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NiraliVirika

@NiraliVirika

Senior Member

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Posted: 11 years ago

Wow! That was pretty long

I took a while to read this update

But it was beyond amazing!

Poor Zaaine..waiting to be cuddled by his mommy..

I really wanted Viren Jeevika to spend sometime together..

I hope the next part does have a lot of romance!

In short, I absolutely loved this update!

Continue soon

Thanks for the PM

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shweta_14

@shweta_14

Groupbie

Posted: 11 years ago

U have left me Awestruck..!!! Viren-Jeevika-Zaaine..!! Perfect family <3

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Sarah Ashraf

@aa_mnhs

Senior Member

Posted: 11 years ago

z - "Mommy me pat daa to sleep?"

z - "Daa me pat your head cause you tired"

z - "Mommy want hug? You feel better"

z - "okay daa" he said crawling towards the end of the bed where Viren was standing. He gave him a tight hug.

Most definitely the cutest baby ever, and the best update EVER!

Jeevika seeing both her favourite boys sleeping right next to her, and not very happy. will this cause jeevika to set her priorities again? will she put her family on top, and not give too much time to work? i'm very eagerly and anxiously waiting for the next update.

Thanks a ton for the double treat today ;) love you loads for this.

Sarah

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Marzii

@Marzii

IF-Rockerz

Posted: 11 years ago

wow thank yo so much for the supre duper long update

we can tell it took lot of ur time for this upddate

it wwas amazingly written, great job Karina

VIRIKA+Zaaine=perfect family

Zaaine is too cute i swear, just love him

please continue soon..cant wait for more

till than will read this update over and over again😃

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Anjali

@cutiepie2244

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey dear it was damn awesome update... loved it 2 the core😊😊... i can't even tell u that how much i loved this update👏👏... it was a longer one.. n i just wanna thank u 4 this... whole update was superb... awww again i will say that ZAAINE is way too cute... he is really a sweety pie..😊😊😊... i just didn't like the way viren behaved with him... after all he is a kid... he is way too small to understand such big things... viren was acting childish... zaaine is too small n he is after all neglected by his parents due to their work... Viren should understand him... i don't liked the way he treated with zaaine... he should understand that from now zaaine is his first priority... i will again say that it was at all an awesome update... thanxx 4 the pm... continue ASAP dear...😊😊😊

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SJ6...

@SJ6...

Goldie

Posted: 11 years ago

wooow honestly this was sooo long and loved it,

i wanna know what wrong with zaaine or is it just that hes missing jeevika alot, pooor him...

xxx

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Shicksha

@romanticgurl070

Goldie

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Posted: 11 years ago

wow

no words to describe how beautifully u wrote it, AWESOME

haaye love zaaine he is so cute always caring for his parents...

his mood was a bit off bcoz he wanted to b with jeevs, when he asked for the puppy, jeevs told him the puppy need to b with his mom, n he said "Like me need my mommy", this line was a bit touching, it clearly shows how much he wants to b with his mommy :(

viren wants some time with jeevs n he got irritated n upset when zaaine wanted to sleep with them, aww poor viren, but he is right at his place :)

gosh zaaine is a good boy but he got scared of viren when he refused to carry him downstairs... plz if its possible include more viren n zaaine scenes, such that he is really scared of viren the next morning n always trying to b with jeevs as he is scared that viren might scold him...

looking forward for next update soon

Edited by romanticgurl070 - 11 years ago

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Princyptl

@Princyptl

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Posted: 11 years ago

OMGGG! WHERE SHOULD I START FROM!?
I LOVE IT HOW YUH EXPLAIN EVERYTHING PERFECTLY NOT MORE NOT LESS JUST PERFECT..
IN SOOO MUCHHH LOVE WITH THIS UPDATE.
I love the bonding between Zaaine nd his Mom nd Dad..
Love it the way he just wanted to be with Jeevika all day long! :))))))))
ALREADY READ IT 4 TIMES BTW STILL CANNT GET ENOUGH OF IT..
ITS GONNA BE LIKE MY BED TIME STORY NOW...
I LOVE YUR WRITING SKILLS...
A BIGG HUG! :))))))))))))

YOU ARE JUST AMAZING <3 <3 👏

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