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Tumhari Disha MOVIE! (Page 3)

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Posted: 14 May 2005 at 12:28pm | IP Logged

LOLi cannot help laughing when u refer inder as blondie paraoxide.LOL i get a laughter attack which at times become uncontrolable.LOLLOL

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Posted: 14 May 2005 at 6:57pm | IP Logged

Scene 2 Enjoy!Big smile

The scene starts on the highway. Its 8 in the morning. Dk is in his Mercedes, talking to someone on the phone. Taj, his secretary is sitting in the front seat, next to the driver

Dk: (on the phone)Kya? Do baje ki meeting? Cancel karwado…ha…teen baje ki bhi…jo kaha hain woh karo

Taj notices that his boss is very frustrated…he aks Dk if he is ok…

Dk : Ha mujhe kya hoga?

Taj: nahi woh aapne saari meeting cancel karwadi…..to..

Dk : Ha woh mein bahut thaka hua ho..bus..aur kuch nahi

Taj: (nosey) Sir..maine suna hai ke kal aap kisi party mein gaye the. Aur waha pe bahut saari ladkiyah bhi thi

Dk: Ha who to thi..lekin tum yeh kyun puch rahe ho?

Taj: Nahi woh…..woh mein to sirf…

Dk : Kya ..woh…woh mein kar rahe ho! Saaf saaf batao kya baat hain

Taj: Woh actu…(dk cuts him off)

Dk: yeh kya khadi khadi woh who bol rahe ho

Dk: Actaully mein yeh jaanna chahta tha key eh aap kaise karte ho…mera matlab hain ki saari ladikiyah (slows) aapke pichhee….

Dk: (laughs) mere picche kyun bhagti hain? (laughs again) Yeh sawal ka jawab to sirf tumhe who ladkiya hi de sakti hain!LOL

Taj: Aap kitne lucky hain jo aapko itni saari ladkiya pyar karti hain….kai logo ko to ek ladki bhi naseeb nahi hoti (referring to himself….LOL.lol)….to kya aaap un saari ladkiyo se pyar karte ho?

Dk: (cracks up) Pyaar ? Dk aur Pyaar? (cracks up again) Dk Seghal aisi beduki baatoon par vishwas nahi karta…tum to kitne saalo se mujhe jaante ho…tumhe itna bhi nahi pata ke pyar aur haar Dk ki dictionary mein nahi hain!

Taj: Lekin sir, aap to itni saari ladkiyoh se milte ho, kitno partiyo mein bhi jaate hoon…koi to aisi ladki hogi jisse aap pasand karte ho..

Dk: (laughs) Nahi, aisi to koi nahi hain

Taj: But sir, koi to aisi ladki hogi, jisko dekh kar aapke hosh udgaye ho?

Dk: Is duniya mein aisi koi ladki paida nahi huyee hain jo Dk ke hosh udda de!(oh reallyWink)

A WHITE FLASHHHHHHHHHHH

A girl, with long straight hair, is walking towards her window in a RED nighty. Her back is towards the camera, so we can't see her face. She goes and opens the curtains and stretches her arms. Her face is still not shown!

Taj: To kya aapki koi Dreamgirl nahi hain?

Dk: Meri dreamgirl? ? (serious) Thi naaa…meinehamesha se socha tha ek din…..EK DIN woh mere saamne zaroor aayegi..Embarrassed

FLASHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

The girl is still at the window. Suddenly, a blow of wind hits her face. She closes her eyes. The camera focuses on her closed eyes…but you still cant see her entire face..just her closed eyes…

Dk: Lekin woh mere saamne kabhi nahi aayi…..aur isliyeh mein pyaar par vishwas nahi karta

Taj: Lekin sir, aapko aisa kyun lagta hain ke who aapko nahi milegi. Agar woh is duniya mein hain, to woh aapko zaroor milegi!

Dk: Agar woh is duniya mein hain to kaha hain?

FLASHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!

The girl is still at the window. Suddenly, another heavy blow of wind hits her face and all of her blows on her face. The camera focuses on her face, but we still can't see her face, as her face is covered with her hair. She puts her hand on her face to move her hair…

Dk: Kaun hain woh ladki?

No flash this time!

Someone from the back calls " Dishaa" The girl in the blue nighty finally turns around with her hair swinging in the air. And we finally get to see her face. Yes guys, its none other than the beautiful, altra cool Chavi Mittal, the heroine of our movie!

In teh next scene they'll meet..its a fimli takkar.Wink.so Stay tuned!

Bomby!
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Posted: 14 May 2005 at 7:11pm | IP Logged
Good job, sweety!! Very filmy indeed!!
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Posted: 15 May 2005 at 1:23am | IP Logged
 its such a good movie plz write more
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Posted: 17 May 2005 at 4:57pm | IP Logged
Thanks guys...will continue my story/movie soon...was busy the last couple of days..so I coudnt continue...

Rang....so sorry aout teh laughter attacks u get...but u will have some more laughter attacks...in the future..just wait!

Cheers,
Bomby!Big smile
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Posted: 19 May 2005 at 12:40am | IP Logged

Scene 3

It was Suhas in the back, who had called disha's name. (lol..played by Hemani shiv puri!)

Disha: (faces her) Ha Aai?

Suhas: Dekha ! Tumhe mujhe sirf ek baar aawaz deni hoti hain…aur ( disha cuts her off)

Disha: (laughingly) Aur us maharani ko soo baar bolaye, to bhi nahi sunti ….right?

