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Tumhari Disha MOVIE! (Page 132)

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 1:41pm | IP Logged
alright!! Yes! cant wait!

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 3:01pm | IP Logged
vyoma wedding going on in ur family it must be fun yaar Big smile
can't wait to read ur fan fic Big smile
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Scene 33

Recap: Wedding day…….Disha starts feeling for DK. Embarrassed   Dk unties most of her knots from her dress . She gets really embarrassed in front of everyone. She goes behind a curtain and tries to tie them back when dk enters and helps her put them back on.Wink While doing so, both of them lose their control and they bang against the pole. They get lost into each other eyes and are about to kiss when……..I stopped the scene LOL

Dk n disha in the same position………Disha with her back against the pole……with dk almost touching disha from the front………WinkDk's one palm on her cheek with the other palm around her waist.………his head in a 45 degree position………their eyes are closed…………lips about to touch………..temperrature increasing…… Wink disha's heart beat increasing………dhak dhak... Embarrassed dhak dhak... Embarrassed...(me n my sound effects LOL )dk's thirst and desperateness increasing......disha melting n melting from dk's magic Embarrassed ........dk getting closer n closer without wasting any time.....he is about to place a kiss when....a string of disha's hair falls from her face.......and onto her lips Wink Dk immediately opens his eyes.........but Disha is 2 mesemerized by dk's magic to even open her eyes......and is anxiously waiting for her kiss..........Dk with a sparkle in his eyes and a small naughty smile slowly and very carefully blows on her lips........and the string of hair moves off her lips
Wink ...........

Dk: (staring with deep passionate eyes moves his lips REAAAAAAAAAAALI close to hers .)......( soft, whispering tone) ......suno..?

Disha: ( Compeletly lost n mezmerized....eyes closed) Hmm?

Dk: ( whispering) ab main chalu?

Disha: ( ..SCHOCKED.immediately opens her eyes.....Surprised/ upset and disgusted) Whaaaaat?! Shocked

Dk: ( BIG naughty smile.....lets go of disha's cheek and waist.......moves a little backwards.....acting "obvious".) Haaaaan......bhay tumhara kaam to hogaya.( referring to da knots)......ab main chalu? Wink

Disha: ( who can hardly belive Dk's words........upset/ mad yet trying to hide her feelings )......(suffering from depression.....low, soft tone........looking downwards).....o..k Ouch

Dk: ( bigger smile) Hmm? Kya kaha?

Disha: ( more depressed dan before....mu utra huwa LOL .....slowly shaking her head...lookin down)...kuch nahi Ouch

Dk: ( looking at disha.....proud smile......to himself) ...It worked kyun?.....ab aayega maza Wink ( looking starigth in her eyes) Itne din tadpaaya mujhe.........ab.........tumhari baari Wink

Dk gives a smile and starts to leave......while disha stays right dere

Disha: ( looking down and taking her anger off on her dupatta...chit-chatting to herself)....Idiot! kanjoos ! khadoos ! Makhi-

Dk: (who heard everything ...quickly turns around)....Kuch kaha tumne? Wink

Disha; ( quickly alarmed.. eyes wide) HUH?....(nervous)...ah ...nahi toh...

Dk: Oh! Mujhe laga maine kuch suna....anyways..(saying this he leaves)

Disha: ( Puffing and ruffing in angerLOL) ( to herself) ......Samajhta kya hain apne aap ko.....Khadoos! Angry......duniya mein sirf wahi ek ladka nahi hain..Angry....( makes a face- when u move ur lips to the left side ) main bhi dekhti hoo .....mujhse kitni der door reh sakta hainAngry....( breaths out HOT air ) PUFF
LOL

Scene switches to the mandap....the pheras are going on.....Dk's friends are anxiously waiting for Dk to return when Dk joins them....about 5-6 of hsi friends sorround him.....almost jumping and excited.....

" saale kamine Patti kya ?" ......"Kya huwa?"…. I love u kaha usne?"...."tumne kaha?".." "phir kya huwa?"   "pupiya jhappiya mili kya?" .....and so on LOL

Dk : ( calm and proud....with his elbows resting on his friends' shoudlers.......rahul on da left...and mohit on the right)……Relax guys! Relax! ( facing rahul) Filhaal to aisa kuch nahi huwa……( facing everyone)lekin bahut jald disha mujhse khud kahegi ke woh mujhse pyaar karti hain……in ladkiyo ka guroor to aasman mein hota hain……pehle unhe –(when rahul cuts his off)

Rahul: Le! Yaha to kuch huwa bhii nahi……aur hum to khamakaam fudak rahe the!

