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Tumhari Disha MOVIE! (Page 15)

NEHA*S_JANO_JAI IF-Dazzler
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Posted: 17 June 2005 at 12:08pm | IP Logged
bomby it is realy goooooood movie/story plzzzz contClap

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Posted: 17 June 2005 at 4:01pm | IP Logged
thank u guys...I'll continue with my crazy dialogues thenLOLLOL...bTW...will be adding sanya soon..dony worry..no rona thona...sirf aur dhamaalWink

bomby!
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Posted: 17 June 2005 at 4:05pm | IP Logged

wow this is so cool plz do continue right away

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Posted: 17 June 2005 at 6:16pm | IP Logged

awsome awsome and awsome    once again     what can I say

continue soon pleazeEmbarrassed

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Posted: 17 June 2005 at 7:13pm | IP Logged

Awesome!!Clap pls continue and don't make this movie rona dhona!!!Cry All the dialogues r fab!!LOL

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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 3:23am | IP Logged

The story Is great I like the bit when you said Dhobi ka khutta nah ghar ka nah ghat kaiLOL the story is gr8 bomby! keep it up and plz cont soon!!

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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 11:16am | IP Logged

hey bomby

so when r u going to post the next partWink

love KPSmile

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Posted: 19 June 2005 at 12:17pm | IP Logged

Scene 13

Dk and Disha are walking on the road…They have covered about 2 miles…

Disha: (exausted) Bus…mein aur ...mein aur nahi chal sakti..

Dk: To kya karu..tumhe utha kar le jao? Wink

Disha: bakwaas mat karo...ek to tumhari gaadi bhi naa..

Dk: Ab gas khatam ho gaya…to gaadi ko kyun kos rahi hoo?

Disha: Ha gaadi ki koi galti nahi thi…..galdi to tumhari thi...itni der se hum car mein the...aisa nahi ek baar check karu ke gas hain ya nahi....LOL

Dk: Oh helllo...car me mein akela tha kya? Tum bhi to thi na...tum nahi dekh sakti thi...

Disha: mein kyun dekhu? gaadi mein chala rahi thi ya tum!

Dk: (jealous) Ha ha..tum kyun dekhogi...us diamond ring wale se fursat mile to t.....LOL

Disha: excuse me...tum mere boyfriend ko beech mein mat lao..uski koi galti nahi hain....

Dk: (jealous and mad ) ha ha...saari galti to meri hi hain na?

Disha: Aur nahi to kya...khud to style maarne mein itne busy the.LOL.aur mujh par..(dk cuts her off)

Dk: Accha to mein style maar raha tha..?aur tum..tum to kuch......

Disha: Bus...mujhe tumse aur koi behes nahi karni

Dk:(whining) Ha ha..mujhe to behes karne ka bahut shauk hain na

Disha: Apni bakwaas band karo..meine keh diya mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni

Dk: Mujhe kaha tumse baat karni hain!

Disha: Fine

Dk: Fine! (makes a face)LOL

They are both walking quietly for once! It has been 5 minutes …dono chu bhi nahi kar rahe…when suddenly disha trips on her own duppata.. ..and she falls down..

Dk: (bends down , holds her left arm and tries to lift her up) Disha..tum theek to ho na..?

Disha: (trying to get  up) Aaaw..mera pair (leg)

Dk: (half sitting on the ground)Kya hua?

Disha: (half sitting) (in pain) lagta hain mooch aa gayi hain…

Dk: Dekh kar chalna chahiyeh than a…oh god….ab chalo ( puts her left arm around his neck and holds her by her waist…)Wink

Disha : ( who is finally standing) ouch…

Dk: tum chal to paongi na?…ya mein tumhe…Wink

Disha: Nahi mein theek hoon. (she tries to take a step) Aw!

Dk: (worried) arre ..sambhal kar…tum rehne do..tumse nahi hoga…main hoon na…chalo..

He was about to pick her up when

Disha: (still angry)Nahi! Tumhe takleef karne Mein theek ho…(tries to take a step) Ouch!

Dk: (with a "Enough!" type of an expression..picks her up without saying anythingWink…her one arm is already around his neckWink..the second one isn't )

Disha: (ziddi) Meine kaha na mein theek hoo….mujhe neeche utaro!

