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Tumhari Disha MOVIE! (Page 20)

bkeero IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 24 June 2005 at 11:00am | IP Logged

When are you writing the next scene I can't wait.......


HinaM Groupbie

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Posted: 24 June 2005 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
hi waiting for the next part

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gerat story, plz cont soooooon Clap
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Bkeero, Sumayya,**lil_playa**, people coming in..well thank u guys...a warm welcome to all of uHug

Rest: The next scene will take a whiel..after all dono kamre mein akele hainWink..kuch bhi ho sakta hain..Wink..just joking guys..aisa kuch anhi hoga...sorry guys for making some of you guys wait...but I'll post it as soon a sI can think of something...


Edited by Bombgirl4eva - 24 June 2005 at 3:50pm
Piano1422 IF-Dazzler

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dn't wrry abt anything else except this!!!!j/k
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There are some people who have waited alot for this one..this one is for themEmbarrassed

Scene 15

Disha, with her both arms around Dk,Wink waiting for him to put her down…smiles fakely at himLOL

Dk: ( smiles back) ( to himself) Beta Dk ..tu to gaya…accha khasa impression jamai tha…sab pani mein…..iska bus chale to mujhe bombay ki sadko par nagga ghumaye…LOLLOL

Disha: (all fake) Kya hua ji…mujhe neeche utaro naa…

Dk: (scared to death) neeche?

Disha: Haa…tabhi to mein tumhe pupiya-jhabpiya de sakti hoon na…Wink

Dk: (laughs fakely)  ( to himself) ....isse to sab yaad hain…ab kya kahega…puppiya-jhabpiya dena ka bahut shauk hain na…ab isiki chapal se fatke-jhatke kha!LOL

Dk who is scared to death.puts her down. Disha folds her arms and looks at Dk with a "Ok ..I am ready for world war 3" type of an expressionLOL…before Disha could say anything..

Dk: (scared) Dekho…dekho tum…….yeh aankhien kya dikha rahi ho …mujhe..….mein.......mein tumse nahi darta….LOLLOLLOL

Disha, without saying anything walks towards him

Dk: ( backing up) dekho tum…dekho…mein kya karta….ab..meine kuch …meine kuch nahi kiya…(oh reallyWink)

Disha: (walking towards him) (all fake) arre kya hua….apne votti se itna kyun dar rahe ho?LOLLOL

Dk: ( scared…backing upLOL) aaa…woh…mein……tum…woh…

Disha: Ab kyun itna hitch kitcha rahe ho…bahar to bahut kuch keh rahe the…..(walking towards him) Votti jeeee….(dk backs up) bunty shunty….(walks towards him and he backs up)…( sharmaate hueEmbarrassedEmbarrassed) aur who jo aaane wala hainWinkLOLLOL

Dk bumps into the side of the bed…so he can't back up anymore…She stands right in fromt of him and looks at him in the eye with a "I am gonna kill u" type of an expression..LOL

Dk: (who can hardly talk) dekho….woh sab kehna zarori tha…

Disha: (screaming on top of her lungsLOL) Zarori! Kya zarurat thi yeh kehne ki mein tumhari biwi hoon??!!

Dk: woh…mein ……tum…meri..

Disha: (screams) Kya??

Dk: (quickly) who tum meri goud mein thi isliyeh.!LOL

Disha: (screaming) ha to kuch aur bhi keh sakte the!....yeh kehna ki kya zarurat thi ke mein tumhari biwi hoon!

Dk: ( low, scared tone) ab mein aur kya kehta…yeh thodi keh sakta ke tum meri ma ya daadi ho…LOL

Disha: What????

Dk: oh mera matlab… tum meri maa ya daadi jaisi to nahi lakti…isliyeh meine….

Disha: Aur bunty shunty…aur meri pregnancy..yeh sab kehne ki kay zarorat thi.!

Dk: woh to….(sharmaate hueEmbarrassed)...ab ..u know

Disha: Haa haa tumhe to impression jamma ne ka bada shauk hain!

Dk: (soft tone)Nahi ..aisa kuch nahi…matlab…accha nahi lagta na

Disha: Accha nahi lagta?

Dk: haa ab...shaadi ho gayi thode bacche kache bhi to hone chahiyeh na...LOLLOL

Disha: (which only makes her more madLOL) ha! Aur woh bhi teen-teen bache! GodAngry!

Dk: Arre tymhe kaha sabhalne hain...main hoon na....(smiles) waise I am really good with kids!Wink

Disha looks like she is going to kill him right now!

Dk: (feeling stupid) aaa bad joke...Ouch

Disha: Very!LOL ( moves really close to him and looks at him in the eyWink)(dk gets more scared) Teen Baar! Teen baar tumne mujhe kiss kiya!

Dk: (gets a lump in his throat)aaa woh..

Disha:(before he could explain..she grabs his collar) (MAD) Tumhari heemat kaise huye mujhe kiss karne ki! How dare yo...

Just then the lady enters saying "Oye puttar" Disha an Dk both look at her...when disha quickly removes her hands from his collar..

Dk: (who is so happy that someone has come to his rescueLOLLOL) Maa ji..

Lady: Oye puttar, saaaree phar desterbing LOL(sorry for disturning..)

