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Tumhari Disha MOVIE! (Page 122)

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Arre but please cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 27 December 2005 at 5:56am | IP Logged
Hi Bombgirl,

Welcome back!
Please continue soon!
Hum sab intezaar kar rahe hain.

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yaar...ye kya???

i thought u were going to continue....i even had my popcorn ready!!!!! Wink

yaar...continue soon please!! Big smile
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This one is dedicated to my one n only jaan.......sumayyaEmbarrassed

Scene 31

Next Morning.....around 10 am.......a grand living room at ladkiwala's   farmhouse.......with a long staircase attached in da middle….....……decorated with flowers …around 300-500 people scattered around the room…..…a bunch of young girls chitchatting on the right.....…cute little kids running around in sherwanis ( guys) ..and ghagra cholis( girls) ……3-4 servants walking with trays …… music playing in the background " Sun raja shaadi ladoo moti chur ka…jo khaye pachtaye...jo na khaye pachtaaye" ……LOLthere is hustle and bustle everywhere ……shaadi ka ghar jo tehra…… Wink

Amongst the crowd…………..dk who is in a glittery, BLACK sherwaani with silver duppata…..lookin SMASHING and DASHING and what not!Embarrassed ( need I say more?)LOL…. is standing with his back against a pole…..right next to the huge stairs…….arms folded………desperately waiting for someone to come down the stairs………. Wink

Dk: ( eager and desperate…..to himself……shaking his leg) …..yeh ladkiya tayyar hone mei itna waqt kyun lagati hain? ……..common common……..( quickly looks at the stairs) ab aur kitni der?

Just then Dk's friends including the groom join in…….Rohit ( groom) slaps his palm on Dk's left shoulder…..

Rohit: ( teasing ) Kya baat hain bhay…….Shaadi to meri ho rahi hain…..to phir…..yeh tension mei kyun ho beta? ( winks) Wink

Dk's friends crack up

Dk: ( upset…throws his palm off his shoulder) very funny! Yaha meri haalat kharaab ho rahi hain….aur tum sabko masaak sooch raha hain…? Angry

Raj: ( puts his right arm around dk's shoulder) To kya humne kaha tha ladki ke chakkar mei pado? …aurat ka chakkar doosto….aurat ka chakkar…….acche -acchho ko nahi chodhta ….( shakes head…looking downwards)

Dk: ( grabs his collar) Aye! Bahut hogaya !....Angry.( lets him go…..acting smart) ….Arre tum sab to sirf jalte ho mujhse ……sirf jalte…..college se lekar aaj tak……ladkiya to sirf mujhpar hi marti aa rahi hain…….( Puts his right arm around rohit….left arm around raj) …..tum sab ko to kisine ghaas bhi nahi daali! ( cracks up)……….woh kya haina…..ke ladkiya sirf mujh jaise hot and happening ladko ke picche hi padti hain …( facing raj) ….tum jaise ghadho ko to rakhi bhi naa bhande! LOL

Raj: ( ghusse se laal) Haan…. to hum anardi…..aur tum khiladi? LOL

Dk: ( proud) Exactly….hum to hain hi khiladi! Wink

Rohit: ( taane maarte hue) Haan haan…. tabhi to tumne itni jaldi disha ko apni deewani bana diya…..kyun bhay? (rohit n raj laugh)

Dk: ( takes off his arms from their shoulders)….haslo ! Aur hasso….kyunki ab who din door nahi hain …jab disha khud meri baahon mei aa giregi! ….Afteerall…..she loves me (proudly fixes his duppata) Wink

Raj: ( shocked )Aisa kaha usne?!