Dk: (no response)LOL

Disha: (loosing her temper..almost screams) Meine kaha na muj… (dk cuts her off)

Dk: (loud, scary voice) Chup! Bahut ho gaya tumhara natak…jab dekho apni manmaani…(acting like disha) nahi mein theek hoo…My foot theek ho!....ek baar fracture ho jaata to pata chalta tumhe…chup chap bethi raho!…(shows her his badi badi aankhien)LOL

Disha who is scared to death…shuts up…LOLwhile Dk walks angrily, carrying disha of course...Wink

After 5 minutes...

Disha: amm woh mien...

Dk: Chup raho!LOL

Disha: (hurt, sad, cute expression...looks down)Ouch

DK:(touched) accha bolo..Embarrassed

Disha: (slow, soft, sad tone) Mein to sirf sorry bolne wali thi..

Dk: (smiless) It's ok..Embarrassed

Disha: ( worried) tum thak to nahi gaye?LOL

Dk: (smiling.LOL.shakes hsi head) Nahi to

Disha: R U sure?

Dk: Oh ya...don't worry..I gotch uWink

Disha: Waise mein...mein kuch zyada hi bhari hoon kya?

Dk: (laughs) Bhari? (laughs again)LOLLOLLOL

Disha: Aree..usme hasne ki kya baat...agar mein bhari hoon to mujhe neeche utar to...mera mazak udane ki koi zarorat nahi hain

Dk: (smiing) Arre...tumhe kisna kaha ke tum bhari hoon?

Disha: Arre tumhi ne to kaha tha ke mein moti hoon

DK: (laughs) bhai meine aisa kab kaha?LOL

Disha:(complaining) Kyun tumhi ne to kaha tha..ke mein kaunse chaki ka aata khati hoon...LOLLOL

DK: Accha wohhhhhhhhh

Disha: Yeh woh-woh kya kar rahe ho..kaha tha ke nahi?

Dk: ha lekin...

Disha: Kaha tha ke nahi!?!?!

Dk: ha ha..meri maa kaha tha..

Disha: Bus..to utaro mujhe!

Dk: Aur mein na utaru to?Wink

Disha: Kya matlab?

Dk: Matlab yeh  tum bilkool moti nahi ho!

Disha: (smiles) Such?

Dk: Ha...tum kis angle se moti lagti hoon?

Disha: Pakka?..fir yeh mat kehna ke meri peet dukh rahi hain..jaise tumne pehle kaha thaLOL

Dk: (laughs) Nahi kahonga..mein to mazak kar raha tha...aur agar tum moti hoti to bhi koi problem nahi Wink

Disha: Kyun? Tumhe ladkiyoh ko uthane ki adat ho gayi hain kya?LOL

Dk: (laughs) Bhai ...ab mein itna lucky thodi na hoonWink

Disha: (disgusted) Sab mard...sab mard ek jaise hote hai..ek number ke hypocrites!LOLLOL

DK: To sab mard mein tumhara boyfriend bhi shamil hain na?Wink

Disha: Ofcourse not!...woh tum sab mardo ki tarah nahi hain

Dk: Matlab? Woh ....normal hi hain na?LOL

Disha: What ! Jaise tum soch rahe ho..waisa kuch nahi hain...woh normal hi hain

Dk: To fir theek hain..warna mein to dar gaya tha (laughs)

Disha: very funny! Thank god tumhari koi girlfrien nahi hain..

Dk: Tumse kisna kaha ke meri girlfriend nahi hain?Wink

Disha: Kya? U must be kidding...tumhare saath kaun apna time-waste karenga...aur waise bhi jo ladki tumse pyaar karegi uska deemak check karana padegaLOL

Dk: ha ha ha...very funny...meri girlfriend ki to baat hi mat karo....

Disha: Kyun ? Badi miss world hain kya? (makes  a face)

Dk: ( to himself) jal rahi hain..LOLLOL..ladki jali matlab pattiWink...ab to aur jalana hi padega

Dk: Arre miss world to uske saamne kuch bhi nahi! Woh to kisi herione ko bhi peeche chod de...mast slim and trim hainWink

Disha: (jealous)Usme kaunsi badi baat hain...aaj kal sab ladkiya slim and trim hi to hoti hain..(refering to herselfWink)

Dk: ha lekin sab uski tarah khoobsurat thodi na hoti hain...

Disha: (who is burning with jealously just listens to him)LOL

DK: Uski badi badi aankhien..aur uski zulfe....too sexy..just too sex( when disha cuts him)

Disha: Baal to sabhi ke hote hian...usme kaunsi badi baat hain...!LOL

Dk:(in his own dream world)  thirty-six ....-twenty four...thirty..