Dk: (pissed) Abbe Tu beth .! aur tu chup beth!Angry.......( rahul shuts up whiel everyone gives their attention to Dk) Haan toh………..ladkiya jo hain………itni asani se fida nahi hoti……….sabse pehle to unka guroor todna padta hain……aur phir apna jaadoo chalakar unhe …….apne kabze mein laana padta hainWink……aur jab who-

Rahul : ( cuts in again) lekin nahi patti toh?

Dk: ( reaali frustrated…….facing him)Abbe gaddhe…….ladkiya patana kisi bhi kharbooj ka kaam nahi hain……..uske liye mere jaisi personality aur guts hoone chahiyeh…Wink….anyway ( more frustrated..) yaar tu beech mein mat bola kar……( facing everyone) haan to main kya keh raha tha……haan to.jab ladkiya tumse pyaar karne lage na……to bhi 100 baar inkaar karegi……( trying to scare his friends) ..Hum mardo ko tadpa –tadpakar aadha kar degi lekin I love u kabhi nahi kahegi! Wink

All: ( scared) To humme kya karna chahiyeh?LOL

Dk: ( moves a couple of his friends in front of him……so he can get a clear view) ( (while walking staright….his friends follow him ) Simple! Dil ki baat zubaan par laane ke liye ek doosri ladki ki zarurat hain ( stops in dat place) (rahuland mohit take their positions.next to him……while rest are behind him)

Rahul: (facing dk…schoked)Doosri ladki?.....woh kisliyeh?

Raj: Shaadi karne ke liye!.....( slaps rahul's back).Duffer…..ladki ko jalana ke liye aur kisliyeh……….kyun doost? Wink

Dk: (turns around to face da rest of the group….they form a liltle circle……..big smile) Exactly! ( puts his one elbow on rahul's shoulder)Yeh jo ladkiyo hain…….kabhi bhi hum mardo ko kisi aur ladki ke saath bardaasht nahi kar sakti…….aur phir who seeeeeeeeeeeedha humare paas aati hain! Wink

Raj: Bhay plan to full proof hain……….lekin kya tumhari waali jalegi? Wink

Dk: (bigger smile) Jalegi bhi aur meri bahoon mein bhi aayegi…….( increasing confidence)……..Bus ek baar kisi doosri ladki ko apni deewani bana diya……..aur phir dekhna……usse itni pupiya-jhapiya doonga ke disha jal kar aadhi hojaayegi……….aur phir…..(naughty smile)………..phir to …meri disha ko mere pass majbooran aana hi padega…………..bus ek baar koi deewani mil jaaye

Raj : ( loud and excited………looking straight above dk's head) Mil gayi

Dk: ( who cannot see the girl)Kaun?

Raj, Ronit, Rishi: ( all at once) Tumhari deewani!

Dk, rahul and mohit all turn around at once to see ……..a FAT, bhes type , maha yucky girl in a Yellow lehenga……dragging her 100 pounds of fat from her kamraAngry……..walking in from da main door……like an elephant would…….yes..its none other than

Dk: ( immediately disgusted) SANYA!
Shocked
All his friends: YES!

Dk: Nahiiiiiiiiiiiiii! LOL

What happens next? Any guesses LOL
Cheers,
Bomby!


Edited by Bombgirl4eva - 24 March 2006 at 7:01pm
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FINALLY!!!!! Clap



and after you cont..... u leave in suspense!!!!!!!!


Anyways.. cont when you can!!!
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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 9:18pm | IP Logged
wow vyoma, that was really really good. Clap Clap Clap after so many days.
where did sanya come from LOL, looking forward for more FF Wink

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Posted: 24 March 2006 at 9:55pm | IP Logged
Finally Bomby!


It was awesome!!!!Embarrassed
Clap
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Posted: 25 March 2006 at 12:08am | IP Logged
after such a long time...but Wow!!!!!!
Waiting for next part Tongue
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wow Bomby...that was awesome!!!!
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