Joined: 18 May 2005
When are you writing the next scene I can't wait.......
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There are some people who have waited alot for this one..this one is for them
Disha, with her both arms around Dk, waiting for him to put her down…smiles fakely at him
Dk: ( smiles back) ( to himself) Beta Dk ..tu to gaya…accha khasa impression jamai tha…sab pani mein…..iska bus chale to mujhe bombay ki sadko par nagga ghumaye…
Disha: (all fake) Kya hua ji…mujhe neeche utaro naa…
Dk: (scared to death) neeche?Disha: Haa…tabhi to mein tumhe pupiya-jhabpiya de sakti hoon na…
Dk: (laughs fakely) ( to himself) ....isse to sab yaad hain…ab kya kahega…puppiya-jhabpiya dena ka bahut shauk hain na…ab isiki chapal se fatke-jhatke kha!
Dk who is scared to death.puts her down. Disha folds her arms and looks at Dk with a "Ok ..I am ready for world war 3" type of an expression…before Disha could say anything..
Dk: (scared) Dekho…dekho tum…….yeh aankhien kya dikha rahi ho …mujhe..….mein.......mein tumse nahi darta….
Disha, without saying anything walks towards him
Dk: ( backing up) dekho tum…dekho…mein kya karta….ab..meine kuch …meine kuch nahi kiya…(oh really)
Dk: ( scared…backing up) aaa…woh…mein……tum…woh…
Disha: Ab kyun itna hitch kitcha rahe ho…bahar to bahut kuch keh rahe the…..(walking towards him) Votti jeeee….(dk backs up) bunty shunty….(walks towards him and he backs up)…( sharmaate hue) aur who jo aaane wala hain
Dk bumps into the side of the bed…so he can't back up anymore…She stands right in fromt of him and looks at him in the eye with a "I am gonna kill u" type of an expression..
Dk: (who can hardly talk) dekho….woh sab kehna zarori tha…
Disha: (screaming on top of her lungs) Zarori! Kya zarurat thi yeh kehne ki mein tumhari biwi hoon??!!
Dk: woh…mein ……tum…meri..
Disha: (screams) Kya??
Dk: (quickly) who tum meri goud mein thi isliyeh.!
Disha: (screaming) ha to kuch aur bhi keh sakte the!....yeh kehna ki kya zarurat thi ke mein tumhari biwi hoon!
Dk: ( low, scared tone) ab mein aur kya kehta…yeh thodi keh sakta ke tum meri ma ya daadi ho…
Dk: oh mera matlab…..ke tum meri maa ya daadi jaisi to nahi lakti…isliyeh meine….
Disha: Aur bunty shunty…aur meri pregnancy..yeh sab kehne ki kay zarorat thi.!
Dk: woh to….(sharmaate hue)...ab ..u know
Disha: Haa haa tumhe to impression jamma ne ka bada shauk hain!
Dk: (soft tone)Nahi ..aisa kuch nahi…matlab…accha nahi lagta na
Disha: Accha nahi lagta?
Dk: haa ab...shaadi ho gayi hain...to thode bacche kache bhi to hone chahiyeh na...
Disha: (which only makes her more mad) ha! Aur woh bhi teen-teen bache! God!
Dk: Arre tymhe kaha sabhalne hain...main hoon na....(smiles) waise I am really good with kids!
Disha looks like she is going to kill him right now!
Dk: (feeling stupid) aaa bad joke...
Disha: Very! ( moves really close to him and looks at him in the ey)(dk gets more scared) Teen Baar! Teen baar tumne mujhe kiss kiya!
Dk: (gets a lump in his throat)aaa woh..
Disha:(before he could explain..she grabs his collar) (MAD) Tumhari heemat kaise huye mujhe kiss karne ki! How dare yo...
Just then the lady enters saying "Oye puttar" Disha an Dk both look at her...when disha quickly removes her hands from his collar..
Dk: (who is so happy that someone has come to his rescue) Maa ji..
Lady: Oye puttar, saaaree phar desterbing (sorry for disturning..)
Dk: Arre aap to bilkul perfect timing par aayi ho
Disha gives him one of those looks again.and as usual DK is scared to death
Dk: Oh mera matlab...aap kyun humme disturb karne lagi...(smiles) haina disha?
Disha: (puts her arm through Dk's arm) Woh kya hain na maaji, mujhe mere pati se bahut zaruri kaam hain.....
