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Bomby the dialogues are really very good. Keep it up. Waiting for more.
hey bomby
nice story👏
lol!!!!!!!!!!
'kabhi mile to ulta latkaa ke pithunga'!!lol!!!!!!!!!!😆
sorry if i messed up the dialogue
u r so funny😃
just love it girl😳
bye
love KP😊
wow this is so cool plz do continue right away
awsome awsome and awsome once again what can I say
continue soon pleaze😳
Awesome!!👏 pls continue and don't make this movie rona dhona!!!😭 All the dialogues r fab!!😆
The story Is great I like the bit when you said Dhobi ka khutta nah ghar ka nah ghat kai😆 the story is gr8 bomby! keep it up and plz cont soon!!
hey bomby
so when r u going to post the next part😉
love KP😊
Scene 13
Dk and Disha are walking on the road…They have covered about 2 miles…
Disha: (exausted) Bus…mein aur ...mein aur nahi chal sakti..
Dk: To kya karu..tumhe utha kar le jao? 😉
Disha: bakwaas mat karo...ek to tumhari gaadi bhi naa..
Dk: Ab
gas khatam ho gaya…to gaadi ko kyun
kos rahi hoo?
Disha: Ha gaadi ki koi galti nahi thi…..galdi to tumhari thi...itni der se hum
car mein the...aisa nahi ek baar check karu ke gas hain ya nahi....😆
Dk: Oh helllo...car me mein akela tha kya? Tum bhi to thi na...tum nahi
dekh sakti thi...
Disha: mein kyun dekhu? gaadi mein chala rahi thi ya tum!
Dk: (jealous) Ha ha..tum kyun dekhogi...us diamond ring wale se fursat mile to
t.....😆
Disha: excuse me...tum mere boyfriend ko beech mein mat lao..uski koi galti
nahi hain....
Dk: (jealous and mad ) ha ha...saari galti to meri hi hain na?
Disha: Aur nahi to kya...khud to style maarne mein itne busy the.😆.aur mujh
par..(dk cuts her off)
Dk: Accha to mein style maar raha tha..?aur tum..tum to kuch......
Disha: Bus...mujhe tumse aur koi behes nahi karni
Dk:(whining) Ha ha..mujhe to behes karne ka bahut shauk hain na
Disha: Apni bakwaas band karo..meine keh diya mujhe tumse koi baat nahi karni
Dk: Mujhe kaha tumse baat karni hain!
Disha: Fine
Dk: Fine! (makes a face)😆
They are both walking quietly for once! It has been 5 minutes …dono chu bhi nahi kar rahe…when suddenly disha trips on her own duppata.. ..and she falls down..
Dk: (bends down , holds her left arm and tries to lift her up) Disha..tum theek to ho na..?
Disha: (trying to get up) Aaaw..mera pair (leg)
Dk: (half sitting on the ground)Kya hua?
Disha: (half sitting) (in pain) lagta hain mooch aa gayi hain…
Dk: Dekh kar chalna chahiyeh than a…oh god….ab chalo ( puts her left arm around his neck and holds her by her waist…)😉
Disha : ( who is finally standing) ouch…
Dk: tum chal to paongi na?…ya mein tumhe…😉
Disha: Nahi mein theek hoon. (she tries to take a step) Aw!
Dk: (worried) arre ..sambhal kar…tum rehne do..tumse nahi hoga…main hoon na…chalo..
He was about to pick her up when
Disha: (still angry)Nahi! Tumhe takleef karne Mein theek ho…(tries to take a step) Ouch!
Dk: (with a "Enough!" type of an expression..picks her up without saying anything😉…her one arm is already around his neck😉..the second one isn't )
Disha: (ziddi) Meine kaha na mein theek hoo….mujhe neeche utaro!
Dk: (no response)😆
Disha: (loosing her temper..almost screams) Meine kaha na muj… (dk cuts her off)
Dk: (loud, scary voice) Chup! Bahut ho gaya tumhara natak…jab dekho apni manmaani…(acting like disha) nahi mein theek hoo…My foot theek ho!....ek baar fracture ho jaata to pata chalta tumhe…chup chap bethi raho!…(shows her his badi badi aankhien)😆
Disha who is scared to death…shuts up…😆while Dk walks angrily, carrying disha of course...😉
After 5 minutes...
Disha: amm woh mien...
Dk: Chup raho!😆
Disha: (hurt, sad, cute expression...looks down)
DK:(touched) accha bolo..😳
Disha: (slow, soft, sad tone) Mein to sirf sorry bolne wali thi..
Dk: (smiless) It's ok..😳
Disha: ( worried) tum thak to nahi gaye?😆
Dk: (smiling.😆.shakes hsi head) Nahi to
Disha: R U sure?
Dk: Oh ya...don't worry..I gotch u😉
Disha: Waise mein...mein kuch zyada hi bhari hoon kya?
Dk: (laughs) Bhari? (laughs again)😆😆😆
Disha: Aree..usme hasne ki kya baat...agar mein bhari hoon to mujhe neeche utar to...mera mazak udane ki koi zarorat nahi hain
Dk: (smiing) Arre...tumhe kisna kaha ke tum bhari hoon?
Disha: Arre tumhi ne to kaha tha ke mein moti hoon
DK: (laughs) bhai meine aisa kab kaha?😆
Disha:(complaining) Kyun tumhi ne to kaha tha..ke mein kaunse chaki ka aata khati hoon...😆😆
DK: Accha wohhhhhhhhh
Disha: Yeh woh-woh kya kar rahe ho..kaha tha ke nahi?
Dk: ha lekin...
Disha: Kaha tha ke nahi!?!?!
Dk: ha ha..meri maa kaha tha..
Disha:
Bus..to utaro mujhe!
