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Tumhari Disha MOVIE! (Page 124)

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Posted: 03 January 2006 at 10:36pm | IP Logged
Yes!! i update everyday!!

but yet i still wait for yours!!!!!!!!!!! Clap

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Posted: 03 January 2006 at 11:28pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Bombgirl4eva


Some more corruption.........on da way LOL



will be waiting!!!

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plz, plz, plz, continue soon!
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please continue soon, or else i have to go back and read all over again to see that the progress of the movie is. LOL LOL
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Scene 32

A long white circular pole in the corner of the living room…………..disha standing with her back against it……….her head down…..smiling……..and playing with her dupatta……..her hair hanging from da right shoulder

A Big Flashhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

DK taking off her waist chain……on da beach………Wink

Another Flashhhhhhhhh

Dk gently putting it on from behindEmbarrassed……..( last scene)

A full, blushing smile comes on disha' s face….and she continues smiling to herself……..thinking about da one and only…….hot n happening…….Dk

Just then Dk……..who has been watching her all along……..comes from da right side……and stands right next to her…….with his arms folded…smiling….his left shoulder touching her right shoulder…….on da other hand…..Disha is too busy dreaming about him to even notice him……..

Dk: ( sparkles in his eyes………proud, naughty eyes) Mere baare mei soch rahi thi? Wink

Disha: ( Alarmed…eyes wide…..face up)HUH …( quickly faces him……scared , nervous tone) ah…….nahi toh…. Embarrassed

Dk: ( bigger smile) Accha to aap yaha……….akeli akeli…...( moves his face closer to hers) .taare gin rahi hain? Wink

Disha gives a big blushing smile……..looks down………and then starts leaving……still smiling…….when dk in his own style…………grabs da edge of her duppataWink………and Disha stops rite dere……not facing him

Dk: ( holdind da duppata tight) Yeh mere sawaal ka jawab nahi hain……..( moving closer to her back side)…..Tumne bataya nahi……..ke tum yaha………(slowly loosens his grip……and da duppata slips off his palm) ( his head above her left neck/shoulder…….not touching it …..naughty smile) Kya kar rahi thi? Wink

Disha: ( feeling uncomfortable….) Main…..ah….

Dk: ( who never misses a chance…..wraps his arms around her waist /stomach from behind……and digs his head near her left neck/shoulder …..eyes closed) hmmmmmmmmm….batao na Wink

Disha: ( to herself….upset) chipku! …bus isse to sirf mooka chahiyeh……..tumhe to Main dekh loongi ! Angry( disha frees herself from his arms and takes a step head….arms folded) Haan! Taare gin rahi thi. LOL

Dk: (….cruel/naughty eyes………to himself) yeh ladki……aise nahi maanegi….( saying this he takes a step forward……so he is standing right behind her)

Dk: Aur ammm…………kal raat bhi tum kuch keh rahi thi.? Wink

Disha: ( shocked/nervous)……ah…main…Confused.( trying to regain some confidence) ….Kyun? Kya keh rahi thi main! Angry

Dk: Yahi ke….. ( moves a little closer…..and carefully gets hold of one of her knots……1 out of 6 is already untied BTW….by dk the great ofcourseLOL) U love me…..(pulls da string…..and da knot comes off…….a evil/proud smile comes to his faceWink)

Disha: ( outta words…..unable to face him and his questions) amm….woh to main…………..( Looking at 2 victories….Dk again slips his right index finger under one of her remaining tied knots…..and slighty pushes his finger out…….when the knot comes off………..bigger smileWink)

Dk: (………eyes fixed on target: fourth knot…….working on it….smiling happily/naughtily)….Tum maan kyun nahi leti…….ke tum mujhse pyaar karti hooWink………( pulls da string……and da fourth one is also clearedLOL)

Disha: ( pretending to be unaware/MAD….quickly turns around……hands on hips….) What rubbish! Tumse kisne kaha ke main tumse pyara karti hoo!?! Angry

Dk: ( smiles) Jo such hain wahi keh raha hoo………….haan…tum mere saamne maanna nahi chahti……to baat alag hain Wink

Disha: (nervous…again out words….) ah…..aisi koi baat nahi hain……( unable to face him….looking down) main to sirf -----Ouch

Dk: ( bends his face….to get a clear view of her face) tum mujhse pyaar karti hoo……….whether u like it or not………… Wink

Disha looks up…….and stares deep down in his eyes……with a " ya ya….u win" type of an expression…………while Dk just smiles proudly ………with a " tum meri hoo….and no1 can change this fact" type of an expression…..

Disha…with a given up/upset expression…….turns around and starts leaving …….with her 4 untied knots…LOL..when…….

