FF:ARISHA: Kabhi na kabhi..Pg143 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago

Awesommeee...
I think it was a breath of fresh air...I loved the way u have descibed them both...amazing...and last line is toh kya kehna!!😉

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ValleryRose

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Posted: 11 years ago

Nice one..!

Your work really raises my expectations from Ayesha.. But somehow in the show, I feel a glaring void in her character and she is not being properly used. I do love her attitude, her strength and her courage.. but there is still something missing. Something that is making me feel that she is disconnected from the team. Maybe, there is a story in that too.. Only time will tell!

Anyways enough with my rant! Looking forward to reading more!

So do PM me..! 😊

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vidya.anand

@vidya.anand

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: ValleryRose
Nice one..!
Your work really raises my expectations from Ayesha.. But somehow in the show, I feel a glaring void in her character and she is not being properly used. I do love her attitude, her strength and her courage.. but there is still something missing. Something that is making me feel that she is disconnected from the team. Maybe, there is a story in that too.. Only time will tell!
Anyways enough with my rant! Looking forward to reading more!
So do PM me..! 😊

yeah i do think she is not being used to the level of the image she has made for herself in her first episode...kuch toh choot raha hai...and thats exactly what i wish to write in this ss...

anyways, lets hope for the best in the show...😊

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shruti

@shrutisweety

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Posted: 11 years ago

sry for the late
wat an start yaar
both have full on atitude
continue soon

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Purva

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Posted: 11 years ago

Amazing start vidya di...

wo to acha hian ki maine vacation se aakar ..pages chk karte tym saw d story 😆

Looking fwd to it

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MystiqueDew

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Posted: 11 years ago

Aww ... Another works of yours ... wonderful !!!

Screen mein spark hai ya naa, lekin I can see it here ... just with the plot and character u have build !!!

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likitha

@Arakshi_Lover

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Posted: 11 years ago

it was superb!!!!!!!!!!!! i dont know abt others but i see a lot of chemistry between arjun and aisha!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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