Joined: 28 March 2005
ok cmoe onnn bomaby dont make me wait nnoo longer!!!!!!!!
i think u should take ur time cus mor the tmie mor the better of the story soo kepp writin love ya
Joined: 12 March 2005
This one is for someone
really special...who has read by entire movie three times...not
once..not twice..but three times...meine khud abhi tak poora ek bar bhi
nahi padha! Its poeple her ..that really encourage me to write more....Thank u again...this one is for her
Disha and Dk are staring into each others eyes ….him with PASSSSSSSIIIOON in his eyes ….and her staring MYSTERIOUSLY into his lovely eyes …They are both lost in their own world ….The camera focuses on dk's eyessssss ….tehn on disha's eyessss…fir aankhon aankhon ki baat …..They are staring amd staring .....theeki theeki nazro se …when the music starts playing in the background....
Ishq jaise hain ek aandhi…Ish hain ek toooooooooooofan…Ishq ke aage bebas hain…duniya mein har illlllllllllllllzaa…ishq mein sab deewane ne hain ..ishq mein sab hain heran….ishq mein sab kuch mushkil hain..ishq mein sab aasan…dekho pyaare…yeh nazare…yeh deewnae …yeh parwaane …hain ishq mein kaise ghum
Dk in a black and grey shining kurta shirt with black pants …looking soooo SMASHING ...haaai mein mar jaawa.....inside taj mahal …..Disha, in a black sexy choli …walking latak matak ke…and DK follwing her …dhum hilate hue ….Dk grabs both of her wrists ….by each of his strong arms ….and pulls her towards his chest …her back bangs into his chest…
Dk: Haaaaai! ..(in her ear) Tumse milke dil ka hain jo haaaaal kya kahe…(swings her out ...still holding her one hand and pulls her back))ho gaya kaisa yeh kaisa kammal kya kahe..(she lands in his arms...her hands on hsi chest..she pushes him off by his chest...and starts walking away...again ladak matak ke ) ( dk following her).tumse milke dil ka hain jo haaaaaal kya kahe…ho gaya hain kaisa yeh kammaaaaal kya kahe
Disha is standing by a pole...style se ......with her one arm against teh pole...while the other one on her waist ....her hair on one side...her back showing...her choli has lots of knots on the back....
Check that....like that
Dk comes from the left side ...take her hand off her waist..and kisses her hand...
Dk: Tum ko pooooja hain...(goes behind her) Tumhari ri hi (puts hsi both arms around her waist) ibaadat kee hi....(puts his head on her shoulder) Humne jab kee hain, toh phir aise mohabbat kee hain ( disha starts to go when he grabs her ....and pushes her towards the pole...and gets closer ...his left hand is on her right hand against the wall ...he is holding it kass ke ..his right hand is resting on her bare waist ....her other hand is againt the wall...Dk starts kissing her bare left shoulder/neck ...disha..feeling teh jitters ..tries to escape...when dk grabs her and pulls her towards him....her back back bangs into him again!
Dk:(crazily digs in her hair) Dil mera pagal hain jaana…isko tum pehlaado…) (turns her around ..holding her tight....and he gets closeer)dil mein kyun hulchul hain jaana…mujhko tum samjhado..( disha BENDS down..90 degree angle....)mehka jo aachal hain jaana…(bends on top of her and kisses her neck)isko tum lehrado…( pulls her up FOCEFULLY..)
coach! They land on a coach..with dk on the bottom..an disha on top....half of her hair is on his face)..zulf jo baadal hain jaana…mujh pe tum
Disha is sitting on a swing...when he attcaks her from teh side
Joined: 01 March 2005
bomby's so romantic
write soon hehehe
Joined: 28 March 2005
that was sooo funny!!!!!!!!! i mean qutish funny!!! lol
kepp iot up bombay
Joined: 19 April 2005
thnx 4 the update and it is very gud do i won't run after u w/ a baseball bat!
Joined: 05 March 2005
hey bomby i can clearly see that once u started the scene u just got carried away with it huh!!!!!!!!!!
by the way let dish become at ease when with out hottie and not so angry!!!!!!!
let things flow
just kidding!!!!!!!!!i wish huh!!!!!!!!!
Joined: 26 March 2005
Oye Bomby, oye oye Bomby:
Dil khush hua tumhara yeh episode read karke. Thanks.
Joined: 22 March 2005
..lol..but sorry for stopping right here..I can already see peopel running after me..with a baseball bat in their hands..
Also, I dint do the whole song...It would take too long...choreography takes a long time...waise bhi farah khan busy thi..isliyeh mujhe hi karna pada...
Teek hei is bar tumhe chor dete hai (I was also coming after you with the baseball bat) par kya kare tumhari story he itni achi hai ke hum tum ko bat lakei marne nahi aa rahe hei!! Wwow to hamare story ke gana apnahi likte tum farah Khan ko mere "Hello" jaror kehdena!
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