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Tumhari Disha MOVIE! (Page 17)

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Posted: 21 June 2005 at 2:34pm | IP Logged

great Clap

keep up the good work! can't wait to read the next part

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Posted: 21 June 2005 at 3:07pm | IP Logged

 

i like your movie keep it up waiting for the next part

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Posted: 21 June 2005 at 4:59pm | IP Logged

oye Bomby where's the next part yaar?!  kitte wait karde meri death hee na ho jaaye LOLLOLLOL

too good dear too good ClapClap can't wait for the next scene.. and if I know you at all, I think I know where this is headed.. hehe Wink

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Posted: 21 June 2005 at 6:29pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by lalgulab

oye Bomby where's the next part yaar?!  kitte wait karde meri death hee na ho jaaye LOLLOLLOL

too good dear too good ClapClap can't wait for the next scene.. and if I know you at all, I think I know where this is headed.. hehe Wink

 

LOLLOL Aisa nahin ho ga!!! i will not let tat happen 2 u!!! She should hav updated 2-day!!! she usually dose it every 3 dayz!!!kaha ho tum!!!

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Posted: 22 June 2005 at 3:57pm | IP Logged
Scene 14

Dk and Disha arrive at the door. Disha is still in his strong armsWink..their faces are really closeWink

Disha: Arre mujhe neeche to utaro

Dk: (sad) Kyun?LOL

Disha: ( smiles) What do u mean by kyun? Koi dekhaga to kya sochega?

Dk: Jisse jo sochna hain sochne do..mujhe duniya ki koi fikar nahiWink

Disha: Arre lekin mera par bilkul theek hain...

Dk: Tumhe kaisa pata ke tumhara par theek hain ya nahiLOL...behes mat karo..tum bus knock karo!

Disha: Tum bhi na...bahut ziddi ho!

Dk: Aisa hi hoon meinWink

Disha: ( shakes her head ...to herself) Yeh ladka kabhi nahi sudhrega!Wink

Disha knocks at the door...while Dk is still holding herWink

Dk: I hope humme kamra mil jaaye

Disha: Kamra nahi ....kamrehhhh

DK: haa haa....wahi...LOL

A sardarji opens the door

Sardarji: Oye ki gal hain? Ki chahiyeh tenu? ( what is it...what is it that u want)

Dk: Oye paaji, menu pehchana nahi...oye mein Dk jiLOL

Sardagi: Dk? Arre kaun Dk? Mein to koi dk-pk ko nahi pehchanda...

Dk: Oye paaji, mein aapke jigri doost da puttar ji

Sardarji: (starts thinking) mera jigri doost....kaun ho sakta hain....(after a while) mera jigri doost to amarjeet hain...tu ussi ka to putaar nahiLOL

Dk: Amarjeet? Haa haa paaji..mein usika puttar hoonLOL

Disha: (to herself)  bundle maarne mein bade expert hoonLOL

Sardarji: Lekin puttar...jaha tak mujhe yaad...amarjeet ka to koi puttar nahi...fir to kaha se aaya?LOL

Dk: Wahi to mein keh raha hoon paaji...agar unka koi puttar nahi ..to fir mein kaha se aaya... LOL(laughs)

Sardarji...who doesnt understand pretends to laughLOLLOL

Just then a lady from the house comes to the door

Lady: Oye kaun hain ji?

Sardarji: Oye woh amarjeet hain na apna amarjeet......yeh usika puttar hain...

Lady: Oye! (to dk) oye sastriyakaal ji sastriyakaal

Dk: Oyeeeee sastriyakaal maajiWink...tusi to bade change lagte hoWink

Lady: Oye chal hatt...menu sab maaloom hain....

The lady looks at disha from top to bottom..or should i say left to rightLOL.....since she is in Dk's armsWink

Dk hits disha with his shoulder Winkand signals disha to say hi to the lady.

Disha: (smilies at lady) amm...sastriyakaal LOL

Lady: Oye puttar, yeh kaun hain?

Dk: (looks at disha then at the lady) (smiles) Meri votti jeeWink ( my wife)


Disha has a "whatttttttttttttttt??? " type of an expresssion LOLLOLLOL

Lady: Oye puttar, teri votti to badi soni kudi hainWink (son, your wife is really beautiful)

Dk: (smiles) Oye aaho jeeWink (yes, ur right) (he winks at disha and gives a quick kiss on her cheekWink)

disha eyes pop outLOL....she looks like she is going to explodeLOLLOL

Lady: (gigles) Bada sharaarti munda hainWink Dekho to kaise puppiya-jhabpiya de raha hainWink ( he is a naughty boy..look how he is giving kisses-shisses )Wink

Dk: Oye ki karyieh maajiWink...meri votti hain hi aisiWink (kisses disah on the same cheek again)

Disha looks like she is gonna blow up right now...LOL..gusse se uska chehra bilkool laal ho gaya hain..lagte hain agle scene mein Dk ka gaaal laal ho jaayega..lipstick se nahi lekin kiski sandal ki maar seLOLLOL