Dk: Aur mein na utaru to?😉
Disha: Kya matlab?
Dk: Matlab yeh tum bilkool moti nahi ho!
Disha: (smiles) Such?
Dk: Ha...tum kis angle se moti lagti hoon?
Disha: Pakka?..fir yeh mat kehna ke meri peet dukh rahi hain..jaise tumne pehle kaha tha😆
Dk: (laughs) Nahi kahonga..mein to mazak kar raha tha...aur agar tum moti hoti to bhi koi problem nahi 😉
Disha: Kyun? Tumhe ladkiyoh ko uthane ki adat ho gayi hain kya?😆
Dk: (laughs) Bhai ...ab mein itna lucky thodi na hoon😉
Disha: (disgusted) Sab mard...sab mard ek jaise hote hai..ek number ke hypocrites!😆😆
DK: To sab mard mein tumhara boyfriend bhi shamil hain na?😉
Disha: Ofcourse not!...woh tum sab mardo ki tarah nahi hain
Dk: Matlab? Woh ....normal hi hain na?😆
Disha: What ! Jaise tum soch rahe ho..waisa kuch nahi hain...woh normal hi hain
Dk: To fir theek hain..warna mein to dar gaya tha (laughs)
Disha: very funny! Thank god tumhari koi girlfrien nahi hain..
Dk: Tumse kisna kaha ke meri girlfriend nahi hain?😉
Disha: Kya? U must be
kidding...tumhare saath kaun apna time-waste karenga...aur waise bhi jo
ladki tumse pyaar karegi uska deemak check karana padega😆
Dk: ha ha ha...very funny...meri girlfriend ki to baat hi mat karo....
Disha: Kyun ? Badi miss world hain kya? (makes a face)
Dk: ( to himself) jal rahi hain..😆😆..ladki jali matlab patti😉...ab to aur jalana hi padega
Disha: (jealous)Usme kaunsi badi baat hain...aaj kal sab ladkiya slim and trim hi to hoti hain..(refering to herself😉)
Dk: ha lekin sab uski tarah khoobsurat thodi na hoti hain...
Disha: (who is burning with jealously just listens to him)😆
DK: Uski badi badi aankhien..aur uski zulfe....too sexy..just too sex( when disha cuts him)
Disha: Baal to sabhi ke hote hian...usme kaunsi badi baat hain...!😆
Dk:(in his own dream world) thirty-six ....-twenty four...thirty..
Disha: bus bus...mujhe aur nahi sunna.😆.waise bhi kisi ladki ke saamne kisi aur ladki ki taareef nahi karni chahiyeh.😉..its bad manners
Dk: (naughtily smiles) Kyun ? Tumne jalan ho rahi hain😉?
Disha: Mujhe kyun
jalan hone lagi? Tumhari girlfriend se mein kyun jalu?(make a face)
mein to apne boyfriend ke saath bahut khush hu!
Dk: Yeh tumhara boyfriend kyun baar baar beechme kabab mein haddi ki tarah aa jata hain😡?😆
Disha: Kyun? Agar tum apni
girlfriend ke baarme baat kar sakte ho...to mein apne botfriend ke
maare mein baat nahi kar sakti kya?..
Dk: (makes a face😡)
Disha: waise woh to lakho mein nahi carodo mein ek hain...pata hain woh 6 feet tall hain..😉
Dk:(jealous) Itne lambe ladke ka kya faida!
Disha: Oh shut up!..ha to mein kaha thi...ha...to woh lamba hi nahi itna handome..itna hansome hain..itna hansome ke kya kaho..😆.such mein bahut lucky ho jo mujhe aisa tall, dark, hansome ladka mila hain...😉
Dk: (to himself) Is lambu ko dekh na badega!
Disha: Arre kya soch rahe ho....kahi tum to jealuoussssss
Dk: (jealous)Mein aur jealous? what rubbish...Dk seghal kabhi kisise nahi jalta!
Disha: accha?😉
Dk: Aur nahi to kya! waise loog mujhse kaafi jealous hote hain...mein itna hot aur sexy jo ho😉
Disha: (laughs) Tumhe kisne keh dia ke tum...(cracks up again)
Dk: ha, ha hus lo! Lekin tum nahi jaanti ladkiya to din-raat mere peeche padi rehti hain...waise mein bachpan se hi aisa hu
Disha: (laughs)accha?😉
Dk: (making up a story)
Ha..mujhe yaad hain..ek baar maa ne mujhe sherwani pehna di thi..tab
mein shayad 7-8 ka tha...aur ladkiya kya bhagi mere peeche..ke mujhe to
apne kamre mein chup ke rehna pada
Disha: (who knows that he is bluffing)accha?😉
Dk: Tum yeh baar-baar
accha accha kyun keh rahi hoon...nahi maan na hain to mat maano...mujhe
kya! Waise ...mera aaj bhi jawaab nahi...
Disha: wok kaise?😉
Dk: aaj bhi ...agar mein ek baar bhi muskurao...to lakho khoobsurat ladkiya behosh ho jaayegi😉
Disha: Accha..(puts her hair behinf her ear) .lekin mujhe to aisa kuch nazar nahi aata...😉
Dk: Zaahir hain...kyunki mein sirf Khoobsurat ladkiyo ki baat kar raha tha!😆
Disha: Kya? (grabs his collar with both hands) Youuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuuu
Dk: (trying to save himself) Sorry sorry sorry sorry sorry...
She starts to hit him on his chest😉
Dk: (who is enjoying😉) arre...mein to mazaak...(she hits him more)mein to mazak kar raha tha..(hits hi more) arre..sorrry...i am sorry
Disha removes her hands from his collar and looks ahead
Dk: ( to himself) are paap re ..lagta hain tawa fir se garam ho gaya..😆
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