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Tumhari Disha MOVIE! (Page 112)

~Angel~ Goldie
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Posted: 03 October 2005 at 4:38pm | IP Logged
thankz alot vyoma
everyone r dying now
ur time limit its too long for them to handle
jaldi liko

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Posted: 04 October 2005 at 9:45am | IP Logged
Originally posted by ~Angel~

thankz alot vyoma
everyone r dying now
ur time limit its too long for them to handle
jaldi liko



agree
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Posted: 04 October 2005 at 12:33pm | IP Logged
Please write soon. Smile
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Posted: 04 October 2005 at 8:50pm | IP Logged

bomby.....jaldi karo naa
ab intazaar nahi hota..... Cry
ek tarah se socho to galti tumhari hi hai....na tum itna hot hot scenes banati.....na hi yeh naubat aati.... Wink

nyways...know how tough school can get.......
can't wait for the lovey dovey hot hot hot scenes...heheh Big smile Wink
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write soon bomby!!
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Posted: 06 October 2005 at 1:29am | IP Logged
Sorry sorry sorryy guys....itna lamba intezaar karane ke liye....have been busy with school and SAT Cry

anyway...working on the hOt scene right now....raat ko likhti hu...to zyada Hotness paida kar sakti hu ...between our two D's Wink ....zyada corrupted....ahem.....I mean creativeWink likh sakti hoon....Yeh baat gulabo se acchi aur kaun jaan sakta hain? Wink

Stay Tuned!

Aapki BOMBY! Wink

Edited by Bombgirl4eva - 06 October 2005 at 3:18pm
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Posted: 06 October 2005 at 1:31am | IP Logged
LOL Bomby behna jis ka damak he corrupted ho vo corrupted scenes ke bina kya likh sagta hein LOL LOL Jaldi likho nahi toh hum tumhe kacha chaba jaoongi! LOL

Edited by miss.england02 - 06 October 2005 at 1:34am
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Posted: 09 October 2005 at 12:27am | IP Logged
First of all sorry for the delay....But I am hoping ke yeh intezaar ka phal meetha hi nahi...tekha bhi hooWink

This scene is dedicated to....my one and only partner- CB...and my ultra-cool...gulabiaBig smile

Scene 29

Dk and disha laying on top of each otherWink…..on the sand…..Dk on top…Embarrassed.hilding his face between her left neck/shoulder/wet hair and …disha's arms around his backWink…..holding the back of his shirt TIGHT….…..his arms around and under her bare, wet waist…..covering her completely…..……Embarrassedwith the saaree's pallu on top of their heads….his skull, her front face…their eyes are closed….while drops of water fall from the dark sky……and wet their bodies even more…… Embarrassed

When Dk…....under the pallu…....completely mesmerized by her….losing all his patience….......still with his eyes closed…..starts kissing her left bare, left shoulder DESPERATELY…..Embarrassedonce..twiceEmbarrassed…thrice…so QUICKLY as if he will never get a chance to do it again….Disha….who seems to have "blended in" with the environment….and feeling the pain……the pain of heart……Embarrassedgets jittery…and moves her body a little….Embarrassedstill with her eyes closed….when Dk opens his eyes....….only to notice her left/neck/shoulder/wet hair….He has completely lost his control….he seems like he is drunk…..a completely LOST and mesmerized look…Embarrassed…closes his eyes again….and digs in further and further in her neck/shoulder….EmbarrassedEmbarrassedwhile disha ....…who has no clue on what's going on….......still with her eyes closed….......gets jittery as he digs further and further in her neck/shoulder/hair…..Embarrassed.Dk, still kissing her left shouder/neck IMPATIENTLY…rolls on the sand…attached with Disha…...and .puts disha on top of him this time…Wink…Disha's pallu is now spread out on the sand…in other words, its out of Dk's wayWinkLOL…..…

  Now that she is on top of him…..Dk gets more impatientEmbarrassed…. With his right arm around her waist….he moves his left palm up her back….up her spinal cord…Embarrassed.and places his left hand deep, down under her hair….to slide her wet hair to the other side( the right side)…..and continues kissing her naked, wet left neck.shoulder …..more passionately….and Intimidately……Embarrassed.making sure not to miss any areas …Disha has completely lost herself to him…….She just gives in…Embarrassed.In other words…blends in with the environement….with her palms resting on his naked, strong, wet chest….feeling Dk.'s kisses/caresses …Embarrassedwith her eyes closed……Dk digs in further and further…….the camera zooms in on his face….which is still caressing her neck/shoulder IMPATIENTLY….It zooms all the way to his closed eyes….while he continues kissing/caressing her left neck.shoulder Embarrassed

The dark beach!…………the sun is no longer seen…………….Sexy, romantic music starts playing in the background…. Wink

