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Tumhari Disha MOVIE! (Page 26)

Sumayya IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 29 June 2005 at 3:12pm | IP Logged
Ay meri naani ki naani!! Intezaar nahi hota yaar! Cry

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Scene 17

Disha is shocked. She is looking at Dk with her eyes wide open and her mouth shut....dk is still smiling naughtily at her... Wink

Dk: (to himself) (holding her tight) hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm aur paas aao naa…WinkEmbarrassed

Dk moves his face to the right side a liitle…so he could feel/smell  her hair….which is on HIS RIGHT cheek…Wink

Dk: (playing around with her hairWink) Waise…..kaunsa shampoo use karti hoo tum?LOLLOL

Disha is schockedShocked….Disha looks at him with a "Tum kabhi nahi sodhroge "type of an expression…

Disha: ( to herself) (staring at dk who is busy playing around with her hairLOL) Kitna besharam ladka hain ya…bus ek mauka milna chahiyeh isse…aur iski flirting shuro…tumhara to kuch karna hi padega!

Disha: Kyun??!! Tum kyun puch rahe ho?

Dk: Kuch khaas nahi…( shakes his head) bus aise hi pooch raha thaLOL…( grabs some of her hair from his right hand…his left hand is still on her waist…..and puts them on his faceLOL)

Dk: (andar kuch aur bahar kuch) Waise they don't smell that bad…matlab theek hain….meri rai mein tumhe doosre shampoos try karne chahiyeh…LOLLOLLOL( starts putting some more hair on his face…and feels/smells some more) Mujhe ladkiyo ke shampoos ke bare mein kaafi knowledge hain….trust me…LOLLOL( he is literally hiding himself inside her hair)

Dk: ( to himself)( with his eyes closed and all…enjoying himself) Hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm….HEAVEN!LOLLOLLOL

Disha: (to herself) Mujhe koi shak nahi ke tumhe ladkiyo ke shampoo ka experience hain .....ha lekin itna yakeen hain ke tumhe ladies chapal ki maar ka bhi kaafi experience hainLOLLOL Ab tum dekhte jao…ke yeh Disha Bhosle tumhara kya harsh karti hain!Wink

While Dk is busy playing around with her hair and complaining at the same timeLOL...or should i say giving her tips on what kind of shmapoo to use ....She Sssssswings her hair off his face, and off his right cheek and they land on his other cheek..his left cheek…her right side…she brings her face closer to dk's ..REALLY CLOSEEmbarrassed…Dk is about to pass out …

Disha: ( puts her palm on his right cheek…..her left side) ( all cute and depressed) Kyun ….mere baal acche nahi hain kya?

Dk is so shocked that disha is sooooooooooooooooo close to him…LOLHe looks at her hair on  his one cheek..and then at her palm on the other….and then her face directly on top of his….their faces are about an inch apart…dk is about to faint…as he feels the heat from all sides…the heat from her lambe, kaaale baal from his left…the warmth of her palm from his right…and the hot, tempting face right in front of him…on top of that..his very own hot and  tempting faceLOLLOL….only adds more heatWink… he is about to pass out with sooo much heat…..the room temperature is increasing…his breath is increasing…and disha is bringing her face closer and closerEmbarrassed…if he was an heart attack patient then he would have surely had an attack by now.LOLLOLLOL

Dk: (who can hardly talk) ( has a gulp in his throat) ( heavily breathing and feeling the heat from all sides..left ,right and frontLOL) aaa baa….bbaa  baa…ab ….meine aisa…..meine aisa kab……kab kahaa…

Disha: (caressing HIS RIGHT cheek with her fingerWink) ( all cute n inncocent) Tum itne darre hue kyun lag rahe hoo…??

Dk: (feeling the jitters on his cheek…is completely nervous and shockedLOL) amm…..mein mein mein….…mein. kyun……mein …mein….meine kuch ..meine kuch nahi …nahi….nahi kiyaLOL

Disha: ( sweet and cute) ( still caressing his cheek with her fingerWink) Oh my babeeeeeeeeeeeee…..mein jaanti tumne kuuuuuuuuuuch nahi kiya….lekin kyun nahi kiya???( looks at him naugtily in the eye…while dk ..still in shock is staring at her…bina palak jhabkaaye)

Dk: (heavily breathing) tum….tum….tum ….tumhari dabyat to theek hain na….??LOL

Disha: (brings her face more closer to his) (caressing his neck with her finger) (complete FLIRT) Mujhe kya hua hain…..mein to abhi abhi hi to  hosh mein aaayi hoo ( starts caressing his bare chest with her finger….dk.. ..breathing heavily…..is about to faint any minute) Tumse milkar....mujhe aisa laga…jaise…jaise kisi current ne mere tan –badan ko hila diya hoooLOLLOL

Dk: (has a gulp in his throat) tum..tum..tumhare tevar to kuch badle…badle ( when disha puts her palm on his cheek again)

