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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 6:52am | IP Logged
Hi everybody. I am shahi and posting in this forum first time. Hoping to make you all happy though OS I wrote on Jeeka.Smile
 
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It was another evening and sun was saying good bye to day. This tearing last light of the day was adding to the beauty of nature. It was very silent evening. All birds were making noise and going back to their nest. The location was beside a small lake-a very silent and lifeless lake but a beautiful one. The cool breeze was touching each body giving gift to shiver on every second of breeze. It was chilled evening.

There was road near this lake and from where our young boxing champion Jeet was passing to go back to his home in his car. He kept the window of his car open to feel the cool breeze. He loved this cool breeze touching him while flowing. He was whistling in himself enjoying the evening. Just then he hears a silent and sad music sound touching his soul. The music was so tempting for him that he slows down the speed of the car and stop whistling. More the car was moving by more he can hear this sound clearly. The sound was very touchy. It was having some complain of loneliness from some heart. The music was shouting in these soulful and silent evening tearing all nature beauty and attracting everything towards it.

He was feeling the pain of this music and unknowingly a tears falls from his eyes. He raised his finger to take the beautiful pearls of tears on tip of his finger.  He heard hearing this music earlier too from a strange girl who always helps him and visualised a tempting and silent eyes of that girl which unknowingly or knowingly attracts him always.

He stopped the car and got down from car. Till now the darkness had started spreading his territory on lights but still lights were fighting back for its existence. It went pinkish glowing evening. The road was full covered with trees and deep inside it lays that lake which is known for its lifeless beauty. Apparently music was coming from its direction. He was so hypnotised of this music in such that he entered to this deep trees flowing to a tune of music. His ears were concentrating to music and each second of music was passing a string of shiver to his heart. Every time his hearts bit to this music ending bringing tears to his eyes unknowingly. More he was going near to music and more his eyes was filling with tears.

He reached to his destination of this tempting music. He saw a girl sat down beside a lake placing his hair on front and she was wearing a backless blouse with small string tied up for support hence giving every bit of air to touch beauty of her back. Her beauty of back was tempting and attractive for any guy to go near her. She was paying music from guitar which was placed on her lap. Jeet went more near from left side direction of girl founding her long straight hair placed on right shoulder. Her long hair which was hiding her half face was also adding to a beauty of her face and expressive eyes. Her beauty was out of this world. Her beauty was giving perfect complex to the nature and her red saree she wore was adding more to her tempted beauty. Jeet had never seen this beauty earlier. Jeet was observing her very attentively.  He stood to his place with no body parts ready to move- it was not her beauty that made him stood for a second but it was extreme pain in her eyes that made him stood there. The tears were flowing inside eyes but still it hadn't made a way to cheek. It seems that tears love to stay there on her eyes and it remained from years and years over there. These inflowing tears cracked Jeet's heart. He saw he was right and she is the same strange girl Anamika who helps him always.

He went more near to Anamika and then with this decreasing distance between them Anamika felt a warm body around her. This feeling stopped her to play with the strings of guitar but still she does not want to cut her eyes from guitar which was set there. Without looking at who is standing next to him she identified it is Jeet.

She said- "Ap yahan pe."

Jeet repliead- "Apki dhun khich layi mujhe, bohat dard hai ismien."

Anamika said- "Dard kismien nahin hota, as paas jahan dhekhoge wahan dard hi milega."

Jeet said - "Ap itni akeli kyun rehti hai. Apka koi saathi nahin hai kya. Itna darda, itna veeranapan, itna akelapan apke liye thik nahin hai. Ap sabse alag kyun rehti hai iss tarah."

Anamika replied back- "Kuch sawalo ke jawab nahin hote aur kuch jawabo ke sawal nahin hote."

Jeet said - "Apt oh paheli bhujane lagi."

Anamika replied- "Main khud ek paheli hoon jisse aj tak main khud suljha rahi hoon."

Jeet said - "Jee mujhe kuch samajhmien nahin aya."

Anamika said- "Acha hai, sayad hi koi mujhe samajh paye."

Jeet - "Lagta hai apke dil mien koi bohat gehre dard ne ghar kar diya hai."

Hearing this line Anamika looked at him with very possessive and obsessed eyes. She was speechless and she just kept looking at him. Then they shared an intense eye lock. Anamika's longing eyes were finding comfort and something special in Jeet's eyes which she lost many years back. There Jeet's eyes was figuring out this longing long eyes of Anamika's set on his eyes.  Then Jeet cut the eye lock and said-

"Ap dhun bohat acha bajati hai."

Anamika replied- "Sayad apke liye hi baja rahe ho."

Jeet said - "Jee"

Anamika replied - "Kuch nahin."

Then there was silence for a few second after which Anamika spoke and said -"Apne dhyan diya kis tarah hum bar bar ek dusre se takra jaate hai."

Jeet said- "Maine suna hai ke jab do insane bar bar ek dusre se takrate hai toh unka kuch gehra rishta hota hai."

Anamika looked at Jeet with sad eyes, She was pampering him from her intense eyes.

