself) Chalo ..lets have some fun!Wink

Disha: (shy) EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedLekin yeh to us par depend karta hain ke humme ladka hoga ya ladki (faces him)

Dk: ammmmmmm ladki hogi ( smiles)

Disha: ladka hua to.??

Dk: ( shakes his head in disaapointment) nahi…ladki hogi!

Disha: (disappointed) lekin mujhe ladka chahiyeh!Ouch

Dk: Lekin mujhe ladki chahiye

Disha: nahi  humme ladka hi hoga

Dk: Lekin ladka to baadme bhi ho sakta hain…lekin sabse pehle ladki hogi

Disha: (with her arms folded…MADAngryAngry) meine keh diya ladka hoga to ..ladka hi hoga!Angry

Dk: (removes his arm ) lekin jaan…EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Disha: Bus meine keh diya to ladka hi hoga ! ( arms folded…looks awayLOL)

Dk turns her around by her waist….so she is facing him…moves closer..holding her waist…EmbarrassedEmbarrassed.her arms are still folded

Dk: Accha buhba humara ladka hi hogaEmbarrassed

Disha: ( smiles and puts her arms around his neck) To fir …theek hain….(smiles)

Dk: To hum uska naam kya rakhenge? Munty?

Disha: Munty?( makes a face) Cheee yeh kaise naam hainAngryMein apne bacho itna sadyal naam nahi doongi!….

Dk: Kyun bunty –shunty ke baad munty accha nahi hoga??

Disha: Bilkul nahi!

Dk: ( moves closer..holder her tighter…Wink) To fir kya naam rakhe?Wink

Disha: Ammmmmmmmmmmmmm…Raj kaisa rahega?

Dk:  Raj ( makes a face) Che….yeh saare filmi naam na…(shakes his head in disappointment) mujhe nahi pasand….

Disha: Arre….itna accha  naam to hain!

Dk: Khaak aacha naam hain…bada ho kar kya khaak naam roshan karega…..kisi simran ke peeche peeche dhum hilate hue bhagta phiregaLOLLOL (makes a faceAngry)

Disha: To thodi bahut to paap ki aadat hogi hi na usme! Aakhir beta paap mar nahi jaayega to fir kis par..LOLLOL

Dk: (complaining) Haa haa saari buri aadat to mujhi me hain na…..tum to dhood ki dhuli ho na..…agar mere lakshan aayenge to tumhara woh char inch ka attitude jo hain na…who bhi usme hoga…LOLLOLLOL

Disha: Kya! (quickly removes his arms from her waist) Mera attitude!( ghusse mein folds her arms again..looking at the roadLOLLOL)

Dk: Arre jaan tum to..(starts by putting his arms around her..when she bangs them down…)

Disha: ( Mu fula hua) Mujhse kuch nahi sun na!

Dk grabs her waist from behindWink…facing herEmbarrassed

Dk: (teasing.) Mein to majjaaak kar raha tha…Embarrassed

Disha: ( removes his arms from her waist) Mujhe kuch nahi sunna !

Dk:(grabs her waist from her back againWink) (all cute n innocent) Sunu naaa..Embarrassed

Disha: ( removes his arms again) nahi sunna!

Just then a car comes and stops rite in front of the,…but the two are too busy fightingLOL

Dk: (grabs her waist again) suno na pleaseEmbarrassed

Disha: ( again pushes his arms off)  NAHI SUNNA!

Dk: ( grabs her again)  sunna hoga

Disha: (pushes his arms off) Nahi!

Dk: ( grabs her again) Haa!

Disha: Nahi!

Dk: Haa

Disha: Nahi nahi nahi

Dk : haa haa haa!

Disha : Nahi

Dk: Haa!

The driver who had been looking at dk to disha..and disha to dk..finallt butts in

Driver: ( sitting in the car) Ah Excuse me…kya aap dk hain…mujhe rohit sahib ne bheja hain

Dk and disha look at each other…they are both embarrassed.EmbarrassedEmbarrassedhe quickly takes his arms off her waist…disha gets really shyEmbarrassedEmbarrassed..she puts her hair behind her ear….sharmaate hue..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Dk: aa who……(raises his eyebrows) Chale?

Disha shyly nods her head…Dk opens the back door of the car…

Dk: (faint smile) Come!

Disha who can hardly have eye contact with Dk..quickly gets in the car…dk follows her..and closes the door from inside…Dk orders the driver to go…and drives starts the engine….

Dk and disha are both embararreasd..they keep looking at each other…EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedchori chori..chupke chupke…whenever they get a chance….whenever disha or dk realize that dk or disha is also looking at them..they quickly take their nazre off…EmbarrassedEmbarrassedas if nothing happened…while the car's music system plays " Chup chupke chup chupke chori se chori…..chup chupke chup chupke re… chup chupke chup chupke chori se chori…..chup chupke chup chupke reEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed…" The car is zooming on the road...

PS: Lots and lots of dhamaal awaiting at the stay tuned!Wink

BombyBig smile

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Posted: 03 July 2005 at 12:12am | IP Logged
ur just 2 good....plz continue soon!!!

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