Dk shuts up…darr ke mare..uske forehead se pasina chotna shuru ho gaya….LOL

Disha: (all cute and concerned) Oh my babeeeee…tumhe to pasina aa raha hain…( puts her other palm on his other cheek…which only adds to dk's terroe…) lao mein pooch deti hooWink

Dk: (breathing even more heavily now since both of her palms are on his cheeks…including her hair and her face haunting him right in the front))puh…….puh…puh….puh….puhseeena…?LOL

Disha takes her duppata off…and wipes his forheadWink

Disha:  (all cute ) Oh my sweeetuuu…tumhe itna pasina kyun aa raha hainEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed?LOLLOLLOL

Dk: ( to himself) Tum mere itne ..itne….kareeb hoo….to mujhe garmi to lagegi hi naa…Wink

Dk: ((breathing even more heavily) mein …mein…mein…wooh....woh...bahut..bahut....bahut garmi hain na...LOL

Disha: (cute n inncoent) Oh baby...tumhe garmi lag rahi hain...to apna shirt kyun nahi uttar dete? Lao mein utaar deti hoon…Wink( Disha starts unbuttoning the rest of his shrit buttons..6 of them are already open)

Dk jiski halat pehle se hi itni boori hain…thinks that he is a having a nightmare!LOLLOL

Disha: ( rips open his shirt..he is still wearing it just that his entire chest is showing) Such! ( puts her both palms on his chest and moves them around on his chest)  Aaj bahut garmi hain!LOL

Dk: (breathing heavily) Tum…tum…...tum….tum…..tum….tum….tumm...

Disha: (puts a finger on his lips) ShsshhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhEmbarrassedEmbarrassed ….(puts her palms on each of his cheeks) Kuch mat bolo….kuch nahi…tum sirf mehsoos karo…aaj ….sirf mein aur tum….aur koi nahiWink….(saying this she comes brings her face really close…about half an inch apart)EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Dk: Mein..mein…sapna ..sapna..to nahi dekh raha…?Embarrassed

Disha: Yeh koi sapna nahi hain….yeh baat itni hi sach hain…jitna tumhara yeh puhsina…(she still has her palms on his cheeks…with her right thumb..she starts caressing his lips..she gets closer and closerEmbarrassed….whiel dk shocked at the beginning..just melts downEmbarrassed…he just blends in with the environment…Winkwith his eyes closed and all Embarrassed...waiting for his kissEmbarrassed)

just then the update comes to an endLOLLOL

bomby!LOL



Edited by Bombgirl4eva - 29 June 2005 at 9:40pm
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Posted: 29 June 2005 at 4:35pm | IP Logged

Angryi m going 2 kill u!! u ren't gonna update 4 some time!!!!!!!AngryAngry

nice story but plz continue QUICKLY!!

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Posted: 29 June 2005 at 4:43pm | IP Logged

LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL

AHAHAHAHAHAHAH

Sweeeeeeeetuuuu!!! LOL LOL  BRILLIANT! Wah ..kya gharam gharam teekha theeka, spicy masala wala scene tha Wink

Has has ke meri to heart attack hi hojayega LOL nai nai..meri to death hi hojayega Wink

But U HAD to stop there didnt u Angry jaanti thi mein!! Koi kissi ko tarpana tumhi se sikhe! Tongue

Bombgirl4eva Goldie
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Posted: 29 June 2005 at 4:46pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Indian101

Angryi m going 2 kill u!! u ren't gonna update 4 some time!!!!!!!AngryAngry

nice story but plz continue QUICKLY!!



yaar please don't kill meCryCryCry...I'll try n not take 2 days of break..try means tryTongue

Bomby!
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Posted: 29 June 2005 at 4:48pm | IP Logged

LOLhehe hahahaLOL

bomby's looks like dk is getting all nervous instead of disha, its the opposite. hahhahaLOL

gr8 keep it upClap

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Disha: (to herself) Mujhe koi shak nahi ke tumhe ladkiyo ke shampoo ka experience hain .....ha lekin itna yakeen hain ke tumhe ladies chapal ki maar ka bhi kaafi experience hain<!--[if !vml]-->LOL<!--[endif]--><!--[if !vml]-->LOL<!--[endif]--> Ab tum dekhte jao…ke yeh Disha Bhosle tumhara kya harsh karti hain!Wink

LOL DK ko mar hi parti rehte hei! Bechara DK Disha ke Tevar kyo badal gaye hei lagta hei kisi ko DK ko Rumal se Ponchna parega Bomby wana do the honours great Bomby what more can I say ur story is wordless its too brilliant plz continue soon I really love your quotes.LOLLOLLOL oh no the update ended I was waiting for more Ouch



Edited by miss.england02 - 29 June 2005 at 5:00pm
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Talk about ripping our hearts out with the last sentence.....

when do we get more, can't wait....

Great Job

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