She said -"Kuch rishtey kabhi ban nahin sakte, wo mehej sirf juda hone ke liye hote hai isliye hum bhi takrate hai milte hai fhir fhirse juda ho jaate hai."

Jeet said- "Jee apki baatien mere pale padti hi nahin hai."

Anamika said - "Rehne dijiye, ap samajh bhi nahin paoge. Kuch baatien samajhne ke liye hote hai aur kuch baatien sunkarbhul jaane ke liye hote hai. Ap bhi bhul jaye jo bhi humne kaha apse."

She again looked at him after saying this above line. Jeet was confused and looked at her as if finding to know this strange girl. Anamika understood his finding eyes and she broke the ice and spoke up  -"Ap koi gaana gaate ho."

Jeet replied - "Gee, gaana haan gaata hoon par itni khaas awaz nahin hai."

Anamika said- "Toh aj hum dhun bajate hai aur ap gaana gaayen."

Saying this she started playing music from haunted movie - jaaniya.

Her eyes were set on guitar string waited for Jeet's voice. She started playing and with this a drop of tears trapped on her eyelashes finding a way out to fall but not able to fall.

Jeet started singing - "Dil suntan hai, teri sadaa."

He sang this much and hesitated to sing further. He stopped and said -"Nahin mujhse nahin hoga."

Lost Anamika in his voice wokes up like a thousand current has been given to her. She blinked her eyes so strongly that her trapped tears found it way to fall down on strings of guitar.

She said - "Gayine ap acha ga rahe hai."

She looked at him with pleading eyes wanting him to continue singing. His voice was giving her very relief and sudden stop of his voice had frustrated her. There was silence for a moment. No birds, no nature sound was disturbing them as they kept looking each other's eyes. Her pleaded eyes forced him to sing again.

"Dil sunta hai, teri sadaa"

(As he said this line Anamika came from her lost world and gave a sweet and small smile. Then she looked down to her guitar and started playing it.)

"Aa ru ba ru, ab toh zara"

(with this above line she got so lost that she closed her eyes breaking herself from whole natural sound just hearing his voice.)

"Bechain si, meri zindagi
Sunn kar teri, yeh dastaan"

(Jeet looked at this lost Anamika. He was trying to understanding this relief that Anamika getting from his voice.)

"Jeena mera aasan kar, tu mil ke yeh ehsaan kar"

(A unknown tears comes to Jeet's eyes once again and he dried his eyes. Now he was confused what was it that made him cry?)

 

"Kahin kho gaya chain oh sukoon, tere dard ko ab jaan kar"

(Now Jeet lost in the song totally and he raised his voice. He closed his eyes and looked above to sky.)

"Jaaniya o jaaniya, bas roye dil mera
Aasu palkon pe nahin hai bewajah
Dil hai gum zyadaa jaaniya"

Hearing this lost and raised voice of Jeet Anamika opened her eyes and looked at him. She looked at him so passionately that as if she was looking at him after so many years and may be this is her last glance of a day today before separating. A drop of tears made a way to her cheeks again. She now stopped playing guitar but Jeet continued singing.

"Jaaniya o jaaniya, din kya raat kya
Aahat ho koi, lagta hai sadaa
Ke tu hai wahan jaaniya
"

Jeet completed the above line and opened his eyes very excitingly to see Anamika's reaction on his song. The darkness was ruling till now defeating light. His eyes were filled with undropped tears and so he cannot see properly. He rubbed his eyes and then opens it for clear view. He was shocked to see that he was all alone left there sitting with no one around him. He looked around but he did not found Anamika around him. He was confused with this act and with lot of questions he set back to go home.

-----The End----

Some relations and some happenings have no special names to their bonding but still they are attached with invisible string. They are far from each other but have a very deep connection with each other just like Jeeka have.



Edited by emptyworld - 29 December 2012 at 7:02am

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 7:27am | IP Logged
Very nice OS.

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 7:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by elasingh

Very nice OS.
Thanks dear EmbarrassedHug

Edited by emptyworld - 29 December 2012 at 7:42am

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 7:41am | IP Logged
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gud to see u here
lovely os , i really liked itClap

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 7:43am | IP Logged
very niceClap O.S. on Jeeka EmbarrassedStar

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Originally posted by hifzaa

shahiHug
gud to see u here
lovely os , i really liked itClap
 
HifzaaHug I am also happy to see you here.Big smile Thanks EmbarrassedHug

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Originally posted by lizzie1765

very niceClap O.S. on Jeeka EmbarrassedStar
Thanks dear EmbarrassedHug

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Posted: 29 December 2012 at 7:54am | IP Logged
Originally posted by emptyworld

Originally posted by hifzaa

shahiHug
gud to see u here
lovely os , i really liked itClap
 
HifzaaHug I am also happy to see you here.Big smile Thanks EmbarrassedHug
haha han tera peecha kar rae thi
yaha ati hoon kbhi kbhi jab chudail ka ep ho , tum bi jeeka loverEmbarrassed

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