Suhas: Arre tumhe kaise pata?

Disha: Aaiiii….Aap rooz yehi to kehti ke!...(Both Laugh)

Suhas: Ab tum hi batao disha, sir par exams hain, lekin usse koi fikar hi nahi…Jab dekho to apne dostoon ke saath filme dekhti rahti hain

Disha: Lekin Aai, abhi to who bahut choti hain…agar who abhi enjoy nahi karegi to phir kab karegi??

Suhas: Tumhi ne usse sir pe chada ke rakha hain…(disha laughs) …tumhare vaje se hi who bahut bikad gayi hain…achha tum jao aur rano ko othoa…warna college ke liyeh der ho jayagi

Disha: Don't worry Aai..main hoon na!

Suhas leaves the room..and disha goes to Rano's room. Rano (mamta kulkarni..lol) is sleeping on her bed with the blanket over her face. Disha comes and takes off the blanket.

Rano: kyaa di, soone do na

Disha: Aur kitna soongi? 8 to kabke baj gaye…..chalo jaldi utho…college ke liye der ho rahi hain…

Rano: (sleepy and lazy) Oh di…aaj jaane ka mann nahi kar raha… aaj tum akeli hi kyun nahi chali jaati…

Disha: Raanoooo tum uthti ho ya mein..

Rano: Oh common di…ek din nahi jaogi to koi farak nahi badega…

Disha: Aur aai ko kya kahoo?

Rano: Oh di, kuch bhi keh dena…kehna ke meri dabyat thik nahi hain..ya phir …

Disha: Aacha to mein Aai se Jhot bolo

Rano: Di pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee ee

Disha: Theek hain theek hain…Zyada maska lagane ki koi zaroorat nahi hain!

Rano: Oh dee ..you r soo sweet..

Disha: (smiles) ha..woh to mein ho hi!....Arre paap re…Zaade aath (8: 30) mein sirf dus minute baaki hain

She hastily leaves the room and goes to her room. She comes out of the shower and gets changed into jeans and a cute pink shirt. She is in such a hurry, that she forgets to brush her hair! She quickly gets into the back of the car and tells the driver to start.

Highway- there are lots of cars. Disha's car is one of them. Inside, she is looking for a brush in her bag to comb her hair. The car is stopped by a red signal. She finds a brush and starts brushing her hair. Just then a black Mercedes parks right next to Disha's car. It is a very high fanda carWink…seems like it belongs to a very lucky bas***d!LOL...The windows of the car are sooo cool...that noone can see the inside..but the person sitting inside the car can see everything outside! Guess whose car it is....yes none other than Dk seghal's !

Inside Dk's car, Dk had been listening to the radio. Suddenly,his eyes fall on the car next to his... He sees a girl brushing her hair...but he can't see her face...as he can only see her long , Black hairWink...Dk get curious...he opens the window of his car to get a better lookWink...His eyes are glued  to the girl...even tho he cannot see anything besides her hair.....something happened to him! He couldnt move...he coudn't look anyhwere else besides at the girl brushing her hair. there was something ...something in her..because of which he coudn't do anything besides constantly stare at her...Wink Just then, Disha, the girl brushing her hair...SWINGSSSSSSSSS her hair in the air ....while Dk's eyes are STILL gluedWink ....and her hair lands on the other side...and she starts brushing the other side of her hair.... DK' eyes POP OUT...to see the stunning, beautiful Disha...he can't seem to get her eyes off and constantly stares at her...Just then Dk' radio sings "Bahut Khoobsurat hooo..bahut khoobsurat hoo....yeh bhigri si latte hain....inne chehre se uddne do haaaa...bahut Khoobsurat hoon....bahut khoobsurat hooo..."Wink

Disha who was too busy brushing her hair doesn't notice Dk staring at her....but after she is done, she notices a good looking, bearded man in a black suit with a red shirt staring at her....She looks at him for a second...but he still continues looking at her with a sparkle in his eyesssEmbarrassed....she gets annoyed and turns her face to the other sideLOL...While DK STILL keeps on staring at herEmbarrassedEmbarrassed....She turns her face a liitle to see if that man is still looking at her....and guess what he was...withouting blinking once!...Disha gets really frustrated...and opens her window...and looks in Dk's window

Disha:(angry) Excuse me Mister, Aap ko sharam nahi aati kisi ladki ko aise ghoorte huwe??LOL

No response from Dk...but the same old CONSTANT staring.LOL..but this time a faint smile escapes his lips

Disha: Oh hello? mein aap se baat kar rahi ho!

again no response from Dk except his usual staring and this time a bigger smileEmbarrassedEmbarrassed at Disha

Disha  gets really MAD now...she calls him " Besharam!" and quickly closes her window.....

Suddenly  the signal turns green ...and her car drives off in a puff of smoke...

Dk who just realised that her car left...." arrrrrrrre suniyehhh"
...he removes his head out of the window...but Disha's car drives off in a puff of smoke...Dk puts hsi head back in the car...resting on the car seat...with a BIG smile on his faceWink

Comments please........Soory for not writing for like a week..

Cheers,
Bomby!



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Posted: 19 May 2005 at 3:32pm | IP Logged

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i like the way u incorporated kaho naa pyaar hai sceen in the story.

write more please.Embarrassed



Edited by Jaslove - 19 May 2005 at 3:42pm
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Posted: 19 May 2005 at 3:41pm | IP Logged

Plz write the next bit it is such a good movie keep it up lol!!!

 

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