Joined: 22 March 2005
Quote:Dk: ( who's scared to death ..shut ups..and concentrates on his driving)
(to himself) Paap re Paap...jaan bachi to lakho paaye.....yeh to meri maa nikli...beta Dk chup chaap beth warna yeh garam tava to tera kachumbar bana degi!
Poor DK all I can say Bomby ur story is excellent plz continue soon I didn't know Disha had so much attitude don't want Dk to be turned into a Kachumber do we?
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Disha..ghusse mein...aur Dk ..Disha ke darr se...has been driving quietly for 15 minutes..
Disha: (feeling guilty)( to herself) Shayad mein kuch zyaada hi bol gayi...bechara..kaise chup betha hain....pata nahi kya soch raha hoga mere baare mein..
Dk: ( concentrating on his driving) (to himself) Paap re paap..lagta hain ab to sorry bolna hi padega (looks at disha and smiles fakely)
Disha: (smiles back..fakely) (to herself) To tum sorry bolo na….galdi tumhari thi....
Dk: (to himself) Ek to galdi khud karti hoon aur fir mujhe sorry bolne ko kehti hoon..mein kyun sorry bolo..tumhe bolna hian to bolo! (makes a face and continues looking ahead)
Disha: (lookking at him...to herself) Ha Ha..tum kyun sorry bologe...sorry bolne se tumhari izzat ghat jaayegi na!( makes a face and continues looking out of the window..with her arms folded..)
Dk: (to himself) aaa..not again...
he clears his throat...no response from disha
Dk: (hesitant)...aamm..I am...I am sorry...
Disha: (turns her face and looks at him)
Dk: I am sorry woh mein kuch zyaada hi bol gaya..mujhe aap ke baare mein aisa nahi kehna chahiyeh tha...mein to sirf mazaak kar raha tha..I am really sorry...
Disha: (smiles) Kabhi kabhi insaan ko pehchaane mein galdi hoo jaati hain...aap waise nahi hain..jaise meine socho tha...
Dk: (smiling..getting back to his original self) Accha? To kaisa hoon mein?
Disha: (laughs) Tum itne bade flirt nahi hoo.....jitne ke dhikte...
Dk: (smiling)…..(to himself) not bad
Disha: Usse bhi bade flirt ho!
Dk: (surprised yet smiling) Kyaa?
Disha: (laughs) Ab mein mazaak kar rahi thi...actually ..I am sorry...woh mein aapse kuch zyaada hi rude thi.....woh meine pooja ka khussa ...tum par nikaal diya .......(cute, Guilty expresion) I am sorree
Dk: ( hits the breaks and turns himself towards disha..with his one arm on her seat...and one on the wheel...smiles! ) Don't be ! Aur waise bhi..agar aap jaisi khoobsurat ladki...mujh jaise handsome ladke ko sorry kahegi...to issme humari hi badnaami hain na?
Disha: ( smiling...with her eyebrows raised)(to herself) Handsome??
Dk: (still staring at her...and smiling) Oh! Waise yeh ring aapne kaha se li? ( grabs her hand) (looks at the ring) wow..(looks at her)...bahut hi khoobsurat hain
Disha: (smiling) (to herself) Flirt karna to koi tumse seekhe...
Dk: (plays around with her hand) Yeh asli heero ki hain ya...
Disha: (takes her hand away from his) (smiles at Dk) Ha...Aslee heero ki hain...pure diamonds..
Dk: Ho hi nahi sakta! Dekhu to..(grabs her hand again and brings it closer to his face) (carresing her ring/hand) Haaa...aslee heero ki hain..
Disha: (to herself) isse to mazza chakhana hi hoga
Disha: (lies) (smiles..sharmate hue) Ofcourrse, mere boyfriend ne jo mujhe di hain!
Dk:( eyes poped out.) kya?? Tumhara....(hesitanat) tumhara..tumhara boyfriend?
Disha: Haaaa...mera boyfrined..( takes her hand away)
Dk:(thinking)...iska to boyfriend bhi hain...yeh jaisi thikdi hain..waise hain nahi...bahut pohochi hui cheez nikli yeh to
Disha: (smiling to herself) Phatti iski!...Ho gayi na bolti band!
Disha: Aare kya soch rahe ho tum?
Dk: (dumbfolded) Huh? (sad expression) Kuch nahi...
Disha: To fir gaddi chaloa na...
Dk: Ha? Ha..ha
Dk gets back into his original seating position..both hands on the wheel..and starts drving...
Dk: (to himself) (almost whining nad crying)Kya
socha tha meine...aur kya ho gaya...ke humare 20 baache honge...usme se
10 ladkiya...aur 10 ladke...10 tum par jaayege..aur 10 mujh par...unhe
kaunsi school mein daalna hain..woh bhi soch liya tha...ma humare
baccho ko sambhalti...aur hum dono..long drives par jaate...us saale
diamond ring walene to saare sapno..saare umeedo par paani fer
diya...kabhi mil jaayege..to usse to jhad par ulta
ladkakar...patak patak kar dhounga...
Disha clears her throat this time
Disha:(pretending to be all nice) A ahem....kya hua....tum itne chup kyun ho?
Dk: (who looks like dhobi ka kutta..na ghar ka..na ghat ka) (shakes his head helplessly) Kuch nahi..
Disha: (jalle mein namak )(pretending to be all concerned) Lekin tumhare chehra ka rang kyun itna utra hua hain...
DK:( to himself) Tumhare us diamond ring wale ke waje se!
Dk: Maaaaaa....mujhe meri maa ki bahut yaad rahi hain...pehli baar unse door gaya hoon na...isliyeh...
Disha: (to herself) (makes a face) Apni kisi girlfriend ki yaad aa rahi hogi!.
Just then teh car starts to totter..and it stops...
Disha: Kya hua?
Dk puts the keys in the ignition again..but teh car only makes a sound..
Dk: Yeh car kyun nahi chal rahi
hain?..(tries again...when his eyes fall on teh gas thing) gas....!
(happily...turns towards disha) arre gas khatam ho gaya!
Disha gives him a confused look...and the smile escapes his face..
Dk: Oh mera matlab ke...(pretending to be sad) gas khatam ho gaya....
Disha : Oh no...
What happens next...do they ever reach goa?STAY TUNED!
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no guli the 'dhobi ka kutta..na ghar ka..na ghat ka'' is so funny. keep it up bomby's.
p.s. bomby's we both hav da same simiralities, mere paas filmo ke dialogues copy karna ki master's degree hain...
peace out =sweet dreams.
Joined: 05 March 2005
hey great story!! omg itz sooo freakin funny i literally laffed for like 10 minz straight! continue with the story soon!
Joined: 26 March 2005
Joined: 05 March 2005
'kabhi mile to ulta latkaa ke pithunga'!!lol!!!!!!!!!!
sorry if i messed up the dialogue
u r so funny
just love it girl
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