Dk: ( calls from behind ) SuniyehWink…..( disha stops rite dere…….our dk walks towards her and whispers in her left ear……smiling) Suno……..zara sambhalkarWink…..( winks)

Disha eyes go wide…….with shock and confusion……while Dk quickly walks away….still smiling……..and Disha is left alone

Disha: ( to herself………confused) Kya matlab?LOL ( Disha shakes her head…..and leaves )

The scene switches to the mandap………the dulha –dulhan….are sitting in da middle….putting stuff in the fire ……..as the pundit sings along…….. " Mangalam bhagwaan Vishnu……mangalam karudat"…..etc etc ……all girls and ladies are on the left side……..while all men and guys are on the right side……Dk is standing with the groom's friends…….all good for nothing fattus……staring at all the girls across…..Just then Disha comes and joins her friends on the left side

Pooja: ( holds Disha's left hand) Kaha reh gayi thi tum……?

Priya: Hum kabse yaha tumhara intezaar kar rahe hain……shaadi to shuru bhi hogayi….

Disha: Main to yahi thi ….aur kaha jaaongi…..

Nisha: Fir bhi itni der kaise hogayi?...

Disha n her friends continue chit-chatting……she explains what happened…..while they listen carefully……at the same time…….Dk and his friends are watching their group…..laughing and cracking jokes…..Disha is talking non-stop when she realises that Dk is right across……she stops gossiping……Dk, with his one arm on raj's shoulder…..and another on someone else's….all relaxed ……winks at Disha Wink

Disha eyes go wide.....while her friends start giggling.......Disha gets pissed at her friends and breaths out heavily……huffff LOL ......She folds her arms ....and starts pretnding as if she is actually watching the wedding LOL ........instead of ignoring her friends, and Dk..... LOL

Dk's naughty eyes are fixed on disha.....noticing her from top to bottom....while Dk's friends are giggling to themselves...... Disha's friends giggle as well........soon almost everyone in the crowd notices Dk staring at nothing but dishaWink.......everyone quietly looks at Dk for a sec......and then at disha..who pretends to concentrate on the wedding.......and then back to Dk.......even the pandit is getiing frustrated ...wondering how come noone is giving him in any attention...... LOL ......

Soon the entire crowd is quietly giggling and laughing to themselves........but dk's eyes are still fixed on Disha...........embarrased and angry disha......shows her big eyes to DK .....in order to warn him......but our Dk gives her a bigger ...naughtier smile......and continues staring Wink

Frustrated Disha.....whispers something in her friend's ear........and starts to leave.....holding her lehenga....ghusse se laal ......she takes a step....when all her friends notice that 4 out of 6 of her knots are untied...

Pooja, Priya n Nisha: ( shocked out of their wits....almost scream ) Disha!LOL ( disha stops)

Just then Dk's friends start gigling/laughing behind him....while Dk smiles naughtily......and continues staring at disha...this time with naughtier eyes

Disha's friends quickly grab her....and put her back in her original place....so no one from the crowd notices her untied blouse.....

Disha: ( who has no idea on whats going on.....frustrated) Kya hain? Main yaha se---

Pooja: ( on disha's left side......almost whsipering) Arre paagal......pecche se sab khulla hain! LOL

Disha: ( unable to hear her) Kya?! zara zoor se bolo...mujhe kuch sunay nahi de raha LOL

Nisha: ( hodlding her left wrist....whispering) Arre idiot...tumhara blouse.....main karti hoo....tum chalo mere saath

Disha: ( who finally gets it....straightens her back) Whaat! Shocked

Just them her eyes fall on teh smiling dk...showing all his teeth...surronded by his friends.....who are cracking up.

Disha.....who is puffing and huffing and what not....turning red yellow , green, blue and all teh colors possible...... LOL gives a EVIL/MAD look to Dk....and quickly leaves from behind....

Pooja: Dishh--- ( Our D lady is outta site)

Our D lady.....speedwalking...yet being very careful.......embaarressed to death.....saves herself from everyone's eyes......and quickly/quietly slips open one of the hanging curtains in the corner.....and hides herself in this safe place.......with her back against a pole.....she looks to teh left of her pole.....to notice....NOONE......and den looks to teh right....to make sure no one comes from da curtain area......

Satisfied........she breaths out......With her hair hanging down her right shoulder, looking downwards....and her arms behind her back.......she starts to tie her free knots....still embarrased.Embarrassed....she ties one of them.....but seems to have a hard time tying the rest of them........she starts getting frustrated.....when she hears a voice .....