When Disha in the same, sexy black see thro saree stands up……follwed by dk ( still che khulle buttonLOL)….its no longer raining….but their clothes are still wetEmbarrassed….Dk holding her two wrists with his two fists….pulls her towards him….so her back bangs into his chesEmbarrassedt….Disha quickly moves ahead….when Dk again pulls her towards him….and her back again crashes into his chest…..When Dk slides his arms around her bare, stomach/waist…….so she can no longer moveWink…..and gives her a PASSIONATE kiss on her left neck/shoulder EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Disha: ( given up……rests her neck on his right right…eyes closed ….feeling his kiss) Huhhhhhh…..Jaaaaaaaaaaaaaaneee doonaa EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Dk: ( sliding his arms around her stomach/waist so he is holding her closer, and tighter……moving his head around her neck/shoulder) Aye, paaaaaaaas aaoooooo naa Wink

Disha: ( trying to take his arms off her stomach…..while feeling the jitters) Hoo O O……jaaaaaaaane doo na Embarrassed

Dk: ( holding her palms on her stomach…..getting more Impatient) Aye,…….paaas aaao naaaWink ( digs in her hair/left shouder…..places some more kisses)

Disha: ( feeling the kisses) Chhuo na…… chhuo na …..mujhe chhuo na…Embarrassed.( a kiss on the left shoulder) chhuo na dekho chhuo na …Embarrassed( another kiss near the neck area)…..chhuo naEmbarrassed ( a kiss on the area between neck/shoulder)…….. chhuo naaaaaaaaaaaaaa…. EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Disha starts leaving…when Dk gets hold of her wrists…

Dk: Hoo O O …….( he gets closer to her …).paaaaaas aaaaaaaaaaao naWink( with his right hand ,slides her hair from her left shoulder to the right shoulder….and again attacks her left shouderEmbarrassed…..and again hold her wrists so she doesn't run away )

Disha: ( feeling like a helpless person….trying to get out of his strong fists) Jaaaaa neeee doooo naaa EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Dk: ( getting hyper and Impatient by the secondWinkEmbarrassed) Aao na aao na paas ( slides his right arm around her stomach…..under her saaree's pallu….Wink.)aao na …aao na …..dekho aao naWink ( swings her around …so she is facing him for once……..Bringing her closer to him by her wrists )aao na ……….aao na …………( more closer…so she almost bumps into his chest) aao naaaaaaaaaaaa WinkWinkWink

Disha: ( standing reaaly really close to him…trying to get her wrists out of his wrists) ( makes a sad, sad face) Hmmmmmmm…..Chodho kaliye dekho roo doongi…..jao main tumse nahi ( shaking her head) bolungi…….EmbarrassedEmbarrassed( dk lets go of her wrists….she turns around and starts to leave when Dk gets hold of the edge of her pallu…Embarrassed..)

Dk: (waking towards Disha's back….holding the edge of her pallu…) Maan bhi jao meri baat sanam…..WinkEmbarrassed( lets go off her pallu…..and it falls on the ground…Embarrassed.and holds her palms with his palms…..disha's back resting at his chest) Haatho mei rehne do yeh haath sanam….( starts kissing her shoulder again…EmbarrassedEmbarrassed.this time the right shoulder)

Disha: ( feeling the jittersEmbarrassedEmbarrassed) Chhuo na…… chhuo na …..mujhe chhuo na….Embarrassed( a kiss on the left shoulder) chhuo na dekho chhuo na …EmbarrassedEmbarrassed( another kiss near the neck area)…..chhuo naEmbarrassedEmbarrassed ( a kiss on the area between neck/shoulder)…….. chhuo naaaaaaaaaaaaaa…. EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Dk slowee turns her around and puts his palms through her cheeks/hairEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed….with a mesmerized, impatient look, turns his head 45 degrees to the right…EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassedand moves his head closer to her lips……EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Romantic music continues in the back groundEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed….

He moves his lips closer and closer and closerWinkEmbarrassed…..while both of them collapse downwardsEmbarrassed…..…they are melting and melting…EmbarrassedEmbarrassed..………More romantic music in the backgroundEmbarrassed…..when their lips are about to touch…Embarrassed.when disha quickly gets up and runs awayLOL………That's what happens in our typical hindi movies….whenver the guy tries to kiss the girl…the girl runs away….sharam ke maareEmbarrassed… LOLLOL

A tree! A tree on the beach…! Disha's back resting against it….Dk pops out of nowhere LOL…directly in front of her…… Wink

Dk: (moving closer to herEmbarrassed) Pyaase Hotho ki jo kahani hain…Wink.( his palms holding her palms TIGHT …against the tree…) Paaas aake tumhe sunani hainWink ( again gets closer to her lipsEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed…when Disha moves her head to the left.)

