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Posted: 09 January 2013 at 3:40am | IP Logged
You know what it's so difficult to comment on your ff's :P

Man I don't have words.

P.E.R.F.E.C.T 

It's amazing

Cont soon 

Thanks for the pm

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Posted: 09 January 2013 at 3:59am | IP Logged
Hey!
Double update, yeyeyeyeyeyeyeye!

Chapter 5:
Awesome, loved the way how your mind struck for such an idea,

Pizza box? Woah man! Felt so great, i mean you write so well that i can imagine it whole! And when the couples were hugging each other!

And obviously Jeevika got another chance to tease Viren for the proposal! Lol

I loved how they treat each other as family, and the part when the little boy woke when they were exhausted, 
Frieends, even i love it, and how she hugs him, and he kisses, 
Aww!
A lot sweet update, was able to imagine jeevika in tracks and baby with his head resting,

Chapter 6:
Shoot!
So high? 

Jeevika came out to be so much of a caring mother, 

I mean she was the one, who never wanted to be one.

Really loved how you brought up this thing,
How manvi helped her through the packing,

I loved it,its so like that i can imagine it whole!

And yeas, thanks for the pm!! Smile

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Posted: 09 January 2013 at 4:19am | IP Logged
the updatw was just awesome 
ppor zaaine 
hope he recovers soon 
waiting for the weddding 
thanx for the pm

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Posted: 09 January 2013 at 4:33am | IP Logged
Awesome update...
awww how virat proposed manvi...so guud...
then JV and zaaine scenes really nicely written...
Jeevika has become such a caring mother hard to believe she was the one who didn't want to be a mother...but awesome...
Hope zaaine gets well soon...
All going to  Karan and Zoya's wedding.eager to read the next parts...
you are an awesome writer...
Continue soon and thnx 4 d pm...:)

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Amazing updates yar and virika are so perfect parents plz continue soon

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Posted: 09 January 2013 at 5:01am | IP Logged
thanks for double update
superb
continue soonWink

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Posted: 09 January 2013 at 5:29am | IP Logged
aww a beautiful treat for us by two updates :) loving it so much :D :D
 
Thank you so much !!!!!!!
 
i really dont find any words to say ... it was really superb ..
 
How can you write so beautifully?

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