Need help Wink

Disha looks up to notice.....the dashing and smashing hero- Dk.........standing right in front of her eyes! Immediately alarmed...Disha backs up...and her back almost bangs into the pole.....her hands on the side

Dk: ( very gently and politely......sloweeeee nods his head once) May I?Embarrassed

Disha: ( surprised from his politeness....looks up and then down again.....soft,low embarrassed tone) ....its ok....main karloongi..Embarrassed.

Dk: ( true gentlemen tone) Jisne yeh khustaaki ki......usse ek mooka bhi nahi milega? EmbarrassedWink

Disha is out of words.....and continues looking down.......embarrased to face him.....when Dk slowee n very gently gets hold of her right palm....

Dk: ( soft, gentle tone) Trust meEmbarrassedWink....( saying this he slowlee n carefully pulls her towards him by her right hand) ....( with all his love /passion and kindness) please Embarrassed

Disha looks up at him....and slowweeee nods her head once.....indicating yes...still a bit nervous.....Dk smiles and gently gets hold of her left palm as well........he slowwee puts her palms on his shoulders....and gently holds her by da hips/waist.........and sloweeeeeeeeeee brings her closer.......WinkEmbarrassed.their eyes fixed on each other........he brings her closer and closer..............him staring with Love n passion........her with nervousness and curiousity Embarrassed

Background Music: tere ishq ne saathiya..............mera haal kya kar diya.......... WinkEmbarrassed

He moves her closer and closer......until his arms are completely wrapped around her waist.......and her arms are around his neck......so he is actually hugging her........... Wink

Dk slowee moves his head towards her left neck/shoulder....and rests it directly on top of it.......Disha gets a bit uncomfortable..Embarrassed...because her head is resting between his neck/shoulder as well.........Dk then moves his right palm sloweeeeeeee up her spinal cord.........Disha...already feeling the jitters....sloweeee closes her eyes..............and starts to get lost in his arms............. Embarrassed

Dk ....also losing his control.......slowee slides his left palm upwards......and starts tying one of her free knots........taking his ownnnnnnnnnnnnnn time LOL .....Disha is melting and melting as he goes deepeer and deeper in her left shoulder/neck............while sliding his left and right palms up.......to reach to the next knot

BM: Ru ru................rurrurururur./....( the maine pyaar kiya music LOL )

Getting lost in her neck/shoulder............Dk ends up drooling over it.........he is sooo lost that he starts untying a knot instead of tying it LOL ......Disha is 2 lost to notice anything..LOL......while drolling, dk ends up carresing and placing quick kisses between her neck/shoulder...Embarrassed...........his eyes turning heavy.......so he decides to close them.......he continues kissing softly.......while disha...feeling the jitters....slowee moves her shoulder......which wakes up Dk for a while.....and he realises his purpose/ goal : tie knots LOL

Dizzy n impatient.....Dk finsihes tying the rest of her knots.....again taking his own time...while digging deepeer in her neck/shoulder.....drooling over it.........Disha is currently residing in some dreamland....... LOL Finally done with the knots...Dk focuses on the kissing..........one .....two ......and another kiss on the neck/shoulder area..Wink...attched, he starts moving disha sloweee towards the pole.......while continously kissing her.......SOFTLY......After a while....Disha's back/ Dk's head almost bang the pole..... LOL

Dk: ( head banged) Aw! LOL

when both of them are alarmed ...and quickly unattach from each other.......with his arms still around her waist.....and her palms still on his shoulders...Embarrassed..they look at each other shocked and emabbarased.........Dk gives a smile........and RED disha quickly takes her palms off his shoulders.Embarrassed...and onto her side......eyelashes down......heartbeats increasing.....dhak dhakEmbarrassedEmbarrassed ....dhak dhak....EmbarrassedEmbarrassed.while Dk with his arms still around her waist.......moves his face closer to hers.........he turns his head 45 degrees to the right.........and gets closer to her lips........eyes closed............Because of the heat in teh atmosphere.......Disha closes her eyes as well....LOL.and blends into the environment LOL ........Dk places his left palm on her cheek.......and slides his palm through her cheek/ hair   ......getting closer to her lips...........n closer......n closer..Embarrassed...when

Ooopz..gotta go LOL

haha.....will our D lady give in....will she confess.......stay tuned for da upcoming scene.....

Aapki pyaari, nyaari aur ek lauti
Bomby Johar Cool

Edited by Bombgirl4eva - 09 January 2006 at 4:04pm
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Posted: 09 January 2006 at 4:22pm | IP Logged
awwwwwww that was so romantic!!!
i got butterlies in my stomach while reading it....
plz plz plz cont soon!!!!!!! Smile Smile Smile
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Fantastic, mindblowing, excellent Clap
thank you so much, Bomby.
It was a real treat.
Eagerly waiting for D's reaction..... Embarrassed Embarrassed

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