Disha: ( innocent, kiddish expression) Yeh baatein main na ( shaking her head) kar paoongi……EmbarrassedEmbarrassed…( sad, sad expression) Paas na aana…..mar jaaongi…. Embarrassed

Dk: ( still holding her palms against the tree….moves his head closer to hers…EmbarrassedEmbarrassed.) Aao na aoa na…( closer) ao na…dekho aao na..( really close) aao na…aao na EmbarrassedWink

All we can see is the back of dk's skull…turned 45 degrees angle….while the music continues in the background………EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Disha: ( twisting and turning on the sand) Dil jaise karwate batalta hain……Embarrassed.( rolls on the sand….while rolling her pallu comes off) ( she comes to a stop…breathing heavilyEmbarrassed …..her chest moving up and down …..arms spread apart on the sand) Mera to saara tan jalta hain…….. Embarrassed

Dk: ( attacks her from the topEmbarrassed…his plams on hers….his body on top of hers….not touching it by any means) armaan jo dil mei machalte hain ….EmbarrassedWink( puts his arms under her waist and rolls with her…attached…Embarrassed.until she is at the bottom …and him at her right side...)( takes a fisful of sand in his left hand…..and throws it on her bare waist./ stomach…..some of the sand falls down…while some still remains there…) Tan yuhi jalte bhigalte hain….WinkEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.( he slides his left hand on her stomach….to bring her closer….the sand falls off BTW….and pulls her towards himEmbarrassed…..and gets on top of her….his arms under her back….while Disha's arms are restly freely….without any protests…EmbarrassedHe again starts kissing her left shoulderEmbarrassedEmbarrassed)

Disha: ( feeling the jittersEmbarrassed) Chhuo naEmbarrassed…… chhuo na Embarrassed…..mujhe chhuo na…Embarrassed.( a kiss on the left shoulder) chhuo naEmbarrassed ( another one) dekho chhuo na Embarrassed…( another kiss near the neck area of the right shoulder )…..chhuo na ( a kiss on the area between neck/shoulder on the right shouder )…….. chhuo naaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaEmbarrassed….( dk digs further and further going back and forth between left and right shouldersEmbarrassed..)

Disha: ( feeling his jitters..Embarrassed) HunnnnEmbarrassed….huuuuEmbarrassed..huuuuuuu EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Dk: ( digging further and further in her shoulder/hair) HmmWink…huuuuEmbarrassed….hmmmmm Wink

Disha: ( getiing lost…..) huuuuuuuuEmbarrassedEmbarrassed..huuuuu…EmbarrassedEmbarrassedhuuuuuuuu Embarrassed

LOL…not making it up ..its part of the song….! LOL

Just then ………LIGHTNING…. Embarrassed

When Dk open his eyes…..Only to realize that his head is stuck between Disha's left shoulder/necEmbarrassedk…..and all of this was only a dream…ConfusedEverything after the camera zooms into Dk's eyes was a dream…..In reality , it is still raining….and Disha is still on top of himWink….his arms around herEmbarrassed.They have been in this postion for about 5 minutes….a hindi song is 5 minutes long remember? LOLDisha … …is quietly lying on top of him…EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.her head still on his shoulderEmbarrassed……when Dk realises their postion….He realises what he has done…the rolling..and the kissingEmbarrassed….he cannot seem to believe that disha is actually lying peacefully on top of him…EmbarrassedEmbarrassed.His eyes pop out!!!!! Mouth halfway open…. He can't seem to believe his luckEmbarrassed….when…

LIGHTNING….

Disha : (wakes up from her sleepy state and holds his shirt tighterEmbarrassed….with both of her palms…DK is still under shockLOL….when Our D lady suddenly opens her eyes in shock and lifts her head up…so she is facing Dk.)

Disha: ( Startled……her mouth halfway open)HUH! EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Just then a smile escapes Dk's face…Embarrassedhe stares at Dish….with LOVE, PASSSION , MESMERIZATION and DESIRE….EmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed.striking from his chocolate-brown eyes….Disha…heartbeats run faster….dhak dhak EmbarrassedEmbarrasseddhak dhak….. EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Disha; (nervous and scared…..unable to look into his eyesEmbarrassed) Ah…I a…m….Embarrassed.I am so sorry…. Embarrassed

No response from Dk…..he just stares at Disha …who has her wet hair on her right shouder…with FIRE in his eyesEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed….a type of thirst and desire striking from his eyesEmbarrassed……….a deep desire, feeling…..to have Disha… Embarrassed

Disha …getting more nervous….as he directly stares at her…with those lovely pyaar aur ehsaas se bhari aankhienEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Dk: ( with all his love, passion, might, desire, jazbaat, ehsaas, and enthusiasm…..looking STRAIGHT into her eyes) I Love You! Embarrassed

THE END! ... I know I shouldnt have stopped right hereLOL....I can already see poeple running behind me with baseball batsLOL....but kya kare....kahani mei suspence ho....to hi kahani mei maza aata hainWink

And now the Honors

A very very Special thanks to rang....for requesting this minblowing   song!LOLThere are tons of HOT songs that i know....lekin yeh gaana...thodha hatke hain........Wink thanks again rang...Big smile

Also a very special thanks to all of you who have waited sooooo long for this scene..Embarrassed.sorry for the delay guys...Confused

Signing off,

Aapki Bomby!



Edited by Bombgirl4eva - 09 October 2005 at 12:54am

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