Disha: bus bus...mujhe aur nahi sunna.LOL.waise bhi kisi ladki ke saamne kisi aur ladki ki taareef nahi karni chahiyeh.Wink..its bad manners

Dk: (naughtily smiles) Kyun ? Tumne jalan ho rahi hainWink?

Disha: Mujhe kyun jalan hone lagi? Tumhari girlfriend se mein kyun jalu?(make a face) mein to apne boyfriend ke saath bahut khush hu!

Dk: Yeh tumhara boyfriend kyun baar baar beechme kabab mein haddi ki tarah aa jata hainAngry?LOL

Disha: Kyun? Agar tum apni girlfriend ke baarme baat kar sakte ho...to mein apne botfriend ke maare mein baat nahi kar sakti kya?..

Dk: (makes a faceAngry)

Disha: waise woh to lakho mein nahi carodo mein ek hain...pata hain woh 6 feet tall hain..Wink

Dk:(jealous) Itne lambe ladke ka kya faida!

Disha: Oh shut up!..ha to mein kaha thi...ha...to woh lamba hi nahi itna handome..itna hansome hain..itna hansome ke kya kaho..LOL.such mein bahut lucky ho jo mujhe aisa tall, dark, hansome ladka mila hain...Wink

Dk: (to himself) Is lambu ko dekh na badega!

Disha: Arre kya soch rahe ho....kahi tum to jealuoussssss

Dk: (jealous)Mein aur jealous? what rubbish...Dk seghal kabhi kisise nahi jalta!

Disha: accha?Wink

Dk: Aur nahi to kya! waise loog mujhse kaafi jealous hote hain...mein itna hot aur sexy jo hoWink

Disha: (laughs) Tumhe kisne keh dia ke tum...(cracks up again)

Dk: ha, ha hus lo! Lekin tum nahi jaanti ladkiya to din-raat mere peeche padi rehti hain...waise mein bachpan se hi aisa hu

Disha: (laughs)accha?Wink

Dk: (making up a story) Ha..mujhe yaad hain..ek baar maa ne mujhe sherwani pehna di thi..tab mein shayad 7-8 ka tha...aur ladkiya kya bhagi mere peeche..ke mujhe to apne kamre mein chup ke rehna pada

Disha: (who knows that he is bluffing)accha?Wink

Dk: Tum yeh baar-baar accha accha kyun keh rahi hoon...nahi maan na hain to mat maano...mujhe kya! Waise ...mera aaj bhi jawaab nahi...

Disha: wok kaise?Wink

Dk: aaj bhi ...agar mein ek baar bhi muskurao...to lakho khoobsurat ladkiya behosh ho jaayegiWink

Disha: Accha..(puts her hair behinf her ear) .lekin mujhe to aisa kuch nazar nahi aata...Wink

Dk: Zaahir hain...kyunki mein sirf Khoobsurat ladkiyo ki baat kar raha tha!LOL

Disha: Kya? (grabs his collar with both hands) Youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu

Dk: (trying to save himself) Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry...

She starts to hit him on his chestWink

Dk: (who is enjoyingWink) arre...mein to mazaak...(she hits him more)mein to mazak kar raha tha..(hits hi more) arre..sorrry...i am sorry

Disha removes her hands from his collar and looks ahead

Dk: ( to himself) are paap re ..lagta hain tawa fir se garam ho gaya..LOL

They don't talk for a while...disha looks ahead...while Dk is looking at herEmbarrassedEmbarrassed..after a while

Disha: (faces him) oh god..ab to andhera bhi ho gaya hain...hum shaadi par  kab pohochenge

Dk: Don't worry..unke bacche hone se pehle to pohuch hi jaayengeLOL

Disha: Very funny...lekin hum ab kya karenge

Dk: Humme aaj ki raat kahi gusarani hogi...fir kal subha hum goa pohochenge...

Disha: Ha lekin kaha?

Dk: Mere ghar mein! Arrre pagal ho gayi ho kya..mujhe kya pata!

Disha: Accha theek hai na ..tum  itne excite kyun ho jaate hoLOL

They walk quietly for 2 minutes...when they see a little house

Disha: Arre woh dekho...(points at teh house)

Dk: Chale?Wink

Disha: (smiles)Chalo!

bomby!Big smile

Edited by Bombgirl4eva - 20 June 2005 at 4:00pm

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