Rohit: ( more shocked) Kab? Shocked

Dk: ( obvious)…. ……ab tak to nahi….lekin bahut jald keh degi….( breaths out…..happily)….huhhhhhhhhh………( starts searching again…….to himself)…..lekin pehle who aaye to sahi….. Angry

Rohit and raj start searching for her as well….Dk immediadely gets mad

Dk: yeh tum dono mera mu kya dekh rahe hoo…..meri heroine aaye…usse pehle yaha se khisaklo……Angry….waise bhi mujhe tum dono ki sadi huye shakal mei koi interest nahi hain AngryLOL

Rohit: ( upset) Wah…ladki kya aagayi…..humari shakal sadi huye hogayi…..yeh silla diya hain tumne humari doosti ka? Angry

Dk: Yaar …tum thodhi der ke liye yaha se ( starts pushing him) jaa nahi sakte Angry

Rohit: arre kammal hain!...Meri shaadi hain aur tum..mujhi ko….( dk cuts him off)

DK: ( pushing both of them) …Yaar please….tumhara lecture baadme sunoonga….( desperately pushing them) .please yaar….is waqt nahi…..meri waali aati hi hoogi LOL

Dk finally pushes them off completely….and he is left alone by da pole. Wink

Dk: ( to himself) Phew! Jaan bachi to lakho paaye….( upset) ….lekin yeh meri waali ab tak aayi kyun nahi? ( looks at the stairs)……miss world haina……end mei entry maaregi LOL…..( looking downwards….shakes head with a hopeless expression)

Just then……..Dk hears the noise of anklets………..chan chan chan…………Dk quickly looks up to notice……………..Disha in a sexy red ghaghra choli dress ( red blouse with a long red skirt thing) …..with 6 knots at the back of her blouseWink……dats it..Wink..hair hanging/blowing...matching earings , necklace and bangles……stomach showing…..no waist chain......wearing anklets…….looking very sexy and pretty………slowly walking down da stairs……latak matak karWink…...when Dk's eyes fall on her…….

Background Music: Soooooooooooniyehhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh…..( LOL..same old music……kya kare…can never come up with anything different…….) LOL

Dk's eyes pop out...he is stunned to see the STUNNING disha walking down the stairs....he continues watching/admiring her without blinking once......as she comes closer...Embarrassed..

Background Music:
Aaaja soniye....aaja soniye.....aaja soniye...aaaja sohniyehhhhhh Wink

Disha comes downstairs....and is now standing right in front of Dk....with her arms folded.....and eyebrows up Wink

Disha: ( naughtiness in her eyes) Kaisi lag rahi hoo main? Wink

Dk continues staring into Disha's eyes.....with PASSION and Fire....without saying anything...AMAZED at her beauty Embarrassed

Disha: ( ....looks down....and then lifts her eyelashes up again......faint smile) Embarrassed

Dk: ( smilessss....and continues staring at her....this time with naughtiness in his eyes) Wink

Disha: ( feeling uncomforatble....to herself) Dekh to aise raha....jaise isne pehle kabhi kisi ladki ko dekha hi naa ho.... LOL

Dk: ( getting naughtier....to himself) ...kya kammal ke ladki hain...( shaking his head).....bhagwaan ne bhi badi fursat se banaya hoga......( breaths in)....hmmm......bus...ek baar yeh mujhe I love you kehde........phir main to..Wink.( stares with more naughty eyes)

Disha: ah...Ji maine kaha....kaisi lag rahi hoo main? Wink

Dk:Tum? ....ahh....mere khayal se... Kuch jamma nahi ...

Disha: ( shocked and sad....looks at her self) Kya matlab? AngryOuch

Dk: ( acting oversmart) Nahi.....matlab theek hain....lekin...( saying this he starts taking a circle around her...examining her from top to bottom)......ah...I donk know ... amm...something missingWink(saying this he gets right behind her....to get a clear view of her 6 knots...or should I say her backWink)

Disha: ( blabering...ghusse se laal) What do u mean? Kya kharaabi hain iss dress main...? Angry

Dk: ( slowly...puts his head on her left shoulder...smiling) Nahi ....kharaabi tumhare dress mei nahi hain......main to sirf ( saying this he slowly slides his left palm around her waist...and rests it in the middle of her bare stomach)....yeh kehna chahta hoo ke....Wink.(saying this he sloweee moves her back closer to his chestEmbarrassed).....tumhe nahi lagta...keeeeeeeee.....Wink