Dk: (to himself) Pata hain mujhe kya kaam hain...meri dhulai!
Disha: (all fake) Isliyeh aap thodi der ke baad aayengi please....
Lady: Lo karlo gal! Menu to koi problem-shoblem nahi hain...mein phit aati hoon...lekin tu apna IMP pour tent kaam kar lena
Disha: thank you...aur zara jaate jaate..darwaza bhi band ka rdena
Lady leaves...closing the door..leaving teh two alone..so disha could finish her important kaam
Disha removes her arm from Dk's and before Disha could do anything, Dk tuns away...patli gali se....for the sake of his life! Disha runs after him
Disha: (running) mein tumhe nahi chodongi!
Dk: (running around their bed...a ahem...I mean THE bed) Arre meri maa...mujhe maaf kardo! Kiss to kya...aaj ke baad tumhare aas-pass bhi nahi mandraonga!
Disha: (throwing pillows at Dk who is on the other side of the bed) Kuch karne ke layak rahoge tab na!
She climbs on the bed to go to the other side. Dk runs around the bed and goes to disha's old side...she is still throwing pillows at him!
Dk: Tum...(gets hit on the face with a pillow)Aw!
Disah jumps off the bed with a pillow in her hand and starts hitting dk on his chest, face
DK: soreee...galti..galti ho gayi meri maa..
Disha: Kya kaha..? tumhe to mein nahi chodongi! (hits him more)
Disha keeps on hitting him..and screaming at him...when finally Dk lands on the bed...
Disha: (hitting him more and more) Tumne mujhe kiss kiya! Aisi halat bana dongi tumhari ke tum kisi ladki ko kiss na kar pao!
Dk: (suffocated by pillows) Arre aisi baddua mat do!
Disha: Tumhe to mein...(hits him more and more)
Dk: (suffocated by the pillows) Meri maaaa..tumhe to kay mein kisi aur ladki ko kiss nahi karonga........meri maa ko bhi nahi
Disha: (grabs his shirt)
Just then the lady enters saying " oye puttar tera Im pour tent..." wehn her eyes fall on dk and disha
Disha with a"Omg what is she thinking" type of an expresssion quickly looks at dk's unbuttoned shirt..... quickly removes her hands from his collar...
Disha: (still sitting on his chest) Dhekiyeh....aap jaisa soch rahi hain..waisa...waisa kuch nahi...
Lady: ( who looks she will faint any minute) (in terror) meine kuch nahi dekha...(shaking her head in terror) mein to kabhi kuch nahi dekhti...
The lady, who is in a state of denial ..tuns away saying " meine kuch nahi dekha...meine kuch nahi dekha!"
Dk cracks up like crazy.......he is laughing soooooo much that Disha thinks he has turned insane!
Disha:( disgusted) Youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ( in an attempt to grab his collar....ooooooppssssss she falls on top of him!)
Dk stops laughing Dk's both arms are around her waist. Their faces are reallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly close.........Disha doesn't scream..nor does she hit him with a pillow...Dk does not laugh...nor does he tries to flirt with her with one of those "Tum gire hum pe bichli ke khambe ki tarah..khuda ki kasan current kha kar maza aa gaya.." dialogues...He just stares at her....and she stares back at him...he continues looking at her in her kaale, gajraare naina...and she continues looking at hsi chocolate brown, jaan lewa, kaatil, sharaabi aankien....(think u got the point) Nobody says anything...They acnnot hear any sound except each other's breathing since they are sooooo close...Dk cannot see anything but her face in the front...and her hair, which is all over his right cheek/ neck ...They continue looking into each other's eyesssss
When the background music plays....Nisare gaare saare gaare saare..nisare gaare saare gaare saasa......Nisare gaare saare gaare saare..nisare gaare saare gaare saasa...
Yes...the hum aapke hain kaun music...kya karo..meri film ka music director ko bhi meri adat lag gayi hain...copy karne ki aadat..isliyeh please don't blame him!
PS: A romantic song might be coming up soon...so STAY TUNED
Joined: 07 April 2005
awwwww how beautiful! I'm still in awe and of course laughing at DK's haalat Bomby, I love it how you make it sooooo filmy.. too good yaar.......
yeh dil maange more so when should I expect the next scene hehe.. kidding yaar.. keep 'em coming whenever you get a chance.. you already know hum toh aapke writing ke kitne bade fan hain
Joined: 27 December 2004
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