Lady: Dekha, kitna sona de pyaara munda hain, (slaps the sardarji on his chest) Oye, kuch sikh!LOLLOL

Sardarji: Oye tenu to saare munde sone lagte hain...siwaaii mereLOLLOL

While the two are arguing....Disha is looking at them and smiling...while dk is looking at her and smilingEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...teh couple keep arguing...and disha enjoys their fight...while dk enjoys herWink..he keeps staring at her...he is mesmerized by her beauty....when all of a sudden Dk gives a cute, quick, passionate kiss on her cheek..Embarrassed...Disha quickly turns her face towards him and looks at him with a " how dare u " type of an expression...she looks like she is going to shoot him right nowLOLLOL..but instaead just hits his chest with her elbowWink

Dk: Aw!LOLLOL

The sardarji and his votti stop fighting!

Lady: Oye kya hua puttar?

Dk: Oh...kuch nahi!

Lady: Puttar, menu ek gal dus...tu apni votti ko neeche kyun nahi utar deta...

Dk: (looks at disha then at teh lady) (helplesConfused) Nahi utar sakta naaConfused...

Lady: ( smiles naughtily) Oye Kyun?WinkWinkWink

Dk: woh...woh...Doctor ne mana kiya hain...

Lady: Hai Hai! Doctor ne mana kida...Koi problem -shoblem hai ki?LOL

Dk: Oh na maaji...mein paapa banne wala hoon...Wink

Disha is about to faint...LOL...but somehow she manages to control...LOLLOL

Sardarji: Oye mubaraka ho mubarakaWink

Dk: (smiles) Oye thank u ji thank u Wink

Lady: Oye! pehla baccha?EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Dk: Oh na maajiWink

Sardarji: Oye phirrr....doosra?EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Dk: Oh na ji na paajiWinkWink..

Disha who looks she is gonna die handling sooo many kids...LOLLOLLOL

Dk: Oye teesra jeeWink ( winks at disha) Oye kyun votti jiWink

Disha who looks like she is gonna hand him ulta on a tree...LOLLOL..smiles fakely at DkLOL

Lady: Oye puttar , tere bacche kaha hain?

Dk: Bunty-shunty, dono ghar pe hain.LOLLOL..oh jee kya hain..humari gadddi kharaab ho gayi...aut raat bitaane ke liyeh jagaa nahi hain...isliyeh hum yaha...

Lady: Oye puttar tu fikar na kar...yeh tera hi to ghar hain...chal mere naal aa...

Dk: (smiling) Oh thank u jee...thank u

Dk and disha enter the house...dk still carrying herWink

Lady: Oye puttar uppar ja...phir uppar se daaye mud!... wahi tera kamra hainWink(son go up and take a left...thats your room)....

Dk: (who is in a good moodWink) Oh thank u jee thank u

Lady: Mention not jee...mention notLOLLOL

Dk and disha walk up the stairs...disha, still dk ki bahoo meinWink

Lady: ( screams from the living room) Oye puttar tenu kisi cheez di zarorat ho..to menu batana..humara kamra bagal wich hi hain!

Disha: ( yells to the lady) Oh na maaji...humme kisi cheez ki zarorat nahi hogi...bunty de pappa hain na?LOL (to dk) Kyun ji?LOL

She smiles fakely at him...and he understand that he is in big troubleLOLLOL

They reach the room...Dk closes the door with his backWink...and takes two steps

Disha: ( puts both of her arms around his neckWink) (sharmaate hueWink)A ji ..O ji...(dk is shocked) Bunty -shunty de pappaa....(smiles fakely) Zara menu neechu to utaro!LOL

Dk: ( to himself) Gaya kaam se!LOL

To dk ka kya harsh hota hain....Dk ka chehra disha ki lipstcik se laal hota hain ya...disha ki sandal se...LOLLOLLOL.wait for my next sceneLOL

PS: Mere ya mere parents ka door door se punjab se koi lene dena nahi..isliyeh please excuse my poor punjabi...I am surprised i actually know sooo much punjabi!LOLLOL

BOMBY



Edited by Bombgirl4eva - 23 June 2005 at 8:48pm
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Posted: 22 June 2005 at 4:46pm | IP Logged

bomby's gr8 story,Clap

it was so funnyLOL

totally punjabi styleTongueEmbarrassed

Dk toh gaya gi

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Posted: 22 June 2005 at 5:15pm | IP Logged

Lol Bomby what more can I say ur punjabi is turning excellent by the day!

Lady: (gigles) Bada sharaarti munda hainWink Dekho to kaise puppiya-jhabpiya de raha hainWink ( he is a naughty boy..look how he is giving kisses-shisses )Wink

lol and ur dialogues are even more funny bunty shunty!! I must say u have a really good imagnative mind Please write soon can't wait to see what happens to bunty shanti's dad does he actually get beaten up by chpal poor guy I wouldn't mind helping him out!

SRKfever Senior Member
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Posted: 22 June 2005 at 5:54pm | IP Logged

Your Punjabi is superb no need to worry

LOLI can't stop laughingLOL

thank you ssssoooooooooo much for updating

thanxEmbarrassed

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