Disha: ( who is 2 upset about da dress situation...to even notice what he is doing) Jo kehna hain ..saaf saaf kaho! Angry

Dk: ( getiing naughtier by the second.....slowee slips his right index finger under one of her 6 knots...and pulls one side of it.....Result: the knot comes off.....) keeeeeee.....mamta kulkarni ki body par......malika sherawat ke kapde pehna diye ho ?LOL ( for dose who dont know...malika sherwaat has a slim n trim figure...while mamta kulkarni....is well...say 40 50 60...yes quite fatLOL)

Disha: ( ghusse se red yellow and orange) WHATTT???????( she quickly turns around ....facing him....fuming with anger....) Tumne mujhe us moti se compare kiya! How dare u! Angry

Dk: Aur nahi to kya....figure dekha hain tumhara....kha khakar moti hoti jaa rahi hoo! ( starts poking her waist) yeh dekho...( disha jumps...and he tickles her againWink) ...yaha se dekho ...kamer hain ya kamra! LOL

Disha: ( who has lost all her patience......fuming with anger!) WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAT? AngryTum!( grabs his collar) ......tum......( looks right in his eyes....didgusted/upset....yet out of words....) tum......tumAngry.........tum ( upset ..gives up....and lets go off his collarOuch)

Dk: ( contnues teasing)Arre kammal hain....genuine aadmi ki to koi value hi nahi is duniya mei! LOL

Disha: ( completely depressed...looks up at him and then looks down with a sad expression) Ouch

Disha....embarassed and sad.....slowee starts to leave with her head down........Ouchwhen dk....very Gently....gets hold of her left palm.Embarrassed......Disha stops walking...and stands right there....still lookin a bit depressed....lookin downwards.....when dk holding her palm gently yet firmly.......slowee walks towards her.....with Love , passion...and little guilty stars shining in his eyes.Embarrassed.....he walks and walks towards her .....disha's back is facing him

Dk stops right behind her back....still holding her left palm....he slides his right hand in his sherwaani's pocket....and takes out the gliterry, silver waist chain.....dat he stole from disha ...last night.Wink......Holding one edge of the waist chain....Dk sloweeeeeeee slips his right palm around the right side of disha's waist.Wink...slowee n gently ....lets go off her left palm....and slips his left palm ...from the left side of her waist........to the middle of her stomach...and gently ties the waist chain...with his hands.......Disha slowee gives a faint smile.Embarrassed...while continously looking downwards.....her hair also hanging downwards......when Dk takes his right hand and slowee slides her hair off her face........off her left shoulder.....and onto her right shoulder......disha turning a bit red....continues looking downwardsEmbarrassed....when

Dk: ( bringing his face closer to her left shoulder.....whispers in her left ear....with all his love and passionEmbarrassed )...Tum is dress mei to kya.....kisi bhi dress mei kitni khoobsurat lagti hoo.....yeh bataane ki zarurat hain mujhe?Wink

Disha: (gives a biggggggg shy smile....removes his palms from her stomach/waist area.........and runs away...smiling..........while dk watches her go...........

Dk: ( smiles..... to himself with all his passion/might and desire) I LOVE YOU DISHA! Tongue

The end!

So what happens to our love birds……will disha confess….what will he do ..to make her confess?...and how will she doit?Winkstay tuned….as I add some more mirch masala ...as usualLOL

Aaapki bomby!

Edited by Bombgirl4eva - 28 December 2005 at 6:17pm
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hmm so u are back with ur mirch masala fiction hmmmmm interesting nice part but plz don't take to long for ur next part plzzzzzzzzzzzzzz Embarrassed
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Posted: 28 December 2005 at 10:15pm | IP Logged
Awesome continuation Bomby!!!


Plz continue soon!!

don't make us wait long!!!!
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Posted: 28 December 2005 at 10:31pm | IP Logged
wow that was a wonderful part
please write soon Wink
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i write 8... and you beat me w/ just writing one!!! Clap


keep up the good job!! and please cont soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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