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Tumhari Disha MOVIE! (Page 10)

ManishaRox IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 June 2005 at 4:42pm | IP Logged

yup great!!! bomby love the song story it was so romantic

SRKfever Senior Member

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Posted: 07 June 2005 at 10:41pm | IP Logged

wow !     your awsome and I can't wait for the next part 

ssooooo romantic if only it were trueCry 


Bombgirl4eva Goldie

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Posted: 08 June 2005 at 5:18pm | IP Logged
Thanks guysBig smile

Scene 9

Its a huge pool...where people are swimming...naturally! There are lots of chairs around it...the long white ones...where people can lay down  and relax under the sun. Dk is lying on one of those chairs. WinkHe is wearing red shorts and matching red sunglasses to go with it......thats itWink He is listening to his CD- player....with hsi head phones on....the head phones are also red...our hottie always wants to look PERFECTWink u see...His eyes are closed and he is feeling the sun...when suddenly his eyes fall on the swimming pool...he sees a couple in the he closes his eyes again...the song he was listening to comes to an he opens his eyes agian...

This time his eyes fall on a girl who just swung her hair out of the waterl...she is in a RED swimsuit ( 1 piece) ....the girl takes her hair off her faceWink...when we get to see taht the girl is no other than Disha! Dk' eyes pop out...he take soff his sunglasses in a very hero wali adda (that any girl would commit suicideEmbarrassedEmbarrassedEmbarrassed) Just then Dk's headphones sing " SooooooooooooooooooooooooniyehWink" She shakes her face left to right to get teh water out of her walks out of the pool....whiel Dk jsut keeps STARING at her...with a MY MY MY type of an expression... whiel hsi headphone sing....." Soooooooooooooooniyeh" again....She walks and walks out of teh pool....when Dk's headphones sing" Aaja soniyeh...aaja sonieh...aaja soniyeh...aaja soniyeh..."Wink

Disha grabs her towel...which is rite outside the pool...she does not notice Dk with his eyes popped and all....she continues to dry her self....first her hair...then her arms....while Dk jsut keeps staring at her without blinking onceEmbarrassedEmbarrassed...with his headphones singing "Aaja soniyeehhhhhhhhh"...Just then Dk's cell phone rings...He is soo busy staring at her...that he dint even hear his phone ring...He is still in the same postion ..eyes popped out and glasses in hsi hand...with one end of it in his teethEmbarrassed....and smiling naughtilyEmbarrassedEmbarrassed..Just then teh phone rings again...Dk trys to find it...he gets up from the chair...and trys to find it

Dk: ( to himself)Arre ..kaha rakh diya meine...( while he searches for his cell...he looks at her after every other she doenst run away!Wink)...(frustrated) kaha gaya....( he finally finds it underneath the cahir) gaya...(He picks it up...) Ha bolo Rohit!

Rohit: (on teh other line) bhai tum to humme bhool...(dk cuts him off)

Dk: Arre kaha gayi...(looks to his right and left) arre..shit...SHIT SHIT SHIt...

Ronit: kaun gayi?

Dk; (frustrated) mein tumhe baadme phone karta ho...(hangs up and runs to find disha)

He looks fro her everywhere...but doesnt find her anywhere

Dk : (to himself) Shoot !kaha chali gayi....Itna accha mooka tha...!LOL

Just then his cell rings again

Dk: Kya hain? Sab tumhare waje se…Sab tumhari galti hain….I hate u!


Rohit : (on the other side) Lekin hua kya?


Dk: (still complaining) Chali gayi who tumhari waje se!


Rohit: Aare kaun kaha gayi?


Dk: woh..woh..EmbarrassedEmbarrassed


Rohit : (teasing) Kaun?


Dk: ( shy) who kuch nahiEmbarrassed


Rohit: Accha koi ladki ka chakkar hain


Dk: (smiling) Arre nai nai…aisa kuch nahi


Ronit: Accha abhi to keh raha tha…ke I hate u…zaroor meine tumhe disturb kiya hoga..kyun?


DK: Nahi baba..aisa kuch nahi hain…..tu bata…tune phone kaise kiya


Rohit: Oh hello? Is hafte meri shaadi hain….yaad hain ke nahi?


Dk: Oh ofcourse of course…bilkool yaad hain


Rohit: To apna boorya bistra (luggage) bhand kar aaj hi jao yaha


Dk: Kya..aaj ? aur who bhi goa…aana thoda mush..


Rohit: Mujhe kuch nahi sunna…Kya thode dinno ke liyeh tu us ladki ko bhool kar apne yaar ki shaadi mein nahi aa sakta?? Aur wiase bhi kal bachelor's party hain….tumhe to aana hi hoga!


Dk: Ok, ok …mein rakhta hoon…(hangs up)


Dk ; (to himself) Ab bata nahi usse phir kab mulakaat hogi…(saying this he leaves)


What happens at the shaadi? Dk ki mulakat kis se hogi?Wink Wait for my next post!


Tumhari Bomby!




Jaslove IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 08 June 2005 at 5:38pm | IP Logged

dk's gonna meet dishaLOLLOLLOL

continue a.s.a.p

loved ur story.Embarrassed

lucky-moon Goldie

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Posted: 08 June 2005 at 5:44pm | IP Logged
please do continue can't hold my breath plzzzzzzzzzzzz
lalgulab Goldie

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Posted: 08 June 2005 at 6:44pm | IP Logged
arre meri bomby tussi great ho Clap so what song are you gonna have the D's dancing at this wedding now?  tujhe dekh ke dil mera bole ya koyi aur WinkLOL
queen-bee Goldie

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Posted: 08 June 2005 at 7:36pm | IP Logged
Hamari bombi is doing a great job!! Keep it up!

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Posted: 09 June 2005 at 12:25am | IP Logged
you are very good at this plzzz keep it upp and write the next part sooooooonBig smile

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