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Posted: 31 December 2012 at 12:47pm | IP Logged
Rusha, you write so flawlessly well!Tongue Enjoyed reading a lot.. I was visualising each scene while reading. Do update the next part soon..Big smile

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Posted: 01 January 2013 at 4:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sue_minaaa

Rusha, you write so flawlessly well!Tongue Enjoyed reading a lot.. I was visualising each scene while reading. Do update the next part soon..Big smile
Thanks Sue ... your compliments mean a lot to me !

BTW ... I'm Usha ! Smile

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Posted: 01 January 2013 at 4:43am | IP Logged
Originally posted by mariyakamran

Superb. Mithvi as hubby-wife LOL. they really act sometime as husband wife and indeed priest thought the same. Oh no now Prithvi will be in trouble. Hope nothing major happens. Please update soon Smile

BTW FINALLY I AM A 1STY ON YOUR POST

Thanks Mariya ! 

Dont worry Mithvi will not be in any trouble ... I can never write anything negative ! LOL 

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Originally posted by Absoluv

AWESOME writing.Clap..luved both the parts...Please do conitnue...

Thanks dear ... will continue soon !

BTW .. what do I call you ? I'm Usha ! Smile

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Posted: 01 January 2013 at 4:56am | IP Logged
HAPPY NEW YEAR to all my dear friends here ...

Here's my next update ... hope you'll find it good !

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Recap: 

"SHUT UP", she yelled." I don't want to hear any of your sorry excuses, Once again you tried to kill me and nothing you say or do will change that, just start the jeep and drive back, I'm going let Datha Thakur know about the callous and cruel behavior of his trusted lieutenant".

Part 3 ...

For a moment, Prithvi sat still, his hands gripping the steering wheel till his knuckles turned white. Then he closed his eyes, took a long breath and started the jeep again.

After a couple of miles, he stole a look at her and found her dozing. He noticed she hadn't got her seat belt fastened.  He slowed down to a halt, hoping she'd wake up, but she continued sleeping.

He leaned over to her side and gingerly pulled the seat belt towards the clamp. Suddenly she awoke with a start. Seeing his face  inches from hers, she screamed and he sprang back guiltily.

"I was just trying to fasten your seat belt, you had dozed off", he said defensively.

"You keep away from me", she hissed through gritted teeth, "I can take care of myself".

Once again he started the jeep and silence reigned between them.  Within an hour they reached the mansion of Datha Takur. He slowed down to a halt and jumped off the jeep. He walked over to her side and tried to help her out.

"Don't touch me", she glared at him. Slowly and painfully she got out of the jeep and limped into the house.

Sunheri was the first to reach her."Meera", she screamed, "Thank God you're well. We were so worried about you".

Hearing the commotion,  Kalki, Prabha and Lakhan too came over. Kalki and Lakhan were relieved that she was alive and they could continue their plot to trap Datha. Prabha helped Sunheri lead Meera to a seat.

Seeing that Datha was not there, Meera decided to keep quiet about Prithvi's misdeed. After all this was between her, Prithvi and Datha. No need to get everyone else involved, she decided.

"I want to go to my room, please", she requested Prabha.

"But, you're hurt badly," Sunheri protested. 

"I'll call our Doctor",  said Prabha and went over to the phone.

"I just need to rest, I'll be fine" Meera assured Sunheri.

And with a glare at Prithvi, which said this is not over yet, she slowly limped to the store room.

Lakhan caught that look between Meera and Prithvi and smiled gleefully. "So, Mr. Prithvi, the righteous '  did try to kill her after all. This is going to be fun, that girl will complain to Datha, let's see how Prithvi wriggles out of this one".

Meera gingerly lowered her aching body on her makeshift bed. She seemed to be aching all over. How she wished for a hot bath. She felt grimy and sticky all over.  

A tap on the door had Meera shoot up to a sitting position, she adjusted her dupatta, "God, there was absolutely no privacy here", she grumbled. It was Prithvi, and just as she began to yell at him again, she noticed he was carrying a large bucket of steaming hot water. He carried it into the bathroom behind the store room and placed it there.

"There's the water for your bath, it'll refresh you", he said softly, not looking into her eyes. "Please bolt the door of the store room and no one will disturb you".

Saying that he walked out of the room. "Prithvi being so kind ? to her ?? Unbelievable ! 

She was not going to be taken in by that, she decided. That was guilt speaking, he'll soon be back to his 'Mr. Stoneheart' avatar, she knew him well enough!

She picked up some fresh clothes and limped to the bathroom. As she poured the hot water over herself , she yelped, the cuts and bruises stung ! Cursing Prithvi once again, she carefully bathed her wounds, the wound on her calf was the worst, where the trap had bitten into her flesh. She needed to get a tetanus shot as soon as possible.

Soon she was resting on her hay-bed feeling quite refreshed. But she began feeling feverish again and her wounds throbbed with a dull pain. The effects of the priest's medicine had worn off she guessed. She tried to cover herself with her shawl and sleep, when she heard a knock on the door, feeling too weak to get up, she called, "Come in".

There was Prithvi with another man who undoubtedly was the doctor. She felt relived; at least she could get proper medical care now. After examining her doctor gave her a shot of tetnus and also some pills for the fever and pain. She noticed Prithvi had discreetly left the room when the doctor was examining her.

The doctor stood up and told her, "Please rest for a couple of days and you'll be fine". He then called out to Prithvi and told him to give her the medicines in time and also see that she had something to eat and plenty of fluids.

"I do not need him to look after me", she said coldly. "Please give me the pills and I will take them as per your instructions".

"My child, you are ill, and you need someone taking care of you. And you won't find a more gentle person than Prithvi for that" said the doctor.

"Well, you don't know him very well, do you? " muttered Meera and looked away.

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So... how was it ???   ... Eager to hear from you all ! Smile



Edited by rusha4003 - 01 January 2013 at 11:32am

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Posted: 01 January 2013 at 6:55am | IP Logged
Hiii Usha!! Tongue Loved it.. How I wish the CVs gave us something like this! I really didnt like Friday's episode much..Ermm I am really in love with this soft, sweet and caring Prithvi! Blushing Once again, kudos for the fabulous writing.. waiting for the next part!Tongue And, Happy New Year to you dear!!! Smile

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Posted: 01 January 2013 at 8:33am | IP Logged
Usha, you updated.  thank you.

LOVE LOVE LOVED it.  Your characterization is much better than the show.  The husband wife misunderstanding is great.

Can't wait to read more!!!

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Posted: 01 January 2013 at 8:34am | IP Logged
oh there is part 3 ...*runs back to read*

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