Joined: 22 March 2005
yup great!!! bomby love the song story it was so romantic
Joined: 07 June 2005
wow ! your awsome and I can't wait for the next part
ssooooo romantic if only it were true
Joined: 12 March 2005
Its a huge pool...where people are swimming...naturally! There are lots of chairs around it...the long white ones...where people can lay down and relax under the sun. Dk is lying on one of those chairs. He is wearing red shorts and matching red sunglasses to go with it......thats it He is listening to his CD- player....with hsi head phones on....the head phones are also red...our hottie always wants to look PERFECT u see...His eyes are closed and he is feeling the sun...when suddenly his eyes fall on the swimming pool...he sees a couple in the pool...so he closes his eyes again...the song he was listening to comes to an end...so he opens his eyes agian...
This time his eyes fall on a girl who just swung her hair out of the waterl...she is in a RED swimsuit ( 1 piece) ....the girl takes her hair off her face...when we get to see taht the girl is no other than Disha! Dk' eyes pop out...he take soff his sunglasses in a very hero wali adda (that any girl would commit suicide) Just then Dk's headphones sing " Sooooooooooooooooooooooooniyeh" She shakes her face left to right to get teh water out of her hair...sh walks out of the pool....whiel Dk jsut keeps STARING at her...with a MY MY MY type of an expression... whiel hsi headphone sing....." Soooooooooooooooniyeh" again....She walks and walks out of teh pool....when Dk's headphones sing" Aaja soniyeh...aaja sonieh...aaja soniyeh...aaja soniyeh..."
Disha grabs her towel...which is rite outside the pool...she does not notice Dk with his eyes popped and all....she continues to dry her self....first her hair...then her arms....while Dk jsut keeps staring at her without blinking once...with his headphones singing "Aaja soniyeehhhhhhhhh"...Just then Dk's cell phone rings...He is soo busy staring at her...that he dint even hear his phone ring...He is still in the same postion ..eyes popped out and glasses in hsi hand...with one end of it in his teeth....and smiling naughtily..Just then teh phone rings again...Dk trys to find it...he gets up from the chair...and trys to find it
Dk: ( to himself)Arre ..kaha rakh diya meine...( while he searches for his cell...he looks at her after every other second..so she doenst run away!)...(frustrated) kaha gaya....( he finally finds it underneath the cahir) Haa..mil gaya...(He picks it up...) Ha bolo Rohit!
Rohit: (on teh other line) bhai tum to humme bhool...(dk cuts him off)
Dk: Arre kaha gayi...(looks to his right and left) arre..shit...SHIT SHIT SHIt...
Ronit: kaun gayi?
Dk; (frustrated) mein tumhe baadme phone karta ho...(hangs up and runs to find disha)
He looks fro her everywhere...but doesnt find her anywhere
Dk : (to himself) Shoot !kaha chali gayi....Itna accha mooka tha...!
Just then his cell rings again
Dk: Kya hain? Sab tumhare waje se…Sab tumhari galti hain….I hate u!
Rohit : (on the other side) Lekin hua kya?
Dk: (still complaining) Chali gayi who tumhari waje se!
Rohit: Aare kaun kaha gayi?
Rohit : (teasing) Kaun?
Dk: ( shy) who kuch nahi
Rohit: Accha bachu..to koi ladki ka chakkar hain
Dk: (smiling) Arre nai nai…aisa kuch nahi
Ronit: Accha abhi to keh raha tha…ke I hate u…zaroor meine tumhe disturb kiya hoga..kyun?
DK: Nahi baba..aisa kuch nahi hain…..tu bata…tune phone kaise kiya
Rohit: Oh hello? Is hafte meri shaadi hain….yaad hain ke nahi?
Dk: Oh ofcourse of course…bilkool yaad hain
Rohit: To apna boorya bistra (luggage) bhand kar aaj hi jao yaha
Dk: Kya..aaj ? aur who bhi goa…aana thoda mush..
Rohit: Mujhe kuch nahi sunna…Kya thode dinno ke liyeh tu us ladki ko bhool kar apne yaar ki shaadi mein nahi aa sakta?? Aur wiase bhi kal bachelor's party hain….tumhe to aana hi hoga!
Dk: Ok, ok …mein rakhta hoon…(hangs up)
Dk ; (to himself) Ab bata nahi usse phir kab mulakaat hogi…(saying this he leaves)
What happens at the shaadi? Dk ki mulakat kis se hogi? Wait for my next post!
Joined: 01 March 2005
dk's gonna meet disha
loved ur story.
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