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ARSHI SS: Heart's A Mess NOTE* PG 146 15/4* - Page 37

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Posted: 11 years ago
waiting for the  update😊.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Fell in love with Arnav Singh Raizada all over again:D
7 hours!:O He's really  fallen deep:P
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Posted: 11 years ago
great chapter
sorry 4 late comment 
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Posted: 11 years ago
OhMyGod!!  He waited for her for 7 goddamn hours..

He's awesome!!  I wish i would get someone like him..

And the update was super awesome!!!

I was so happy when i got a PM from you..

And it was for HAM.. I missed this story.. I'm so glad that you updated this soon..

Cant wait to read the next update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice 1
Shagun z right nobody z perfect n to maintain a relationship we hv to adjust n sumtyw compromise well i think khushi got d msg
Hey was anjali ill r z ill?
Aww loved d waiting secenario it melted my heart
I like these small gestures in a relation
Thanx 4 dis update dt was soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

"Gupta hurry up! My balls are freezing and that won't be good for our future children."

If Khushi's hands were shivering before, it was nothing compared to now. Whipping around she snapped…

"Would you shut it for just one second!"

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Posted: 11 years ago
🤣 lol now impatient to read the chapter..., nice..
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Posted: 11 years ago
LOL!!! 😆 Khushi seems to be applyi,g hands to newer things...😉 u know her shivering says so! 😆😆 
waiting for u to update 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
seriously arnav is talking about children ...their as in khushi and his children 🤣
now i am getting restless to read more.
update already sasak.
yeh intezaar ab mujhse nahi hoti!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
I am so glad to find that you have decided to give some time to HAM. I read one update yesterday but for some reason I couldn't comment on it. BTW why can't we comment on blog itself? Anyway that's not much of a bother. I loved the update. I loved the way they danced. And yes it warmed my heart to see that Khushi is surrounded by the people who genuinely care for her. Isn't it very difficult have such people around you. In that respect I feel that Khushi is blessed though it doesn't compensate all the pain she has been through. 

I would like to confess I didn't expect you to update HAM this soon and it feels like a present. In this update, I especially loved the restlessness that Khushi displayed. BTW who would be able to resist men like Arnav?  As i read the chapter I remembered you mentioning that this story has sadness and I sense it somehow pressed under the surfaces. I loved Arnav and fact that he waited for hours for Khushi was really cute, I mean really cute. And the Khushi kissing Arnav was even cuter. Loving the story and looking forward to every bits and portions of it.