Dk: Arre aap to bilkul perfect timing par aayi ho

Disha gives him one of those looks againLOLLOL.and as usual DK is scared to deathLOL

Dk: Oh mera matlab...aap kyun humme disturb karne lagi...(smiles) haina disha?Wink

Disha: (puts her arm through Dk's armWink) Woh kya hain na maaji, mujhe mere pati se bahut zaruri kaam hain.Wink....

Dk: (to himself) Pata hain mujhe kya kaam hain...meri dhulai!LOLLOL

Disha: (all fake) Isliyeh aap thodi der ke baad aayengi please....

Lady: Lo karlo gal! Menu to koi problem-shoblem nahi hain...mein phit aati hoon...lekin tu apna IMP pour tent kaam kar lena Wink

Disha: thank you...aur zara jaate jaate..darwaza bhi band ka rdenaWink

Lady leaves...closing the door..leaving teh two disha could finish her important kaamWink

Disha removes her arm from Dk's and before Disha could do anything, Dk tuns away...patli gali se..LOL..for the sake of his life! Disha runs after him

Disha: (running) mein tumhe nahi chodongi!LOL

Dk: (running around their bed...a ahem...I mean THE bedWink) Arre meri maa...mujhe maaf kardo! Kiss to kya...aaj ke baad tumhare aas-pass bhi nahi mandraonga!LOLLOL

Disha: (throwing pillows at DkWink who is on the other side of the bed) Kuch karne ke layak rahoge tab na!LOLLOL

She climbs on the bed to go to the other side. Dk runs around the bed and goes to disha's old side...she is still throwing pillows at him!LOL

Dk: Tum...(gets hit on the face with a pillow)Aw!

Disah jumps off the bed with a pillow in her hand and starts hitting dk on his chest, faceWink

DK: soreee...galti..galti ho gayi meri maa..

Disha: Kya kaha..? tumhe to mein nahi chodongi!LOL (hits him more)

Disha keeps on hitting him..and screaming at him...when finally Dk lands on the bed.Wink..

Disha: (hitting him more and more) Tumne mujhe kiss kiya!  Aisi halat bana dongi tumhari ke tum kisi ladki ko kiss na kar pao!WinkLOLLOL

Dk: (suffocated by pillows) Arre aisi baddua mat do!LOL

Disha: Tumhe to mein...(hits him more and more)

Dk: (suffocated by the pillows) Meri maaaa..tumhe to kay mein kisi aur ladki ko kiss nahi karonga........meri maa ko bhi nahiLOLLOLLOL

Disha: (grabs his shirtWinkWink)

Just then the lady enters saying " oye puttar tera Im pour tent..." wehn her eyes fall on dk and dishaLOLLOL

Disha with a"Omg  what is she thinking" type of an expresssion quickly looks at dk's unbuttoned shirt..... quickly removes her hands from his collar...

Disha: (still sitting on his chest) Dhekiyeh....aap jaisa soch rahi hain..waisa...waisa kuch nahi...

Lady: ( who looks she will faint any minuteLOL) (in terror) meine kuch nahi dekha...(shaking her head in terror) mein to kabhi kuch nahi dekhti...

The lady, who is in a state of denial LOLLOL..tuns away saying " meine kuch nahi dekha...meine kuch nahi dekha!"LOLLOL

Dk cracks up like crazy....LOL...he is laughing soooooo much that Disha thinks he has turned insane!LOLLOL

Disha:( disgusted) Youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu ( in an attempt to grab his collar....ooooooppssssss she falls on top of him!)WinkWinkWink

Dk stops laughingEmbarrassed Dk's both arms are around her waistWink. Their faces are reallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllly close....Embarrassed.....Disha doesn't scream..nor does she hit him with a pillow...Dk does not laugh...nor does he tries to flirt with her with one of those "Tum gire hum pe bichli ke khambe ki tarah..khuda ki kasan current kha kar maza aa gaya.LOLLOLLOL." dialogues...He just stares at herEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed....and she stares back at himEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...he continues looking at her in her kaale, gajraare nainaWink...and she continues looking at hsi chocolate brown, jaan lewa, kaatil, sharaabi aankienEmbarrassed....(think u got the pointWink) Nobody says anything...They acnnot hear any sound except each other's breathing since they are sooooo closeEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...Dk cannot see anything but her face in the front...and her hair, which is all over his right cheek/ neck ...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedThey continue looking into each other's eyesssss

When the background music plays....Nisare gaare saare gaare saare..nisare gaare saare gaare saasa...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...Nisare gaare saare gaare saare..nisare gaare saare gaare saasa...EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Yes...the hum aapke hain kaun music...kya karo..meri film ka music director ko bhi meri adat lag gayi hain...copy karne ki aadatLOLLOL..isliyeh please don't blame him!

PS: A romantic song might be coming up STAY TUNED


Edited by samy74 - 27 June 2005 at 2:45pm
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awwwww how beautiful!  I'm still in awe Embarrassed and of course laughing at DK's haalat LOLLOL  Bomby, I love it how you make it sooooo filmy.. too good yaar.......

yeh dil maange more so when should I expect the next scene Wink hehe.. LOL kidding yaar.. keep 'em coming whenever you get a chance.. you already know hum toh aapke writing ke kitne bade fan hain Wink

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